Very good start!
I really enjoyed it and for me personally it fulfils a mafia like superhero story. I love that kind of thing!
I also have absolutely no problems with the incredible seduction skill (on the contrary).
The only thing that caught my eye was the grammar and some spelling mistakes,
but from what I could read, you are already working on fixing them.
Maybe it would be an option to think about the resolution and quality of some of the renders and animations?
But why should I complain at all?
The story has already thrilled me!
And everything doesn't always have to be too complex and difficult to get right, am I right?
Will wait for upcoming updates and will definitely have much fun again!