I've said before there are a lot of scenes with Fred. He seems to become the main character. But I understand that Lily has not yet entered the excitement, she is still learning. I would love to see the development of the story with school children in the library, and a drunken group of guys in the bar, but apparently it remains for the sweet. The scenes outside the city were magnificent, and it was very sad to go back to the city to Fred. It becomes very much, but I hope it is done for the sake of the story, and not because it is ordered by subscribers. I want the authors to write their own history without listening to anyone.

Sorry my English