VN Ren'Py Last Human [v0.7] [N2TheFire]

[malridoo]

...and for anyone else confused about the Rin scene:

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I kinda strugle to remember what happened in Serenity between the MC and Rin. As you said Mike didn't agree with her on anything yet... but which Mike ? Sorry, but my mind is on edge of exploding trying to understand this matter. At first I thought there are 2 Rin's, for one in each "universe?", but it appears it's the same Rin... so can I have a bit of a more detalied explenation for stupid me, if possible .

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[N2TheFire]

I kinda strugle to remember what happened in Serenity between the MC and Rin. As you said Mike didn't agree with her on anything yet... but which Mike ? Sorry, but my mind is on edge of exploding trying to understand this matter. At first I thought there are 2 Rin's, for one in each "universe?", but it appears it's the same Rin... so can I have a bit of a more detalied explenation for stupid me, if possible .

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[N2TheFire]

I kinda strugle to remember what happened in Serenity between the MC and Rin. As you said Mike didn't agree with her on anything yet... but which Mike ? Sorry, but my mind is on edge of exploding trying to understand this matter. At first I thought there are 2 Rin's, for one in each "universe?", but it appears it's the same Rin... so can I have a bit of a more detalied explenation for stupid me, if possible .

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oh, and there are not 2 Rins either

 

[ImperialD]

oh, and there are not 2 Rins either

so i'm hoping Rin only thinks she loves the MC in Last Human .. and changes her mind before its too late .. her and Mike belong together

 

[SoraGG]

didn't know this game have connection with Serenity
I just hope it will not ended up like Serenity

 

[eonfow]

why even write that a girl from another game wants to cuck one mc with the mc of another game? if you are not a ntr writter that is just dumb, this scene will probably be the only thing anyone will talk about for the next few pages as it always is when ntr in a non-ntr game appears

 

[TigerWolfe]

why even write that a girl from another game wants to cuck one mc with the mc of another game? if you are not a ntr writter that is just dumb, this scene will probably be the only thing anyone will talk about for the next few pages as it always is when ntr in a non-ntr game appears

Because that's the story they're writing. Iirc Mc in all their games is basically the same person.

If it's an element you can't deal with please just mosey on and don't start a thread shit storm.

 

[Deleted member 7705548]

why even write that a girl from another game wants to cuck one mc with the mc of another game? if you are not a ntr writter that is just dumb, this scene will probably be the only thing anyone will talk about for the next few pages as it always is when ntr in a non-ntr game appears

Or Maybe you don't know the concept of alternate universe/other dimensions.

If you really think this is NTR then I fuck dozens of your waifus in my game, that means you're a cuck too?

 

[trauts]

yeah, kinda feel sad for d-18
maybe take d-18 you & have it act as a sentry in future off worlds missions? like it was doing earlier, when mc arrived?

 

[Horst82]

N2TheFire I am normally not someone to comment on Story Choices because it is the Creators Vision - but here I only want to say that you may want to rething the Rin Storyline inside Last Human. The Cameo in the Fight Scene made sense. But with you taking Rin as additional Main Charakter into the Canon of this game takes away focus from the other likeable charakters you implemented. Especially because the players know Rin from the other side of the Universe. You basically let Serenity take over Last Human with that a bit.
And when I read your comments to your other game correctly you stated that you may have implemented too many different characters and were not able to do them justice. Now you implement an "old" Charakter you had a Cameo with into your new Game instead of letting the player and Main Charakter Focus. You have so much potential with the already established Characters in Last Human...

 

[Mommysbuttslut]

I really hope we get some good sex scenes with Rin here. I mean on one hand it would be pretty hot, and on the other hand it would really piss off the most annoying type of F95 user and the comments about it would be fucking golden. Don't worry about them dev, they'll be mad that Rin had so much as expressed sexual autonomy already. Actually giving her a sex scene here couldn't make them anymore mad than the scene where she thought about having sex with her boyfriend 2.0

 

[N2TheFire]

N2TheFire I am normally not someone to comment on Story Choices because it is the Creators Vision - but here I only want to say that you may want to rething the Rin Storyline inside Last Human. The Cameo in the Fight Scene made sense. But with you taking Rin as additional Main Charakter into the Canon of this game takes away focus from the other likeable charakters you implemented. Especially because the players know Rin from the other side of the Universe. You basically let Serenity take over Last Human with that a bit.
And when I read your comments to your other game correctly you stated that you may have implemented too many different characters and were not able to do them justice. Now you implement an "old" Charakter you had a Cameo with into your new Game instead of letting the player and Main Charakter Focus. You have so much potential with the already established Characters in Last Human...

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[Horst82]

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Yep - I know - I read that as well before I posted. I am not freaking out or anything And you may have recognized in my post that I did not mention anything sexual. (Because I couldn't care less about that) I only expressed what I think is something which might happen if you implement Major Charakters between two different storylines. Even if it is the same universe. As a writer it gets... seriously hard to maintain grip with so many different characters in an engaging and meaningful way.
Whatever you do - I am sure that I will have fun playing it and I am looking forward on how you resolve the story you are building so far. So thank you for your work.

 

[Limmi]

Thx

 

[Mutation8888]

yeah, kinda feel sad for d-18
View attachment 3962252 maybe take d-18 you & have it act as a sentry in future off worlds missions? like it was doing earlier, when mc arrived?

That was what I was thinking. A duranium droid that has enough charge to keep going on its own. Needs little to no upkeep and maintenance, tough, strong, humanoid size and appearance. Just order it to wander around the Aurora on security duty until needed.

 

[N2TheFire]

That was what I was thinking. A duranium droid that has enough charge to keep going on its own. Needs little to no upkeep and maintenance, tough, strong, humanoid size and appearance. Just order it to wander around the Aurora on security duty until needed.

Hmm... you guys have given me an idea. D-18 was left on the planet and I don't want to rewrite that. However, I'm willing to bet that Aury will have the data needed to build a new, more up-to-date model using the nanobots. We'll see how it plays out, but I can definitely see a D-20 roaming the Aurora with possibly some funny interactions as well as other events where he could come in quite handy. Nice work friends, I'm making some notes on this.

 

[Mutation8888]

Hmm... you guys have given me an idea. D-18 was left on the planet and I don't want to rewrite that. However, I'm willing to bet that Aury will have the data needed to build a new, more up-to-date model using the nanobots. We'll see how it plays out, but I can definitely see a D-20 roaming the Aurora with possibly some funny interactions as well as other events where he could come in quite handy. Nice work friends, I'm making some notes on this.

Might be interesting if it has some quirks added in by Blarg regarding his warrior code and such as well as by the Pantherians regarding some of their ideas and beliefs. Things the MC is unaware of it being exposed to until he interacts with it. Would be interesting if it has a special holographic or malleable ability to resemble certain individuals so it can be used as a double to trick enemies.

 

[Couatl]

rin needs to stay in serenity. i inderstand wanting to tie the stories together, but no. at best i can see shes homesick for the mc from serenity. i mean at this point its a multiverse now. what happens if another version of the mc in another reality just happens to capture her attention like this one in last human did. then it would just cheapen her value so much more. just please dont. only other thing i can see it merging the 2 mc from both stories into one but that just wouldnt make sense story wise or anything really, and it would just make the story so utterly convoluted that no one would bother with it. there is more i could say but i believe the thought is clear enough. to me making rin be with last human mc is akin to an ntr move or a sharing one. yea they could have cameo appearances to help move the story, but thats it. so yea thats the end to my rant about rin in last human. i dont mean to be rude, mean, or such. its just me putting my opinion out there.

 

[N2TheFire]

rin needs to stay in serenity. i inderstand wanting to tie the stories together, but no. at best i can see shes homesick for the mc from serenity. i mean at this point its a multiverse now. what happens if another version of the mc in another reality just happens to capture her attention like this one in last human did. then it would just cheapen her value so much more. just please dont. only other thing i can see it merging the 2 mc from both stories into one but that just wouldnt make sense story wise or anything really, and it would just make the story so utterly convoluted that no one would bother with it. there is more i could say but i believe the thought is clear enough. to me making rin be with last human mc is akin to an ntr move or a sharing one. yea they could have cameo appearances to help move the story, but thats it. so yea thats the end to my rant about rin in last human. i dont mean to be rude, mean, or such. its just me putting my opinion out there.

I appreciate the feedback. But honestly, some of you guys are just reading WAY too much into the Rin stuff, really. Like it or not, Rin will be in both Serenity and Last Human. I planned that from the beginning. There are situations that will come up later involving her and they're good events. I don't plan to change that at this point because I am happy with it. And I didn't think you were being rude.

 

[cklaubur]

I just noticed something on the helm panel there. As a Trekkie I have to ask, how close is Pantheria to the Romulan Neutral Zone?