VN Ren'Py Lesson in Loyalty [Ch.4] [Lesson in Loyalty]

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MixQQ

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nice game, but mc is a mature dude, and he let some teenage girl bully him, that scene was embarrassing, especially his stuttering. Next bully is coworker who do it regularly... MC is really weak right now - with that personality i smell a lot of cuck content
 

Saint Blackmoor

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What is with this obsession of making MC's pathetic doormats? When will the devs learn that the very first thing when making a game is to make a decent and likeable MC. unless you're planning to turn him into a cuck
What is with this obsession of members thinking they know how the story progresses? When will the members learn that the very first thing when seeing a new game is that there is no need to project their scorn onto the dev? Unless they're planning to turn themselves into a sad pathic nuisance in front of everyone here.

I say wait and see where it goes. You might end up enjoying it. :sneaky:
 
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Maevos

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Jesus, I had this nagging feeling that it all felt very familiar to me for some reason. This story is extremely similar to "City Milfs", a korean manwha I've read years ago. It's almost 1:1.
 

Chimba

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What is with this obsession of making MC's pathetic doormats? When will the devs learn that the very first thing when making a game is to make a decent and likeable MC. unless you're planning to turn him into a cuck :whistle:
:KEK: I guess it should be blamed on the influence of mangas, comics, pornhwa, hentai, literotica, many devs "get ideas" from those places and even use the stories of some of those (some posters here even compared and gave the names of the manhwas, New Town and Fitness), and in most of those stories the Mc is always a loser who begins to develop after being humiliated X number of times.
 
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big_hawg

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wasnt a fan of Vilkas' prior games. Ill give credit where its due- this is much improved. The dialogue is way better (except people calling him "teacher" - might i suggest letting us add a last name. Mr. Thundercock with PhD in Mathematics sounds better). Art is fantastic. Like where this one is heading
 
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Lokitox8

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So the Only Sex Scenes In This Game Right Now are of other People having Sex that the MC is not the one involved in?? I was going through the story a saw a scene of another dude having sex with a girl fan that he just met in the street and stop playing right there. No Option to make it Optional or Warning :unsure:(n) Job Well Done
 

Raziel_8

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So the Only Sex Scenes In This Game Right Now are of other People having Sex that the MC is not the one involved in?? I was going through the story a saw a scene of another dude having sex with a girl fan that he just met in the street and stop playing right there. No Option to make it Optional or Warning :unsure:(n) Job Well Done
Yeah the husband of one of the LI's with some random fan girl.
I found the scene just unnecessary, i really don't care for sex scenes which don't include the MC, and neither the MC nor any LI could have even seen this, so why have us watch it...
 
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The ArcKnight

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Don't get me wrong, I love character growth, but the MC is a little weird.

Plus, why put in the voyeurism scene? Not the MC nor the LI were a part of it. Completely unnecessary and a major turn off.

I love the character models, they are gorgeous, but yeah. Also the holding onto the kids while checking out his mom gave me the creeps. Don't start hitting on a mom in front of her kids, that's what babysitters are for. (and then you bang the babysitter.)
 

baklol

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Yeah the husband of one of the LI's with some random fan girl.
I found the scene just unnecessary, i really don't care for sex scenes which don't include the MC, and neither the MC nor any LI could have even seen this, so why have us watch it...
maybe that for justifying cheating of his wife plot building i guess
 

Dripping

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women in this game are so beatiful and too perfect that at the end they are strange.
They're also all very similar in appearance, like cousins-related similar. They're all Mousso characters I think, which I love, but the game would benefit in realism if it had some variation in figure designers, and then make them mesh better for lighting purposes by all having the skin textures of one designer (which could still be Mousso).
 
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