What do you think is missing the most? (Won't include h-scenes they come with the next update)

  • More world building

  • More renders (Makes updates take longer!)

  • More character developement

  • More plot progression

  • Better renders (Makes updates take longer!)

  • Everyting above

  • It's fine as it is now


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hgffdh

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In your catgirl example that's Rumi's whole family.
No, I meant Kiku and those other catgirls that hang out with all the "baddies". They look really similar.

Now to the bad endings: The game focuses on the story. MC ending in a trap with no escape well... means a bad end. She can't continue her Keeper job if she's heavily pregnant all the time/a slave/cum addicted and so on. And a monster eggpregnating the MC... I'm pretty sure you notice it if your belly is suddenly swollen and heavy... and if she somehow doesn't... her friends would notice. just saying. That's over the top unrealistic.
No, my point was that getting into bad encounters shouldnt necessarily mean death or inescapable entrapment. Parasitic entities in real life tend to adapt to their hosts so that they dont kill them off as that destroys their own food source. I'd assume all those magical monsters that prey on passing sapients would also adapt to be non-lethal and not permanently incapacitating, as being too lethal would either invoke harsh response from sapients or cut into the population of those sapients or whatnot. To take harpy as an example - why would she bother keeping her captured mate in the nest entire time? That requires constant upkeep. Better just rape them for a few days then let them go after ensuring pregnancy, that way a harpy would be able to have multiple pregnant mates at any point of time instead of just one without spending any effort into feeding them. Similarly, paying an eggnancy toll to pass some area guarded by spiders would be a better deal for spiders than capturing a few clueless passersby and eventually nearby settlement coming to burn their whole forest down.

As for the story... well I wanted to write a lot but I doubt you'd like my complaints so I'll just say that I tried, but couldnt get invested.
 

Lumari

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No, I meant Kiku and those other catgirls that hang out with all the "baddies". They look really similar.



No, my point was that getting into bad encounters shouldnt necessarily mean death or inescapable entrapment. Parasitic entities in real life tend to adapt to their hosts so that they dont kill them off as that destroys their own food source. I'd assume all those magical monsters that prey on passing sapients would also adapt to be non-lethal and not permanently incapacitating, as being too lethal would either invoke harsh response from sapients or cut into the population of those sapients or whatnot. To take harpy as an example - why would she bother keeping her captured mate in the nest entire time? That requires constant upkeep. Better just rape them for a few days then let them go after ensuring pregnancy, that way a harpy would be able to have multiple pregnant mates at any point of time instead of just one without spending any effort into feeding them. Similarly, paying an eggnancy toll to pass some area guarded by spiders would be a better deal for spiders than capturing a few clueless passersby and eventually nearby settlement coming to burn their whole forest down.

As for the story... well I wanted to write a lot but I doubt you'd like my complaints so I'll just say that I tried, but couldnt get invested.
So who ensures the harpy that the girl she impregnated really gives birth to the child? (And it would be logical to do an abortion if your dream is to become a Keeper) And if I'd go that path then there would be complaints again that there was no consequence again. (and I can't give the player a choice in that because the story doesn't allow it. But if you, and others. want to know: pregnancy will be possible in Keepers 2. Late game though but yeah. I took critisism about that so that's why I'll implement it.)
Of course in general there are dimensions in which creatures like harpies/spiders do this. But your two examples happen in an experimental area where the goal of those creatures is to capture the students, ending their carrier.
We could probably argue a lot longer about this but let's just say... we're both right and wrong.
Also I am actually interested in your complaints about the story. I know it's not perfect so if there's anything I could improve on please tell me~
 

KuraScropia

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Jun 26, 2018
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Ah, yes, self inflicted masochism. I was so immersed in the visual novel that a few good hours went by; I can say this is a pretty good VN.

However, I'm at the middle ground where I can drop this cold turkey and not look back because I really do see where this is going. I can also keep going because I do have some sense of obligation to see this decent VN end.

How conflicting. either way - kudos to the dev.
 
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Android auto shuts down when opened , pc has error if u save when using joiplay :( i wanna play this game
Can't speak as to why its not working with Joiplay. I did recompile the android version from the mac version though and the mac version is working fine for me. I don't have an android device to test it on so I tried using android studio and emulating a few devices all of which crash. I'm wondering if its a ram issue so bare with me while i try and convert the PNG's to webp and recompile it, that's getting a little over my head since i'm not sure if i'll have to figure out how to change all the extensions over in the code or not so we'll see if i can figure that one out. but hey it'll be a good thing to learn for the future

EDIT-
I've figured it out, apk's can't be over 1GB. Which means I've also had to figure out how to compress everything to then recompile it and it works! Bright side I now have a compressed a version for PC/Linux/Mac/Android that comes in at around 800mb~ average size across them all down from the 1.25Gb when uncompressed. I'll update my previous post and links after the uploads finish. Should be in around 30 minutes
 
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xgodjihyo

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Can't speak as to why its not working with Joiplay. I did recompile the android version from the mac version though and the mac version is working fine for me. I don't have an android device to test it on so I tried using android studio and emulating a few devices all of which crash. I'm wondering if its a ram issue so bare with me while i try and convert the PNG's to webp and recompile it, that's getting a little over my head since i'm not sure if i'll have to figure out how to change all the extensions over in the code or not so we'll see if i can figure that one out. but hey it'll be a good thing to learn for the future

EDIT-
I've figured it out, apk's can't be over 1GB. Which means I've also had to figure out how to compress everything to then recompile it and it works! Bright side I now have a compressed a version for PC/Linux/Mac/Android that comes in at around 800mb~ average size across them all down from the 1.25Gb when uncompressed. I'll update my previous post and links after the uploads finish. Should be in around 30 minutes
Tyvm :) works like a charm! Hope all the devs r like you! Highly appreciate it!
 
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Lurkin23

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I'm not sure if the dev or anyone cares but I compiled it for Android. It should work but I don't have an android device to test. I also haven't played it yet I just kind of go through the "newly updated" section and see if anything Ren'Py is missing Mac/Android versions. If theres other games anyone would like compiled just shoot me a DM and I'll try my best.

*EDIT*
Ok so previous android versions were broken because they were over 1Gb SO i had to figure out how to compress everything and recompile it, which I did! We now have working android versions and since it had to be compressed anyways i recompiled Windows/Linux and a Mac version as well. Average size is around 800mb down from 1.25GB of the original. Used 100% quality from png to webm.
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Ummm... the download on the OP is 402.36 MB so why is the "compressed" version 864.1 MB for PC?
 

Lumari

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New: Version 0.5b!






Important to note for this update:
-v0.1 rework part 1:The quality of renders will vary heavily in this version. Some scenes have completely new renders~

-New tag: Vore! (it's a soft vore scene and I got told it's not as bad as it sounds. There's no pain involved and it is handled in a low/funny manner. Also: It's SKIPABLE!~)

I updated screenshots and changelog already (for the mods!)
 
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Ummm... the download on the OP is 402.36 MB so why is the "compressed" version 864.1 MB for PC?
the original one was roughly 1.25gb that i compressed down from. Dev must have updated/resubmitted links and commpressed the game further after my post.

also heres an android version for the newly dropped 0.5b version
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Lumari

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the original one was roughly 1.25gb that i compressed down from. Dev must have updated/resubmitted links and commpressed the game further after my post.

also heres an android version for the newly dropped 0.5b version
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I don't know what you downloaded (and uploaded there and I for sure won't test your stuff no offence though) But not a single update was larger than ~550mb. I have a copy of every single version I made: Every update added about 50mb to the game. I compress all images since version 0.1 so there is no way that you got an 'official' version from me wich is 1.25gb big. Just saying~
 

Dix Dark

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Sep 28, 2019
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I didn't expect a softlock(bad ending with no escape) in this kind of game.
I also didn't expect stats to do something besides affecting lewd scenes(didn't see the effect on them, actually).
And I've never thought that the "text skipping simulator"(AND where you can play only the lesbian path(?..)) can get my attention for more than 5 minutes, but here we are for some reason.

I kinda like this game, that's unusual to such an extent that I even wrote this post...

I'm not sure where I'm going with this, so I'll just click "post" now.
 
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I don't know what you downloaded (and uploaded there and I for sure won't test your stuff no offence though) But not a single update was larger than ~550mb. I have a copy of every single version I made: Every update added about 50mb to the game. I compress all images since version 0.1 so there is no way that you got an 'official' version from me wich is 1.25gb big. Just saying~
I couldn't tell you to be honest, I would have downloaded it from a link in OP though. Once i run UAGC to compress stuff and upload it I delete it on my pc. All i know is I tried to make an android version that wouldn't run because it was larger than 1gb, judging by my post it says it was around 1.25gb which lead me on a journey to figure out how to run a VM on my mac then get UAGC even working to compress it in the first place. I went through my history but every gofile link from Oct 10th-13th which is how long it took me to figure out how to do that to get a working android version of your game is no longer working and neither are the mega links in your 0.5a post so I'm at a loss. I'm also unsure of what you're trying to say/accuse me of? Why and where else would i have downloaded the game only to try and be helpful and make an android version and subsequently compressed versions for mac/pc to post to the official thread if i didn't download it from here in the first place? Seems more reasonable to me that you could have forgotten to compress the game before uploading one single time then it does to accuse me of whatever it is you're trying to do. Just saying~
How do you extract and get it to work?
You don't extract it, just download and install it like any other apk.
 

Lumari

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I couldn't tell you to be honest, I would have downloaded it from a link in OP though. Once i run UAGC to compress stuff and upload it I delete it on my pc. All i know is I tried to make an android version that wouldn't run because it was larger than 1gb, judging by my post it says it was around 1.25gb which lead me on a journey to figure out how to run a VM on my mac then get UAGC even working to compress it in the first place. I went through my history but every gofile link from Oct 10th-13th which is how long it took me to figure out how to do that to get a working android version of your game is no longer working and neither are the mega links in your 0.5a post so I'm at a loss. I'm also unsure of what you're trying to say/accuse me of? Why and where else would i have downloaded the game only to try and be helpful and make an android version and subsequently compressed versions for mac/pc to post to the official thread if i didn't download it from here in the first place? Seems more reasonable to me that you could have forgotten to compress the game before uploading one single time then it does to accuse me of whatever it is you're trying to do. Just saying~
First of all: I didn't accused you of anything. I only said that something seems to be wrong. Try to see it from my perspective:
A random person posts an android version and claims he had to compress it from 1.25gb. I am 99% sure that I always compress all images. Takes too long to upload already and people always complain about big file sizes which did not happen. In addition to that: Even my playtesters always get a compressed version. If I make a mistake I always stand up for it (and did in the past with bugs and so on...)

So all I did was telling people that I don't vouch for it and that it really seems 'suspicious' from my perspective, because again: I am 99% sure that there was never such a big file size in my renpy folder (99% because there is always a posibility of human error. On mine and on your side as well). If you were me you would probably have done the same. And of course I'm interested in keeping my playerbase save, that should be understandable.

If you say the truth then sorry. But from what I can tell it seems something isn't right. If this does hurt your feelings then that's your problem. I never intended to accuse or attack you~
 

molitar

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Uggh! Fuck this shit! I hate fucking sicko writers that write this shit! kill her love Rumi! Kill everyone! Fuck this shit.. this shit has gone on my shit list! Deleted this shit!

WHO THE FUCK WOULD WANT TO BE A FUCKING KEEPER WITH SICK SHIT THAT IS SICKER THAN ANY CULTIVATOR NOVELS! THIS IS SICK DEMENTED SICKO SHIT!
 

Ven95

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I think that's called drama, and spoilers for gods sake, please at least say that before you get into details.

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I also don't get why this even is a porn game, the story is fine, but whenever there actually is some sexy action, it's more distracting than anything else.
 
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Lumari

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New version 0.6a is ready~

Pc:

Mac:

Android:


Have fun~
 

jireir

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There's a lot good to be said about this game. After playing 0.5b I felt like there was a gaping hole that was torn in my chest after seeing the events unfold in such a way. Absolutely marvelous and it's not a very common feat at all.

Having said that there are some criticisms that I have. Please try to get rid off getting hard locked via stats. I really didn't expect that having sanity be too low can cause the player to be locked from advancing in the game. I was under the impression that the stats would probably just affect how some scenes go.

That is just about my only criticism of it. Other than that this is a really interesting and very, very dark story(which was honestly rather unexpected).

Keep up the good work.
 
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