VN Ren'Py Lesson in Loyalty [Ch.4] [Lesson in Loyalty]

[| Vee |]

I love the game and Yes it does resemble manwha which someone mentioned above. Every game is straight up a copy of other with minor changes or spinoff, etc. So, I don't care if that is the case, at least it is not like 1000 others but like 1 or two. Plus Graphics are great. I love Lillie (Redhead). I love how Dev tries to capture emotions and face expressions (talking about Lillie). Absolutely loved the story. At least it is far more interesting and greater than this previous games.

Absolutely loved the cast as of now(ch1)!

This was such a blow to the face But Loved the scene.

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MC HAS to grow backbone soon otherwise signs are not looking great and story can take pretty dark turn if that is Planned, I hope not(3forbiddenwords). As of now it is giving only Netori vibes and MC is gonna do stealing.

Loved the cast and story as of now. Looking forward to next chapter.

KEEP GROWING!

GOLDLUCK! Vilkas Creative

 

[Trikus]

This has amazing artwork and a nice cast of characters. This will be one to watch. If I was to say anything, it would be the kids looked a little too young to need a tutor, especially the one he is helping with homework.

 

[| Vee |]

This has amazing artwork and a nice cast of characters. This will be one to watch. If I was to say anything, it would be the kids looked a little too young to need a tutor, especially the one he is helping with homework.

Well he is teaching him addition and not trigonometry for that very reason. Also we should take it as a story and unless kids are not involved sexually then all good.

 

[hirikumo]

New Town. Copied to a comma. It even has the same hair colors for the characters Only difference was friend's bratty daughter hanging out with a gf instead of bf to avoid whining from people afraid of dicks. Which is a bit weird since that webtoon is all about netori.

Judging from the description, they will combine it with another manhwa about two dudes competing in a gym (Fitness I think?). I wouldn't give a shit but having read that, there is no point to play the game....

I thought the gym section reminded me of another manhwa, so thanks for that. New Town started out pretty good then, in typical manhwa fashion, went to shit in the later half. Fitness started out okay then went to a level lower than shit.

 

[Before I Forget]

Ok, so, since some ppl here apparently missed the whole point of a 'mandatory' planned tag list and came up with all kinds of ridiculous ways to defend the shit that usually happens when there's this kinda 'misunderstanding' involved they supposedly hate, I'll just say this... by mandatory planned tag list, I obviously didn't mean each and every single tag there will be in the game, just the usual NTR/non NTR choice, femdom/maledom, sissification/gay stuff (could be an option here, something I don't wanna see, but others probably do). That would be all. To put it shortly, the blueprint of the story.

Like I already said, by doing this, the dev can cater to the audience they want and make the story exactly and how they want to by sparing themselves a lot of complaining, a thing that IMHO, doesn't make you be "out of touch with reality" or whatever nonsense, it just makes you a simple customer asking the guy selling you a product to give you a spec list or some technical details about it. Imagine spending a few thousand dollars on a damn pc you didn't bother checking its specs first cause of reasons and then bitching about it being too slow and/or outdated compared to what you expected from it, but that's just my opinion, and since the dev already has an abandoned game where ppl complained a lot about the effeminate MC, a thing that could've been avoided, having another abandoned title wouldn't exactly be anything shocking.



Is that right ?? Somebody wanting to throw a few bucks a dev's way doesn't deserve to know what they're in for in the next updates ?? Wonder how many devs you ever supported with a logic like that and how well this idea worked out for them.

There were a lot of cases when some games started out as completely NTR free, and the devs added it for the 'plot' or reasons, so ppl naturally complained and even canceled their subscriptions bcz of it. A lil honesty from the get-go could've easily prevented that, but instead, these devs abandoned their games cause of lack of support blaming the fans for their mistakes and lack of transparency in regard to the story, and this thing didn't happen just once or twice, BUT there were examples of devs who knew what they wanted in their stories and were honest and upfront about it too, so anyone who doesn't already have a few ideas about the stuff that's gonna be in their stories is just going with the flow or is in it for a few extra bucks, which obviously isn't a good sign for a potential patron.

If I'm being honest, I don't really care what this dev does with the game, since it's his story to tell and all that, but I still think he owes his fans and potential new supporters a few answers about the story and to the question about whether NTR will be in it or not, since the MC isn't exactly a revelation when it comes to well-written or at least believable types of MCs in porn games.

Reading Comprehension?

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

A good start. It's a promising story; just needs some dialogue tweaks.
High-quality renders. nice ambient music.

Look forward to more.

 

[Anarchy2000]

Beautiful renderings, the story is apparently average, weak tags and to make matters worse without the planned tags.
I could even overlook the lack of planned tags if the game wasn't from this developer.

Well, I'll be back in about 10 updates (that's if the game isn't abandoned), maybe by then all the possible tags will be included.

 

[king wang]

bro, the real important part is you need to finish at least one story .
you need to give us confident to play .

 

[HX_Eros]

Ok... tell me more.

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[jhonatanw]

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Greetings, everyone...
Firstly, we would like to express our gratitude for the interest and support you have shown. Regarding the upcoming episodes, we plan to provide small informative updates like this. Additionally, we will seek your input on certain matters.
In the next episode, there are a few things we'd like to implement. For instance, a scoring system. The points we receive based on the responses given in the scoring system could unlock additional scenes in the future. However, since we are still at the early stages of the game, these extra scenes might be visible a bit later, we must mention.

There is another topic on which we'd like to hear your thoughts. We're talking about romantic relationships. In your opinion, should our visual novel game have mandatory routes according to the storyline, or should we allow players to choose from all characters? The next post will include a poll on this matter, and we eagerly await your participation.

 

[insolent666]

Good Story / Great Character / Keep going Bro!

 

[Mibera]

if you read the comments and look at the rating the game got with basically a stolen plot and pretty pictures, while the dev has already two other games that are going nowhere, you get a whole new understanding why/how milking devs happen.

 

[Kakasan]

Probably what will happen in chapter 3

 

[WastedTalent]

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Greetings, everyone...
Firstly, we would like to express our gratitude for the interest and support you have shown. Regarding the upcoming episodes, we plan to provide small informative updates like this. Additionally, we will seek your input on certain matters.
In the next episode, there are a few things we'd like to implement. For instance, a scoring system. The points we receive based on the responses given in the scoring system could unlock additional scenes in the future. However, since we are still at the early stages of the game, these extra scenes might be visible a bit later, we must mention.

There is another topic on which we'd like to hear your thoughts. We're talking about romantic relationships. In your opinion, should our visual novel game have mandatory routes according to the storyline, or should we allow players to choose from all characters? The next post will include a poll on this matter, and we eagerly await your participation.

for the poll the question is for choose from all the characters as in harem or just pick one and done? I can't speak for others but I personally hate points systems. So I believe choice would be better but would prefer a harem. Again just my opinion I'm sure you'll get several and thanks for asking for player input it's much appreciated.

 

[Your real Father]

Hmmm Smell like loser MC


... GL DEV

 

[doc69ppb]

Does the game have any sex scenes yet?

 

[jhonatanw]

Week 1 Summary

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[rafaaa]

Does the game will have a lot of choices and does the choices will matter for the game or its a linear path? How many girls the game will have? how many chapters will the game have?
Vilkas Creative

 

[Aground9437]

Coming from this developer, the only tag I foresee in the future is the abandoned tag lol

Then wtf are you still doing here ????

 

[jhonatanw]

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Lilie is 25 years old and married. After completing her university education in the field of health, where she studied alongside Kurt in the same high school, she started working as a nurse.
Lilie fell in love with a doctor who had lost his spouse at the private healthcare institution where she worked. Eventually, they got married, and Lilie began living with her stepdaughter.
Her life before marriage was cheerful and positive, spreading energy and happiness to those around her. However, her not-so-happy marriage, with conflicts arising from the small age difference with her stepdaughter and the significant age gap with her husband, has changed her character a bit. Lilie now carries a saddened demeanor.