So, I don’t know how I got here, but I guess I can share some details. This is the first game that I worked on as an editor/proof reader. “Worked on” is a stretch because while I worked on it, there were a bunch of bullshit going on in my family, so I didn’t get to show any of my editing to Kinky Shop.
He was a cool guy. I enjoyed having conversations with him. It was nice experience to edit this game (I edited over halfway through the prologue then skipped to first update after jump) because it made me confident when I started working with others later.
As far as this game goes, if Kinky Shop ever comes back to this, I think he should just drop all the content after the prologue. The prologue is clearly the best part and all the characters were really interesting and engaging. But after it was over. The polish went down significantly.
Not only that, but the Dana sharing stuff was super unnecessary. It did nothing to enhance the story, it seemed it just served a fetish. Which is fine, but as a story based game, it served more as a distraction.
I think the dev is incredibly talented which is why he should focus on the story everyone loved, not the tough guy/whoring story it became.
Personally, I wish the time skip was maybe at most 5-10 years. Like he left and came back. He’d meet the awesome trans mechanic girl who was really beautiful. Maybe he’ll ask questions about Rachel or even meet Dana normally and organically. Maybe we’d see the new skills he developed away and watch him conquer the city.
Just a thought. But This time leaving the whoring of Love Interests out please
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