VN Ren'Py Lilith Rising [v1.0.3ns] [Jubei]

[StingerWolf]

Thank you so much, we actually made this song original in the studio with my composer she also did the vocals!
Also I decided to do it in English as most players would not be able to relate, so I compromised in putting the original language with the substiles in parenthesis .

Would be awesome if you could review the thread as well, it may help others give it a try.

Thanks again!

Thanks for the information! Well I usually wait for more content before a review, to have a better picture and give a better review like that. But if you insist that I review it with this content, it is your call, confirm it please.
I have found a typo where the Queen talks after the Tournament, you mix up the word wander with wonder. But that was the only one that I have found.
If I may ask where are you from? I am guessing you are not native English speaker. (As most devs here)

 

[Deleted member 5644832]

Good VN with good characters so far . Can't wait for next update. The music was really good as well and reading that it was all made in studio by the team it just gives more value to the VN.

 

[Joubei]

Another sneak peek from the lake:

 

[Joshy92]

I really like the game so far I just feel like the mc is kind of an arsehole.

 

[Joubei]

I really like the game so far I just feel like the mc is kind of an arsehole.

In episode 1, prior to the start of the story, he was a spoiled brat, cowardly and selfish, that's his growth arc,
and it's a big part of the story, him growing up from that "manchild" to the leader of the resistance, respectable and kind,
and it's also part of the reason why his companions especially Valery is so shocked by his behavior all the time when he becomes more respectable.

I'm guessing you've only played the beginning of the game, I'd suggest finishing ep2, then there's even more growth in ep3 and so on.

 

[Joshy92]

In episode 1, prior to the start of the story, he was a spoiled brat, cowardly and selfish, that's his growth arc,
and it's a big part of the story, him growing up from that "manchild" to the leader of the resistance, respectable and kind,
and it's also part of the reason why his companions especially Valery is so shocked by his behavior all the time when he becomes more respectable.

I'm guessing you've only played the beginning of the game, I'd suggest finishing ep2, then there's even more growth in ep3 and so on.

Yeah i'm gonna be honest when i thought

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I will restart when it comes to steam.

I like the sound of that character arc most games I see on this site the mc is always a creepy perv lol

P.S. thanks for clarifying it for me

 

[nzn]

In episode 1, prior to the start of the story, he was a spoiled brat, cowardly and selfish, that's his growth arc,
and it's a big part of the story, him growing up from that "manchild" to the leader of the resistance, respectable and kind,
and it's also part of the reason why his companions especially Valery is so shocked by his behavior all the time when he becomes more respectable.

I'm guessing you've only played the beginning of the game, I'd suggest finishing ep2, then there's even more growth in ep3 and so on.

I'd say the growth arc is still not finished, but he has improved. honestly i imagine it will continue in the positive direction, but since I've seen some games flail with the concept iunderstand having doubts or being too jaded on this stuff. this game shows promise but sadly that can still fail these days

 

[Joubei]

Yeah i'm gonna be honest when i thought

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I will restart when it comes to steam.

I like the sound of that character arc most games I see on this site the mc is always a creepy perv lol

P.S. thanks for clarifying it for me

If you mean Gwen, you should try the next episode, the whole reason for the story is the rescue arc
Otherwise the prince would probably stay as a hermit in the woods heh.

 

[Joshy92]

If you mean Gwen, you should try the next episode, the whole reason for the story is the rescue arc
Otherwise the prince would probably stay as a hermit in the woods heh.

Yeah I meant Gwen she is by far my favourite.

Either way though I will still wait to play it again when it's on steam because if I find out a game I like on here is coming to steam I stop playing it on here and wait for it to release on there (this Race of life etc.)

From what I did play though I have got to say I think it's a really good game I don't dislike any of the girls and for a game on this site for me that's a rarity lol.

 

[Joubei]

I'd say the growth arc is still not finished, but he has improved. honestly i imagine it will continue in the positive direction, but since I've seen some games flail with the concept I understand having doubts or being too jaded on this stuff. this game shows promise but sadly that can still fail these days

I'd like to be more optimistic, that growth arc is central to the story, as is the story arc,
If you notice all the good entertainment (movies, tv, games, comics) have this as a core of the narrative.

 

[Joubei]

Yeah I meant Gwen she is by far my favourite.

Either way though I will still wait to play it again when it's on steam because if I find out a game I like on here is coming to steam I stop playing it on here and wait for it to release on there (this Race of life etc.)

From what I did play though I have got to say I think it's a really good game I don't dislike any of the girls and for a game on this site for me that's a rarity lol.

The main reason I release it here, is to get good feedback from people who are passionate about it,
and this is mainly so I can polish the game as much as possible before the steam release.

So if you have opinions and you'd like to see them in the steam version, F95 is your stage,

I'm of the mind that sandpaper is rough but makes things more shinny in the end .

 

[Joshy92]

The main reason I release it here, is to get good feedback from people who are passionate about it,
and this is mainly so I can polish the game as much as possible before the steam release.

So if you have opinions and you'd like to see them in the steam version, F95 is your stage,

I'm of the mind that sandpaper is rough but makes things more shinny in the end .

Agree it is a good site for gauging how people like your game and getting opinions. I was just meaning I'm happy it's coming to steam eventually not a lot of games I like on here do.

 

[nzn]

I'd like to be more optimistic, that growth arc is central to the story, as is the story arc,
If you notice all the good entertainment (movies, tv, games, comics) have this as a core of the narrative.

oh don't gt me wrong, if it is done well it is a core part of most media...
if done badly tho...
as said i probably was burned one too many times. i do see good potential in this and am cautiously hopeful.
also i find the dagger powers to be awesome, but hope it won't be to overpowered

 

[Joubei]

oh don't gt me wrong, if it is done well it is a core part of most media...
if done badly tho...
as said i probably was burned one too many times. i do see good potential in this and am cautiously hopeful.
also i find the dagger powers to be awesome, but hope it won't be to overpowered

That's a good observation, and will allow the story to progress with more and more powerful enemies,
as in most stories the "cannon fodder" are there just to show some abilities and minor inconveniences, the mini-bosses and bosses are the more interesting fights, and they will always be "on the edge".

Also it's an intro to magical weapons that will be needed to fight off the supernatural beings, like the demons from the start of the game, as normal weapons don't really work on them, where they are completely out of reach at that point, especially the skull demon.

Not to mentions the bigger more powerful baddies heh.

 

[BGRW2020]

So far it looks great, Gwen is aparently still alive and a rescue will ensue. I like this also hopefully we won't ruin the story with any NTR as this is a killer to any story to me
But so far great job

 

[Joubei]

So far it looks great, Gwen is aparently still alive and a rescue will ensue. I like this also hopefully we won't ruin the story with any NTR as this is a killer to any story to me
But so far great job

Absolutely no NTR!!!

 

[Havik79]

Absolutely no NTR!!!

Are you sure, if this is not a harem, and if you reject a girl, and plan to let her find love elsewhere, even if we never see her have sex some people consider that ntr.

 

[Joshy92]

Absolutely no NTR!!!

Hey i was wondering can we also avoid the love interests making out or having sex with each other especially Gwen?
I don't want her to touch anyone else.

 

[nzn]

Are you sure, if this is not a harem, and if you reject a girl, and plan to let her find love elsewhere, even if we never see her have sex some people consider that ntr.

well helpfully NTR has a definition (it is a shorthand for about 3 words so the definition is wonky but it has it)
to be also fair the ntr crowd doesn't help the conversation either (it's nt ntr because its not with a human is an actual statement I've seen), not to mension trying to both shoehorn it everywhere while also springing it on people.

 

[motseer]

Are you sure, if this is not a harem, and if you reject a girl, and plan to let her find love elsewhere, even if we never see her have sex some people consider that ntr.

That's a pretty specific set of circumstances. Why would we care about what someone does when we can't see them and don't have anything to do with them? How would we even know what they do? He said she said? It doesn't matter whether they continue to be part of the story or not... If the protagonist has rejected any possibility of a romantic relationship with them... they do whatever. It's not ntr and anyone who says it is... is an idiot and should be ignored. Hell, now that I think about it... let the definitions speak...

Netorare is a genre of anime, manga, or video game focused on infidelity. A genre of cuckoldry pornography where a protagonist's love interest or close associate is corrupted and taken away by an antagonist.

Netori is a counterpart tag to Netorare, however instead of playing as someone who has his significant lover stolen, you play as the one doing the stealing.

And just for good measure...

Infidelity is the breaking of a promise to remain faithful to a romantic partner.

Someone who has been rejected is NOT a lover, love interest, partner or a significant anything. Therefor it is not possible to meet the requirements of any ntr definition.