I agree and have added it to my sig.
From a technical standpoint, the story shows either time spent in research (ie, legal and medical) or a first-hand knowledge. Diction and grammar are excellent; although, I did see the occasional
across-the-pond weirdness of adding unnecessary vowels to words such as
colour.
Plus, at least so far, the imaginative aspect of the story is way, way above the average drivel of an AVN. Nice pacing, mystery and tension...no doubt. Personally, I like the choices given and how they map out to fit the narrative.
Well, enough praise. Get back to work.....heh.