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VN Ren'Py Abandoned Kindread: The Redburns [Ch. 5] [Inkalicious]

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anonim138

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I must say I'm immensly disappointed. I was actually suprised how mature this game was for first three acts concerning the sexual behavior, and it felt like the characters would slowly develop their awkward feelings to eachother over the next chapters, and then somehow work it out in the end. I applaud porn games games that go a different route than the standard "immediately falling on a dick" scenario, and I was really enjoing the writing. But then chapter 4 came, and all that fucking character development went out of the window. Both girls become suddenly sluts for no apparent reason. I don't know what are the circumstances of the author, but I feel like this game got the same treatment as Two Weeks. It's such a damn shame.
 
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HydratedMan

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I must say I'm immensly disappointed. I was actually suprised how mature this game was for first three acts concerning the sexual behavior, and it felt like the characters would slowly develop their awkward feelings to eachother over the next chapters, and then somehow work it out in the end. I applaud porn games games that go a different route than the standard " immidiately falling on a dick" scenario, and I was really enjoing the writing. But then chapter 4 came, and all that fucking character development went out of the window. Both girls become suddenly sluts for no apparent reason. I don't know what are the circumstances of the author, but I feel like this game got the same treatment as Two Weeks. It's such a damn shame.
bruh have more attention, there is an obvious time-skip in-game.
 
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anonim138

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bruh have more attention, there is an obvious time-skip in-game.
Where exactly? I'm playing the incest version. At the end of chapter 3 sister assaults mc and gets caught by mother which ends in really well written scene where she reveals shes lesbian. Then the script completely gets off the rails. Sister reveals that she was a slut all along and all is well. Mother and sister are suddenly on ok terms and want to bang the mc. I'm skimming the rest of the chapters but in every goddamn scene theres at least one sex scene. Either I'm missing some detail or something ain't right. It feels like those movies where the lead director changes halfway through production and tries to reshoot already existing scenes (e.g. Whedon Justice League/ Hancock).
 
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Bloodguard

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This is not a movie, it's a porn game. But your comment does a great job of illustrating that no matter what a Dev does, someone is going to be pissed.
But who the hell complains about sex in a porn game? That is just bizarre. :unsure: This has some of the hottest scenes I have seen in an AVN, and I'm very glad we didn't have to wait 4 years to get them. ;)
 

anonim138

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This is not a movie, it's a porn game. But your comment does a great job of illustrating that no matter what a Dev does, someone is going to be pissed.
But who the hell complains about sex in a porn game? That is just bizarre. :unsure: This has some of the hottest scenes I have seen in an AVN, and I'm very glad we didn't have to wait 4 years to get them. ;)
Well it's just my genuine critique. Nothing to get excited about. Maybe I'm just getting too old for this shit. I don't play the porn games for the porn part anymore, but to kill time. Some of them have better writing or gameplay ideas than modern AAA titles.
 
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Bloodguard

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I don't play the porn games for the porn part anymore, but to kill time.
Well, I have donated billions of children to the lewd scenes in this game, so we definitely play it for different reasons. ;)
I have issues with live action porn, so AVNs are guilt free fapping. Pixels are not someone's daughter. :giggle:
I also thought the writing in this game was very high quality, and the buildup to sex just about perfect, but I skip eternal blueballs like Deluca Family and Hillside because they are pretty pointless to me.
If I want great writing, I'll read a book. Need some Porn in my Porn games. (y)
 

HillDweller

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If I want great writing, I'll read a book. Need some Porn in my Porn games.
since we're talking personal preferences, I need porn in my porn as well, but if I wanted hardcore porn, I'll get on an Xtube.
Nowadays I veer more into porn games because the interactive fantasy can be orders of magnitude stronger than with linear real life porn, when done right.

Which is why great writing is paramount. As soon as a game gets to the sex part, if it's just low effort tropes, my dick flatlines and I lose interest.
IMO this game is one of the best written out there. The mom's personality and her occasional slut gaze at the player is a bigger turn on than even the best 3D modeling and posing.

and I'm very glad we didn't have to wait 4 years to get them.
THIS; pace is one thing, but 1. I've come to hate predictable linearity (handjob -> titjob -> blowjob -> pussy -> anal) and 2. the line between tantalizing and annoying teasing is very thin. Fuck waiting 1 year for penetration, life is short.
 
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Readyforwhat

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Well,guys. I don't know Where you are living and what time is it right now in your area. But for me, today is the last day of 2021. TIme flies,it's been a long time since we play the same game and meet together in this forum. I played this game this year and it met my fetish just right, I really admire Ink and wanna say thanks to him,his text in the game was amazing, I really enjoy it and I hope you guys could too. This year we all eagerly waiting for the next update from Ink and it will definitely come next year. So, I wish you guys could all keep healthy and stay in a good condition! So we can talk about the story plot about the new update here! In the end, I'm so glad I can meet you guys here. And hey, Happy New Year 2022!!!
 

jackkane

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I like how ppl are calling this game a scam on the itch page despite the fact that the dev is not accepting money for it.

This has to be the worst effort to scam patrons I've ever seen. Ed Edd and Eddy would do a better job.
ed edd and eddy I love that show man. if there was an adult game for the show the kanker sisters would have edd tied up in a basement.
 
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BigBeef

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I would really love to see more (female) urination content in this game, it can be a good opener for more sexy scenes if you want to use it like that. The game has a good charm to it's characters and I love the zombie setting. Even though the wait for the next update is excruciating, as is everything you really enjoy and want more of, but just think, the more Inky takes there time to put into development, the more the chance of a better quality update :)
 
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BadBard

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I would really love to see more (female) urination content in this game, it can be a good opener for more sexy scenes if you want to use it like that. The game has a good charm to it's characters and I love the zombie setting. Even though the wait for the next update is excruciating, as is everything you really enjoy and want more of, but just think, the more Inky takes there time to put into development, the more the chance of a better quality update :)
If there is more content about urination, I would like to be able to refuse it, as in the scene about disinfecting a scratch on Sam's leg. Everyone has their own fetishes. It is important that they are not necessarily imposed. So far, everything suits me personally in the game.
 
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If there is more content about urination, I would like to be able to refuse it, as in the scene about disinfecting a scratch on Sam's leg. Everyone has their own fetishes. It is important that they are not necessarily imposed. So far, everything suits me personally in the game.
I think the leg scene is there as a tester for you to decide if you want to see more later. So if you refused it you wont be shown more. I'm pretty sure Ink said words to that effect somewhere earlier in this thread.
 

inkalicious

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I must say I'm immensly disappointed. I was actually suprised how mature this game was for first three acts concerning the sexual behavior, and it felt like the characters would slowly develop their awkward feelings to eachother over the next chapters, and then somehow work it out in the end. I applaud porn games games that go a different route than the standard "immediately falling on a dick" scenario, and I was really enjoing the writing. But then chapter 4 came, and all that fucking character development went out of the window. Both girls become suddenly sluts for no apparent reason. I don't know what are the circumstances of the author, but I feel like this game got the same treatment as Two Weeks. It's such a damn shame.
Ah. Again this is all to do with my sloth-like production. The original intention was that you'd briefly schlep along with this needy perv then *WHAM!* His wet dreams come true. So a slow burn to... what now?
Don't laugh, but Chapters 1-4 were always a prelude of sorts. You make your choices and reap the rewards. Or what you sow.

However there are more choices to be made and we've reached the beginning of 'what now' in the last chapter. Spinning plates are wobbling. Chickens are coming home to roost. Erections are fading in the onslaught of flesh.

But it is a porn game, so we'll need to accept any fleshy onslaught.
 

Larry2000

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Ah. Again this is all to do with my sloth-like production. The original intention was that you'd briefly schlep along with this needy perv then *WHAM!* His wet dreams come true. So a slow burn to... what now?
Don't laugh, but Chapters 1-4 were always a prelude of sorts. You make your choices and reap the rewards. Or what you sow.

However there are more choices to be made and we've reached the beginning of 'what now' in the last chapter. Spinning plates are wobbling. Chickens are coming home to roost. Erections are fading in the onslaught of flesh.

But it is a porn game, so we'll need to accept any fleshy onslaught.
I'm glad you're still so engaged in this project. It took so long that I figured it was over. I have a folder in my PC where I keep games that I can't EVER delete from my PC (until a new update of course) one of them is The Redburns. This game, as the poster commented on, has an incredible slow burn that really sets EVERYTHING up and it hits so hard after that, that you almost get whiplash.

I still contend, I've never had a better build up perverseness than in this game. I forget the characters names since it's been a billion years since I played, but the sister's scenes are stupid incredible and the Mom... I just want her to be happy, but the MC is being a bit of a dick lately :mad:

I want him to appreciate her more! And then the girl in the wheelchair, she's so sweet :) I really like what you've made and appreciate that you're still chugging along regardless of pace :D thanks so much for everything!
 

inkalicious

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If there is more content about urination, I would like to be able to refuse it, as in the scene about disinfecting a scratch on Sam's leg. Everyone has their own fetishes. It is important that they are not necessarily imposed. So far, everything suits me personally in the game.
As Captain Feather mentioned, the 'disinfecting' incident is your chance to step into, or avoid, the watersports arena. However, I'm nothing if not a coward.
So if you did decide it was nice to play medic, then you'll be given one more chance to opt in or out. (but you will be locked into a scene of unimaginable cold lukewarm revenge.)
 

Readyforwhat

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As Captain Feather mentioned, the 'disinfecting' incident is your chance to step into, or avoid, the watersports arena. However, I'm nothing if not a coward.
So if you did decide it was nice to play medic, then you'll be given one more chance to opt in or out. (but you will be locked into a scene of unimaginable cold lukewarm revenge.)
Can't wait to witness the next update!!!!!
 
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