RPGM Ren'Py Laura: Lustful Secrets [Ch.2 v0.3] [Dark Anu]

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6Dromaius

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May 15, 2022
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cleanfeel said:
I played a few minutes. Here's my thoughts.

Pros:
1. Isometric graphics of the map is refreshing
2. Amount of locations on map shows ability to create a believable world (at least physically)

Cons:
1. Writing is poor - (more later)
2. Proportions of women is off - Kim Kardashian's ass is not a good indicator of a good hot body. Go look at the Olympics athletes in Tokyo if you want to see what perfect female asses should look like. Kim's ass is all fat and plastic surgery, which is gross. It's not natural. Go to reddit /r/gonewild if you still can't figure out. There's no excuse for not knowing what a shapely ass should look like)

Writing is the core of any narrative driven game experiences, such as the ones here in h-games. There's a lot of issues with the writing in this game, I will list them in order of pressing matter.

1. Lack of characterization for wife, daughter, and husband - Who are they? What does wife do? What does daughter do? Where are they living? What kind of neighborhood is it? What does wife want in her life? Is she a homemaker (unemployed leecher)? Is daughter a student? Does she have a job? Does she have a boyfriend? What is wife scared of? What makes her happy? etc. etc. Learn how to do it:
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. Google "How to write a good character"
2. Lack of real meaningful dialog between characters - Biggest examples being the conversation that the MC had with his wife when he told her "Hey babe, without asking you, I am going to have some stranger live in our house". You need more life experiences or watch more TV if you think the way you portrayed that conversation is how real people talk. It's completely bogus
3. Too many side characters - I don't give a shit about the neighbor when you can't even get the 4 characters you have correct: MC, wife, daughter, and Marketing Consultant. Too many characters don't make your game better, well developed characters do.

Overall the writing in this game is just poor. It sounds like someone with no life experiences trying to emulate real life. The first thing that jumped out to me was when the Boss chewing MC out in the office. It's 100% not believable and not how real corporate BS meetings go down (at least here in America where I work).
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Be careful or youll be censored for an honest review. lmao @ mods.
 
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JohnConstantine96

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Jan 16, 2021
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Dark Anu said:
Hi guys, I will update the links tomorrow.
For those who noticed that the Island event is no longer in the game is because my patrons, subscribers and I decided to create another game called Laura: Island Adventures in renpy engine.

I really like to read your comments about the game and I think this is the best way to improve my content.

I thank all for the feedback,

DA
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could you please re-up the walkthrough?
 
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Claudio83

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NTR is intented only as cheating or also as sharing/hotwifing/cuckold? There is any sharing/cuckold scenes at the moment in the game, and if not they are planned?
 
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I rape mommy's

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It is updated for public but dev dark Anu released compressed version only
Go click windows compressed it's new but i wait cuz i don't wanna quality issues and bugs so i wait if i have link will share
 
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Sense_9

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Dark Anu said:
Hi guys, I will update the links tomorrow.
For those who noticed that the Island event is no longer in the game is because my patrons, subscribers and I decided to create another game called Laura: Island Adventures in renpy engine.

I really like to read your comments about the game and I think this is the best way to improve my content.

I thank all for the feedback,

DA
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it's rather a good idea to have separate what happens on the island in another game, there is so much potential!! But i guess that now the updates will be longer now since you do 2 times the work you did before?
 
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