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Jun 25, 2021
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This VN looks like it has a lot of potential. The visuals are excellent and the MC seems good. There is a lot of content for an initial release/demo. There isn't much plot, but the characters are good. There are hints of some girl on girl action, and I'm looking forward to that.
The character models look great and the lighting is well done. The sex scene was very well executed.
The thing I worry about is the map section. It is not yet implemented, but a lot of games loose their pacing when they try to make the player search for the next story interaction on the map. It get tedious very quickly and kills the enthusiasm. I hope this VN doesn't fall into that pit.
 

G0DZillA

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Feb 23, 2022
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I think what patreon doesn't like is making a game with a girl under 18 so it will be wise to change that.
 

Ignazzio

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May 8, 2017
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From what I know MC is a mother of real life Lora from The Enchantress when she was young. Story depicts her struggle with her feelings toward her brother but it's not meant to have incest in it. Really well written, great renders and meaningful choices - nothing really to pick on. High quality standalone game, not to mention a side-story. Worth checking out and supporting
 

hrm

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Jul 24, 2017
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incest worshipers took over this topic, I don't understand why

I haven't seen any incest tags to justify so many of them here
You do realize that tags only indicate current content, right? And it's not a deal breaker or anything if a game doesn't have it, to me anyway. So I (and others) will often check out new stuff on the latest updates page to see what they're about. And then this game's description practically screams "incest" but then has a "family (not incest)" in the genre, so people are understandably confused.
 

killer 13

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You do realize that tags only indicate current content, right? And it's not a deal breaker or anything if a game doesn't have it, to me anyway. So I (and others) will often check out new stuff on the latest updates page to see what they're about. And then this game's description practically screams "incest" but then has a "family (not incest)" in the genre, so people are understandably confused.
I think the developer should speak up about this, so far he's been quiet leaving everyone confused
 

Hildegardt

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Oct 18, 2017
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Maybe they're only related in an attempt to alleviate the creepiness of an underage girl getting "convinced" by a dude who's 10 years older than her (and with a taste for unfortunate necklaces) to do a photoshoot in a "sexy Britney school girl outfit".
This kinda fails the "show, don't tell" rule. We're constantly told that the brother is a good guy, but he's shown to talk his sister into producing soft core kiddie porn.
 

Mrgt's Slave

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Maybe they're only related in an attempt to alleviate the creepiness of an underage girl getting "convinced" by a dude who's 10 years older than her (and with a taste for unfortunate necklaces) to do a photoshoot in a "sexy Britney school girl outfit".
This kinda fails the "show, don't tell" rule. We're constantly told that the brother is a good guy, but he's shown to talk his sister into producing soft core kiddie porn.
He's Mark Dorcel
 

gambit87

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Dec 27, 2017
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Looks pretty good at first. I'm curious to see how it goes, especially as far as the possible relationships are concerned. And their possible possible.
 

Kadajko

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I say this every time I see something like this in games - if you don't want to offer meaningful choice to the player don't offer any choice at all. The very first choice offered to the player is whether they want to try the photoshoot, but regardless of what you answer you STILL go to the photoshoot. The second choice offered is whether you propose to hire Abigail or go to a different cashier, regardless of what you choose you still go to the other cashier. If this was just a non-kinetic visual novel that didn't offer any choice I would just happily read through it and I would have zero problems, but the ''choices'' were offered and I got into the mood for a kinetic novel, only for the game to go ''syke, get shit on, there is no choice!'' It is extremely dissapointing.
 
4.60 star(s) 17 Votes