just attempted to play this and it got a bit twitchy during scenes but was smooth everywhere else until just after the MC rescued the two girls. then it all went pete tong.
i'm guessing, and it is a guess, that the developer used a different machine or went for a higher resolution or something as my memory rose massively and everything turned into a slow stop-motion movie. even right clicking to open the save screen was severely delayed. will try it again in an update or few. no biggy
its readable but full of errors in the writing and the MC has multiple personality disorder as he is portrayed one way but often has dialogue or thoughts that are anything but. it's too 'all over the place' to relate to for me. seems to go from 'decent guy' to 'porn star working the camera' with varying degrees between.
the renders are good and the story has a good mix of elements to keep it from becoming stale and not devolve into a mindless fuck fest, which for a reader is good to see. too many VNs here are just almost no plot, thin dialogue and lots of sex scenes. its nice to see some developers still understand how to hold a readers interest.
all the elements are here and with some tidying up of dialogue, this could be a remembered read (providing it leads to a dynamic ending). as it is, not so much.
right now i will sit astride the fence leaning toward 3/5
Thanks for the feedback. About memory issues, you can see how much chaos arose because of the problems I don't even know were there. I needed to patch things up fast. I will do a detailed check-up just to see what problems the game makes. I'm creating a 1080p game (full HD) and all renders are 1080p, maybe that's the issue. I'm working on my writing skills, and I'm sure that it will get better, I made progress from the initial beta version regarding writing as a whole. I have a Dropbox designed so people can give me their input on different parts of the game, so I can see do I improve and what needs improvement.
Thanks for the kind words. They mean a lot to me.
I would like to put it out there. I have an ending in my head, that will be a good way to finish off the game. It will be all rounded with every part of the game (action, romance...), so when the time comes to finish the game, I can promise you it will be great.
P. S. I really have to check what makes text barely readable or unreadable for some people, and by the next update, I hope I'll have positive results.