Arguendo
Newbie
- Apr 22, 2023
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I never got to play the first iteration, which reportedly circled around college. Apparently that was an ok story, although I doubt the writing was much better.I literally was asking why the ratings were so low, this is the first comment I see. Good to know I guess, if the story is that sloppy ig ill just speed through the renders to get the scenes and see some of them to know kind of whats happening, if i can even make that much since from it lol
The final version however is a complete rewrite, but elements of the old story still lingers. The MC is employed as an intern, but there are lines about getting detention still in the story. And that's just one example.
Scenes and a lot of the dialogue appear disjointed, without context.
So it's quite obvious that this is not the original story, but a patchwork of new and old, that lacks coherency. It's sloppy at best and it doesn't help that the dialogue is borderline cringe throughout.
I wish it had a good story and writing, because the artwork is very good imho.