I initially thought it was
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I would really have to be reaching to offer constructive criticism however I am already invested in the VN and love it.
The only worry I have is the character Malena. I hope she doesn't turn into a Klingon.
Meaning, when they write for Klingons, most times they are a stereotype: talk about battle; act aggressive; eat garbage food that would make a billy goat puke and so on.
With Malena, so far all we have is she always gives orders and always talks crude. That character has a hell of a lot to offer in depth of personality. Just a really great canvas and back-story to write from. I hope we see the real Malena and not the up-everyone's-ass-crack-at-dawn.
Again though. Great writing and a great story. A really entertaining VN. Imagine that.
The only worry I have is the character Malena. I hope she doesn't turn into a Klingon.
Meaning, when they write for Klingons, most times they are a stereotype: talk about battle; act aggressive; eat garbage food that would make a billy goat puke and so on.
With Malena, so far all we have is she always gives orders and always talks crude. That character has a hell of a lot to offer in depth of personality. Just a really great canvas and back-story to write from. I hope we see the real Malena and not the up-everyone's-ass-crack-at-dawn.
Again though. Great writing and a great story. A really entertaining VN. Imagine that.
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while I do love badass and crude Malena
I definitely think there's more to her than that I think when we get to know her
we will get to see a softer and more loving Malena
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Wait you went for the hookup? who are you? what did you do to Vidal?
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it was a moment of weakness I don't know what happenedWait you went for the hookup? who are you? what did you do to Vidal?
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Interesting premise, liking the story so far... I've settled on Jamie as my main LI, as I have a weakness for childhood friends and redheads... so win-win! I did have a question though, is it possible to get into a friends with benefits arrangement with Aghavni and Malena while romancing Jamie? At least until Jamie's romantic path takes off?
Not asking for a harem or throuple, just some casual sex to blow off some steam until things get serious with Jamie.
Not asking for a harem or throuple, just some casual sex to blow off some steam until things get serious with Jamie.
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I think it's possible... I'm with you on the Jamie path, she is too cute... but obviously you can get into sexual escapades with others as per the latest update. But I'm really interested how it will work out in the end.
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Yep! Go out there and getcha some!
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not for me thanks I'm good soo Malena I was thinking about a June wedding
and look at the bright side my mother's dead so you don't have to worry about any pesty mother in law
I see. I‘m certainly interested in pursuing a Malena romance route too. I want to know what makes her tick.
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I agree with most of what you are saying but calling people who like loli's or girls with small boobs a pedo seems a bit silly to me
You wouldn't call someone who plays gta v a murderer would you
Also I hope the mc doesn't try and sleeps with some dudes girl
That would make him an arsehole to me.
I never said all who watch it are... but I would be naive to think none actually are, since if one no longer wants to be a pedo or end up seeing Chris Hanson face to face, playing games with underage looking girls as main love interests is not going to help diminsh the pedo desire but rather heighten it.
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A good point. She might even be smitten by MC and is just a bit surprised by that fact.
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Awesome game so far, one of the better ones on this site. Added it on Steam wishlist and will definitely grab a copy once it's out. Good luck with the future episodes dev and may the fortune bring your project that Completed tag without any bumps on the way.