VN Ren'Py Abandoned Kindread: The Redburns [Ch. 5] [Inkalicious]

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Nubatron

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While there is nothing wrong with having a different opinion than everyone else, there are problems when you get stuff wrong.

1. Visual Novels are actually classified as games. Even if they weren't it wouldn't be too far-fetched to say that they are when we have these adventure games, where you literally just have to move around without any sort of challenge and you just simply get story. As this point was risen from the issue of decisions not having an impact, let's address that too. Decisions right now don't have too much impact. There are scenes that are only triggered by making certain decisions. Other than that, certain dialogues are slighty different. Overall the game follows the standard eroges line that have multiple endings (Common Route -> Character Route -> Ending). As the game looks so far, the big complication is about to happen. That is where the "Common Route" usually ends. As for what this turns into in the end, nobody knows (except for Ink).
2. No real issue on this point, except for the very last bit: I think it's very much out of line to suggest adding others to the team or requesting outside help. Suggesting changes to something is fine, suggesting changes to a team is not.
3. At it's core, this is still about porn. And that is something to keep in mind when thinking about character decisions and such. Many of the characteristics are not clear from the get-go, but the characters are set up relatively well, considering all.
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Really the only thing needed to make it less "weird" is to give MC a slight aversion to incest. I believe there is noone who would do stuff with family members without first convincing themselves that it's fine and then repeat it at every corner.
4. I believe this point goes back to what I finished the above point with.
5. While I have no knowledge of the various beliefs of Tibetan Monks, I still think that if there is no other option, it's not too far-fetched for a less devoted monk to eat a carcass. I mean, it's already dead. As long as there is a possibility, then there can be a story about it. Even if the probability is microscopic.
 

desmosome

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FUCKKKK this is turning out to be AMAZING! Chapter 0 captivates with the humor. Chapter 1 or 2 where the sister opens up a bit kind of gets you in the feels. Chap 3 and 4 goes balls to the walls with sexy content. I am loving it.

I made the first review for this game on first release and participated in the discussion about a potential incest patch way back then. Of course this incredible VN is all the work of inkalicious but i can't help but feel a little bit proud of how this is turning out. All the generally positive reviews and comments are well deserved.

I really loved that long scene with sis on the rooftop. This is how scenes should be in VNs. Drawn out with lots of dialogue. Many devs think animations are the shit, but they couldn't be more wrong. They make some 4k animation that loops a 3 second clip with no dialogues and call it a day. Nonono... animations are worthless without sexy dialogue to back it up.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Love how the mom is developing :D.
 

Daxter250

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well done chapter IV. i highly enjoyed playing it! it will be damn interesting how ya will go on with the different paths you rolled out on us inkalicious ^^.

it surely will cost ya more time but will be damn worth it in the long run. just don't forget to keep ya followers updated once in a while :p.


edit: ah jeah, before i forget. i do have one worrying, if lil', thought about the last chapter. the apocalypse itself felt a bit short there and part 1 was more a self refelction of mom and sexy stuff with sis. i hope you won't forget with all the sexy bits throwing at us that they are all still in a zombie infested surrounding ^^ (guess we will see more zombies and what not in part 2, but i wanted to ask nonetheless).
 
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Mikey Mike

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The MC should be using his horny, satisfied sister as his wing-woman for nailing-down his mom. I wish the mom had caught her kids playing naughty, to give her some food for thought! ;)
 

inkalicious

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well done chapter IV. i highly enjoyed playing it! it will be damn interesting how ya will go on with the different paths you rolled out on us inkalicious ^^.

it surely will cost ya more time but will be damn worth it in the long run. just don't forget to keep ya followers updated once in a while :p.


edit: ah jeah, before i forget. i do have one worrying, if lil', thought about the last chapter. the apocalypse itself felt a bit short there and part 1 was more a self refelction of mom and sexy stuff with sis. i hope you won't forget with all the sexy bits throwing at us that they are all still in a zombie infested surrounding ^^ (guess we will see more zombies and what not in part 2, but i wanted to ask nonetheless).

Yes. In Part 1 there was only really one zombie you met. Though there were three different zombies, depending on your playthrough. And it introduced a new danger.

In Part 2, we move on from the revelations in both your relationships and meet more zombies. A lot more.
And one is going to change things for all of the characters.
 

zaraisama

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Yes. In Part 1 there was only really one zombie you met. Though there were three different zombies, depending on your playthrough. And it introduced a new danger.

In Part 2, we move on from the revelations in both your relationships and meet more zombies. A lot more.
And one is going to change things for all of the characters.

I played the chapter and really loved the "dominance" approach. Your game is officially on my top 5 now. Do you think it will take long to finish part 2?
 

inkalicious

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I played the chapter and really loved the "dominance" approach. Your game is officially on my top 5 now. Do you think it will take long to finish part 2?
Glad you're enjoying it.

To be honest I can't give a timeline on production or release. Part 2 is shorter than Part 1, but has more locations and other content that needs built.
At the moment I'm lucky if I get more than a few hours per week to work on this, but I'll keep everyone updated (though I'll never commit to a deadline. That way lies madness.)
 

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Just wanted to say... congratulations to the dev/s! Its an amazing game, good renders and good dialogs. It has some ups and downs, but i didn't know about this project and i don't know how its not bigger in this page! I hope this game gets bigger and better, its one of the best i played recently.
 
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inkalicious

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Just wanted to say... congratulations to the dev/s! Its an amazing game, good renders and good dialogs. It has some ups and downs, but i didn't know about this project and i don't know how its not bigger in this page! I hope this game gets bigger and better, its one of the best i played recently.
Just me and just me thanks you.

Yeah. I think the whole horror thing is not a big crowd winner, but maybe the fact it now has 4 Chapters under its belt has given people a reason to try it. Welcome and hope you enjoy the rest of the apocalypse.
 

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inkalicious Do you know why using Unren crashes the game?

It says "File "game/screens.rpy", line 354: Line is indented, but the preceding tag statement does not expect a block. Please check this line's indentation."
 

inkalicious

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inkalicious Do you know why using Unren crashes the game?

It says "File "game/screens.rpy", line 354: Line is indented, but the preceding tag statement does not expect a block. Please check this line's indentation."
No idea I'm afraid. I never edited it and that line has a comment, but no code, so it shouldn't even be showing an error.
 

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It's been a while with this one but that was one good update I forgot how good this actually is more of the same, please but damn what a cliffhanger to end on wouldn't be a zombie game without one I suppose :p Both the girls are great and I do hope They are just messing with the MC at the end
 
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Nubatron

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inkalicious Do you know why using Unren crashes the game?

It says "File "game/screens.rpy", line 354: Line is indented, but the preceding tag statement does not expect a block. Please check this line's indentation."
I get no such error even after using UnRen. Do you just copy in the new version and overwrite the old one? If so, then please clear the folder before unpacking, otherwise it's highly likely the game will be a buggy mess.

Additionally, it would help everyone who wants to troubleshoot if you told them when exactly you get the error. On startup? On a specific scene? Randomly?

Also, the best bet is to not use UnRen at all.
 
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