VN Ren'Py Abandoned Life Changing Choices REMASTERED [Ep.4] [NiiChan]

[Demoness_Kiss]

Well thanks for telling me there's NTR I will pass

For now the only NTR it's the implied one for the kidnapping of MC's previous girlfriend

also, there are different kinds of NTR

like Girl cheating the boyfriend/husband with the MC, MC cheating the girlfriend with another girl(also known as Harem bc apparently the only case I saw where the girlfriend is actually mad with MC is in "Love & Sex: Second Base" and you can smooth-talk the girlfriends and have a poly-amorous relationship)
and so on...

 

[NiiChan]

unrelated BUT: MC questions himself about why/how didn't manage to save her girlfriend even though he is a trained fighter(and later we learn that he is from a special/rich family, like the MC of My Real Desire XD who is adopted by some weird mafia/yakuza group/secret cult) while you could write that he did the martial arts lessons AFTER the kidnapping, trying to compensate like he felt so miserable, inferior and pathetic for being weak(/unable to save her) that he took those lessons like as a way to cope or something like that

it's just a thought tho.

For now I can't say it, 'coz it will spoil the whole story for the MC. But, nope. He's not from a rich fam or adopted by someone either. The next update will answer your question and doubts as I will be releasing the whole Ep2 this time.

 

[Demoness_Kiss]

For now I can't say it, 'coz it will spoil the whole story for the MC. But, nope. He's not from a rich fam or adopted by someone either.

fair enough.

 

[Walter Victor]

All I can say and maybe spoil something a bit, the actual scene of that will not be shown in the future, but a mystery to solve for the MC.

You can't win! Whenever something happens to an MC's girlfriend in the past, even though it is never seen, NTR haters will bitch about it and badmouth your game, some just because it has the NTR tag. While NTR lovers will flock to the game, hoping to see all the MC's LI's buggered in front of him, only to bitch about it when that never happens, and complain that there is no NTR in the game.

All you can to is explain what you are doing, which you have, and ignore the chatter. If your story is good, it won't make any difference what a few naysayers write.

 

[NiiChan]

You can't win! Whenever something happens to an MC's girlfriend in the past, even though it is never seen, NTR haters will bitch about it and badmouth your game, some just because it has the NTR tag. While NTR lovers will flock to the game, hoping to see all the MC's LI's buggered in front of him, only to bitch about it when that never happens, and complain that there is no NTR in the game.

All you can to is explain what you are doing, which you have, and ignore the chatter. If your story is good, it won't make any difference what a few naysayers write.

All I wanna make is a game that I would personally like to play while also taking your opinions into consideration.

 

[Mishalove]

Character art is really good. The angle of H scene is great too.
I really enjoyed it. Thank you.

 

[Demoness_Kiss]

Character art is really good. The angle of H scene is great too.
I really enjoyed it. Thank you.

i'm not a fan of Ahegao...but somehow i didn't mind it here...

 

[YogSothoth1982]

All I can say and maybe spoil something a bit, the actual scene of that will not be shown in the future, but a mystery to solve for the MC.

I hope I don't see the rape scene... I'm out of the game if I must see it (I prefer that you let people choose if they want to see it or not, becouse is a past scene). Really, I only need to know that this happen, but I not need to see it.

 

[Arestta]

Can't wait for the next update

 

[NiiChan]

I hope I don't see the rape scene... I'm out of the game if I must see it (I prefer that you let people choose if they want to see it or not, becouse is a past scene). Really, I only need to know that this happen, but I not need to see it.

Naah. It won't be shown in the future. Rest assured.

 

[NiiChan]

Can't wait for the next update

I will be releasing the full episode 2 on the next update. So... the wait will be a bit long this time.

 

[Deleted member 770309]

unrelated BUT: MC questions himself about why/how didn't manage to save her girlfriend even though he is a trained fighter(and later we learn that he is from a special/rich family, like the MC of My Real Desire XD who is adopted by some weird mafia/yakuza group/secret cult) while you could write that he did the martial arts lessons AFTER the kidnapping, trying to compensate like he felt so miserable, inferior and pathetic for being weak(/unable to save her) that he took those lessons like as a way to cope or something like that

it's just a thought tho.

Yeah i would like to know that my self is this MC a little beta bitch cause who the fuck lets the GF get raped. And not even try and stop it.

 

[Demoness_Kiss]

Yeah i would like to know that my self is this MC a little beta bitch cause who the fuck lets the GF gets raped. And not even try and stop it.

He says to Zoey that the kidnappers were too many and he was blocked down...

 

[Moleman111]

Not a bad start, there some similarities with my real desire, with regards to the rape incident and why the MC didn't fight back, well we don't have all the details yet, for all we know he could have been drugged, I'm sure more details will be revealed.

There were a couple of things I didn't like which are Yuna really don't like her and didn't like being forced to do anything with her perhaps a femdom tag is needed maybe, I think you should give the choice whether to reject girls so we choose who we're interested in.

 

[Deleted member 770309]

He says to Zoey that the kidnappers were too many and he was blocked down...

To many the fuck like that would ever try and stop somebody bring a damn weapon a blade gun knife and baseball bat would do and what do you mean by blocked down.

 

[Demoness_Kiss]

To many the fuck like that would ever try and stop somebody bring a damn weapon a blade gun knife and baseball bat would do and what do you mean by blocked down.

play the game instead of focusing on the boobs

 

[Deleted member 770309]

play the game instead of focusing on the boobs

Not a fan of rape and the MC just sounds like a bitch for letting it happen to me. Shame since i came here for the harem.

 

[NiiChan]

Not a bad start, there some similarities with my real desire, with regards to the rape incident and why the MC didn't fight back, well we don't have all the details yet, for all we know he could have been drugged, I'm sure more details will be revealed.

There were a couple of things I didn't like which are Yuna really don't like her and didn't like being forced to do anything with her perhaps a femdom tag is needed maybe, I think you should give the choice whether to reject girls so we choose who we're interested in.

I'm still quite new to ren'py codes as this is my first game that i ever made. But i'll take your suggestion into consideration. And also I dont have my own PC yet. So i dont have all the time to explore and do tests.

 

[Demoness_Kiss]

I'm still quite new to ren'py codes as this is my first game that i ever made. But i'll take your suggestion into consideration.

that guy is a bit wrong...not completely...but some events may be mandatory bc it's about the main plot, you could put a skip-scene button or something for those mandatory sex-scenes

i mean, if Yuna's scenes are mandatory you either skip them(but they still happen, like it or not), or watch them

 

[NiiChan]

that guy is a bit wrong...not completely...but some events may be mandatory bc it's about the main plot, you could put a skip-scene button or something for those mandatory sex-scenes

i mean, if Yuna's scenes are mandatory you either skip them(but they still happen, like it or not), or watch them

Yeah. I'll definitely try to experiment with the codes when I have enough time. It's still a bit challenging for me because I'm just borrowing someone's PC and I only have access to it during night time. But i will be adding this suggestion to my list and try to implement it next time.