ltpika

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I know people didn't like her hairstyle in this update but I thought your initial idea of girls occasionally having different hairstyle was good. Can always go back to her normal hair in the next updates.

Great game, I'm glad you are still working on it, even after all the problems. And remember that your health comes first!
Yeah, I agree that mixing it up can be fun. I just think people were a little anxious the iconic look wasn't coming back, that's the Lexi we fell in love with and picture bedding.
 

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Speculation: The game will end with MC challenging Jason Johnson to a fight to the death, which he then wins due to his MMA training. He becomes the new cult leader due to killing the previous leader, using the cult to as a basis on which to build a harem. The MC lives the rest of his days in luxury with copious amounts of sex. The End.
 

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Just started this VN but within 5mins I get the impression of a non-douche MC dealing with a gold-diggin' bitchy daddy's girl of a souse. An MC (at least within the first few minutes) that I can relate to. Renders look good so far, intriguing. Still on day one so I'm back at it. Regards.
 
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You hit the nail right on the head. While I respect that everyone is entitled to their opinion, and I'm not offended by those opinions, no matter what I do, I simply can't please everyone.

But people should understand that everything I do in the game has a purpose. Someone said that they couldn't wait to play their favorite perverted bodyguard. Perfect! That means I showed you guys that the MC is not just a nice guy, he also has a side that can be tempted, a weakness. Pussy and gambling.

It's like the thing with Lexi and Kiko. A lot of people didn't like that, but that's ok, because her story doesn't end there. I accomplished exactly what I set out to accomplish with that scene. And maybe they are pissed at Lexi, but good, because you felt something for that character, even if it's bad. Now where does she go from here. Does she continue to be a brat? Or does she realize how much she hurt someone else, and grow as a person because of it?
Let me preface this by saying this isn't a critique of this game, cause this game is great, it's more of a realization that there's more to this genre than I'd thought. I'm also not replying to you directly, I just searched for a conversation about this (Lexi/Kiko) and your post seemed most relevant.


So, I'm new to these types of games (VNs). I've maybe played 20? And most have been speed-clicking to scenes as the stories and/or translations haven't kept me interested.

This however has been different. It has great writing, characters, beautiful renders, and it's the first VN I've played that made me feel invested in the MC's story. I actually like the guy and want him to succeed. So much so that I find myself making choices that I would actually make irl.

And that's the rub, or rather, the hindrance to it...

I don't really want to make the same choices I would make irl. And when I'm not emotionally invested, I have no issue doing that... Peek on my client's daughters in the changing room? You bet. Finger bang mom in her sleep? I'm your boy. Dick slap your passed out boss' face? No problemo.

But get me emotionally invested and then ask me to romance a chick after she gets someone fired for nothing? Can't do it, she can fuck right off. I was seriously pissed off when she did that. So much so that from that point forward I only made choices that I felt would move us further apart, not closer. And that kind of bites. Lexi's probably the best render I've seen in these games, smoking hot.

So, as much as generating emotion is a testament to great story telling, is disliking the character, that motivated me to download the game in the first place, what I'm looking for in a 'porn game'? Is getting angry? For that matter, are any negative emotions desirable when sitting down to rub one out? idk, maybe I'm missing the bigger picture.

I know it's art, and damn good art. But even though I can't wait to continue playing this, it isn't for the reasons that brought me to this site in the first place. For me, that's both a good thing, and a bad thing.





tldr: Lexi pissed me off and now I'm conflicted cause my panties are in a wad and I no longer want to fuck her. It has me questioning what I want/expect from "porn" games. Specifically whether or not I want/like having 'emotions' while trying to rub one out.
 
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There is a reason why dev want Lexi to do that,probably to open path for that women later.Anyway,it just a game..you dont need to relate it with rl.
 

Ragnar

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I see Lexi as your typical spoiled rich girl, so she lashing at the waitress makes sense, plus she was jelous of her.
Her parents raised her shelterd and in the sect nonsense. So she doesn't know much about rl struggles.
Now, I find interesting the dynamic MC-Lexi. He can teach her about life, It will take some spankings but that's what we're here for, right? :sneaky:
That's why she is best girl in my book.
 

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I see Lexi as your typical spoiled rich girl, so she lashing at the waitress makes sense, plus she was jelous of her.
Her parents raised her shelterd and in the sect nonsense. So she doesn't know much about rl struggles.
Now, I find interesting the dynamic MC-Lexi. He can teach her about life, It will take some spankings but that's what we're here for, right? :sneaky:
That's why she is best girl in my book.
Exactly. She is rich and spoiled, she has a lot of growing to do, and we're gonna help her do that. Something that a lot of people seemed to miss what really happened in that scene. People saw Asian girl getting fired and immediately said "That's a copy of MrDots". Well, it in fact was a nod to MrDots, but with some changes. The asian girl didn't get fired in MrDots' game because of jealousy. In this case while Lexi has not admitted to liking the MC as a romantic option, subconsciously she has marked her territory, and Kiko invaded it. I'm not saying that Lexi was justified, just that she acted on her the emotion of feeling threatened.
 

ltpika

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I'm more Team Kaylee than Team Lexi, but when she unleashed the inner Karen, she lost a lot of interest for me also.
Yeah, felt the same way, but I'm holding out for a redemption arc. Taming a shrew is a common theme, maybe this plot string will end in an apology threesome. Kinda like in the game "Fashion Business."

Although I still think maybe there's more characters than needed, especially when updates are tough for the author. I'd love to be able to fuck the mother but given her personality, I don't think there's enough time to believably get her to not only fuck you but possibly her own daughters. It hurts to say because I love a good harem ending. But it might be easier on Chatterbox to make great Kaylee and Lexi focused story and maybe loop back around to others in a sequel.

I think the fans would be understanding. A time skip in a sequel to when the girls are more corrupted and depraved could help make it more believable, too. Time passes and the girls are looking to spice things up further.
 
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Edit 2020/02/14: Mod Public Beta Release

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As this is the first iteration and I am using a new development method for the Mod there may be some bugs, errors or points of improvement. If you have any feedback please either reply on the Mod's Thread or contact me via F95.
 
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