VN Ren'Py Abandoned Kindread: The Redburns [Ch. 5] [Inkalicious]

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spooge_nugget

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I don't really feel the flashes to/from the future really work the way that they're being used. It's not really adding anything and is rather jarring to the flow (they feel rather unnecessary). I get the feeling the dev has been influenced by "The Walking Dead", as I believe they employed the whole flashback thing quite frequently back when I watched it (but it worked, as it was related to the episode and you saw the whole episode in one sitting).

Maybe it would work better if I were playing per chapter rather than per update, but at this point, I can't even remember if the flashes are actually relevant at all to the chapter that they appear in (they certainly don't feel relevant to the part in which they appear).


Overall I like this VN and what I mentioned above is the only real negative that I can think of.
 
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arms99 said:
Wow, what an update :love:. That was supper hot, I'm loving how the relationship is progressing with both LI. All I can say is I can't wait for the next update and I hope we get the promised threesome then.
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With whom? There is a baldy there. Mother and daughter are not shaven?

A great update. One comment; are renders not so detailed this time?
 
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OK, so I'm loving this game. Those sex scenes were awesome, but I know this is gonna sound weird but I hope the next update moves the story a long a little more.
 
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That update was amazing, but I'm filled with a sense of dread. It feels like we are reaching a part of the story where something really bad is going to happen, right when the three of them have finally found happiness.
 
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OK time to give this a try... Note my opinions are opinions and not everyone will agree with me and that's ok.

  • First off Love the concept, apocalypse as a setting where the supernatural are not sexual.
  • Also I LOVE that fact that there are different body sizes for the mother and daughter.
  • Saying that, the size of the daughters tits change sizes... Sometimes they are medium sized others they are HUGE.
  • Player named character. A warning sign of a generic, blank, hallow, shallow character.
  • Faceless main character. A warning sign of a generic, blank, hallow, shallow character. So people can imagine themselves as the character, While that isn't bad... I personally do not enjoy it.
  • So the plot is trying to give the main character some flavor, but the flavor is of a perv. While that isn't wrong, I personally don't like role playing an arrogant, pervy, and stupid character. Ohh and add pathetic to the list.
  • The writing seems to be proper grammar and syntax. Nice Job.
  • Saying that, the writing feels juvenile to me. Like this game is targeted at young boys who have never really interacted with women. Personally I like women to act like women... Same goes for the main character who doesn't act like a man either.
  • There feels like a lack of player agency. This feels like a story and not a game.
  • So the incest patch is that you are their brother/son. The writing for this doesn't feel natural. Mom wouldn't act like that to her son, sister wouldn't act that way to her brother. The son would act that way to either of them as well.
  • If the incest patch isnt installed, then the mom doesn't make any sense. If you are just a random dude boy that are grouping with them, then the usage of guilt wouldn't really mean as much. Also it treats you as a family, so without the patch this goes from dumb, to confusing and inconsistent.
  • 3 frame animations are disappointing. Use more stills or make fluid animations, but not cheap 3 frame animations.
  • Huge dick is see as worship worthy. You only see this in porn. Talk to a man with a huge dick, or a women who has taken one... I guess this is a porn game, but it's one thing to have exaggerated tits/dick and another to worship them in dialogue.



I don't want to be mean to the creator, but I'm disappointed. This is not a game, this is basically an almost linear visual novel. We dont get to choose anything. What happens If I don't want to fuck my mom... or my sisters? To bad, you HAVE to. Your actions have no consequences since you end up at the same spot no matter what you pick. Play good girl gone bad, and see how this type of game should be. Player chooses to be a creep or not. Player chooses who to fuck knowing that it will piss off the other person. Also the incest is not done well. There is no fixing this games problems anymore.



I can see people loving this game, but to me 2.5/5 which I will round up to a 3. Only play if you like incest and you don't mind people acting out of character.
 
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What a fucking hot update.
I was really wondering after last updates big reveal about your pervy roommate, how it would continue, and the long wait was excruciating.
I sure didn't expect it to be such a straight out anal fuckfeast then.

Also glad with how landlady lets herself be romanced this time around, the MC starts out as such a creep and I for one really like the romance route more and thankfully inkalicious provides it AND still gives us lots of dirty smexy times as well.

Update was perfectly satisfying regarding the content, but of course it could always be more.
Still, I'm just glad this game continues.

Here's hoping part two won't take so long to update and that we find Maria alive and well.
 
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I don't mind if the story is linear if I like the story. I don't mind the 4 frames animation if the renders are awesome ! And I prefer "animations" done this way over failed dynamics/physics 60fps animations that makes the scene weird.
I hope MC will meet other chatacters too ! I liked this little Maria interlude :cool:

All in all, I really like this game ! I can't wait for the next update :)
 
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XJ347 said:
OK time to give this a try... Note my opinions are opinions and not everyone will agree with me and that's ok.

  • First off Love the concept, apocalypse as a setting where the supernatural are not sexual.
  • Also I LOVE that fact that there are different body sizes for the mother and daughter.
  • Saying that, the size of the daughters tits change sizes... Sometimes they are medium sized others they are HUGE.
  • Player named character. A warning sign of a generic, blank, hallow, shallow character.
  • Faceless main character. A warning sign of a generic, blank, hallow, shallow character. So people can imagine themselves as the character, While that isn't bad... I personally do not enjoy it.
  • So the plot is trying to give the main character some flavor, but the flavor is of a perv. While that isn't wrong, I personally don't like role playing an arrogant, pervy, and stupid character. Ohh and add pathetic to the list.
  • The writing seems to be proper grammar and syntax. Nice Job.
  • Saying that, the writing feels juvenile to me. Like this game is targeted at young boys who have never really interacted with women. Personally I like women to act like women... Same goes for the main character who doesn't act like a man either.
  • There feels like a lack of player agency. This feels like a story and not a game.
  • So the incest patch is that you are their brother/son. The writing for this doesn't feel natural. Mom wouldn't act like that to her son, sister wouldn't act that way to her brother. The son would act that way to either of them as well.
  • If the incest patch isnt installed, then the mom doesn't make any sense. If you are just a random dude boy that are grouping with them, then the usage of guilt wouldn't really mean as much. Also it treats you as a family, so without the patch this goes from dumb, to confusing and inconsistent.
  • 3 frame animations are disappointing. Use more stills or make fluid animations, but not cheap 3 frame animations.
  • Huge dick is see as worship worthy. You only see this in porn. Talk to a man with a huge dick, or a women who has taken one... I guess this is a porn game, but it's one thing to have exaggerated tits/dick and another to worship them in dialogue.



I don't want to be mean to the creator, but I'm disappointed. This is not a game, this is basically an almost linear visual novel. We dont get to choose anything. What happens If I don't want to fuck my mom... or my sisters? To bad, you HAVE to. Your actions have no consequences since you end up at the same spot no matter what you pick. Play good girl gone bad, and see how this type of game should be. Player chooses to be a creep or not. Player chooses who to fuck knowing that it will piss off the other person. Also the incest is not done well. There is no fixing this games problems anymore.



I can see people loving this game, but to me 2.5/5 which I will round up to a 3. Only play if you like incest and you don't mind people acting out of character.
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Lol. I always love it, when people complain about not wanting to fuck certain characters, when the game is ABOUT fucking exactly those characters.
Not every game has routes, regarding which characters you pursue. Some have you pursue all, some just one, with no option for others and the decisions just influence how well you do that or how you approach it, like in this game, where you can decide HOW to treat your family and that decides how a scene plays out.

Basically if you play a shooter, would you write a negative review, because you like strategy games more?
It's the same here, this is a game set in a Zombie apocalypse where a guy starts a sexual relationship with his family, giving the game less points due to that makes no sense.

As for out of character. I guess we will only know if this is out of character, when we have a Zombie Apocalypse and people start living with just three or four people, almost never meeting others who aren't enemies, mad men or zombies.

The way I figure it, it's sort of like sex in prison, lots of people who aren't gay have gay sex in prison, because there's no other option (and not even talking rape here), same in cloisters with nuns and monks.
People will always have sex, especially hormone driven youths.
Sure developing this kind of relationship so fast is forced, but that is because games would be boring otherwise, if everything took ages.

Also, you do realize there is incest in real live, so if this stuff does actually happen, how can you just generally state it is out of character?
 
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