VN Ren'Py Lineage or Legacy [Ch.4 Act II] [Biting The Bullet]

[superseveneight]

This game has been really great so far, looking forward to the update!
But I gotta say, the mother tease is off the charts.

 

[BitingTheBullet]

Act II is released on Patreon for those interested!
It'll go public in 2 weeks (15th of March)

 

[bebiho]

Act II is released on Patreon for those interested!
It'll go public in 2 weeks (15th of March)

fuck 2 weeks, nothing like the present. lfg subbing

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[BitingTheBullet]

WIP for an android port for those hesitant. Currently working off of a laptop so it'll take a bit of time. Should be available by tomorrow.

 

[Ray_D]

Act II is released on Patreon for those interested!
It'll go public in 2 weeks (15th of March)

what a coincidence the public version, it will come out the same day of the end of season 4 of wakfu, it seems that my Friday the 15th will be twice as fun for me.

 

[EmoBot]

what a coincidence the public version, it will come out the same day of the end of season 4 of wakfu, it seems that my Friday the 15th will be twice as fun for me.

wtf is wakfu? can you at least fuck your mom in there?

 

[Ray_D]

wtf is wakfu? can you at least fuck your mom in there?

It's a French animated series that I've been waiting for 7 long years. and if you want a game where you fuck the mother I'm going to recommend Demon Deals.

 

[Facttho]

This MC looks like Chet Holmgren

 

[SonsOfLiberty]

Act II is released on Patreon for those interested!
It'll go public in 2 weeks (15th of March)

Is the "patch" coming into to play (cough) yet?

 

[MrSancini]

My only criticism in general is the lack of a slide for the text speed (not a fan of instant text on ren'py), otherwise, a very enjoyable experience.

 

[BitingTheBullet]

After about a million tries, I finally got the android patch working and uploaded. For those wanting the apk specifically, it's up on patreon.
Go and have fun!

 

[Aiden619]

Its going to be disappointing not to see Eliza in the upcoming update... But i hope she will make a return in Act 3... BitingTheBullet

 

[Facttho]

Its going to be disappointing not to see Eliza in the upcoming update... But i hope she will make a return in Act 3... BitingTheBullet

Small sighting tho

 

[Aiden619]

Small sighting tho

Small... Like Texting or something was mentioned... I wanted her to be physically present with MC to take the story forward after Motel Night...

 

[Dessolos]

Playing this for the first time not sure if it's a intentional easter egg or not. But when ordering food when with Torrie you order by number and not what it is. I noticed all the number's that can appear through the dialogue end up being the same number's that Big Smoke orders during the fast food scene in GTA San Andreas, the only one missing was a #7 but close enough to count as a easter egg if you ask me. Makes me wish I named my MC Big Smoke.

 

[Facttho]

Man i kinda liked playing as a asshole fat dude, some of the early scenes in this was funny af

 

[BitingTheBullet]

she's

Its going to be disappointing not to see Eliza in the upcoming update... But i hope she will make a return in Act 3... BitingTheBullet

She's not in Act 2 and won't be in person till ch5 but will make more and more appearances in between. Right now is just a glimpse of it.

 

[BitingTheBullet]

My only criticism in general is the lack of a slide for the text speed (not a fan of instant text on ren'py), otherwise, a very enjoyable experience.

I'll look into it. Should be fairly easy enough to add unless I need to add it to every line of dialogue or something.

 

[BitingTheBullet]

Wow! This VN is awesome.

Minor complaints is the transitioning between animations could use some work.

Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Could you breakdown what you mean by the transitions? Is it more so narratively where things escalate or visually where they just jump from scene to scene?

 

[BitingTheBullet]

Took a liking to Alejandro. She strikes me as not a yandere but as a high level "Justin Bieber fangirl" type.
I generally don't like this theme when it's used in games for the main LI because it flattens the relationship (we as mc don't have to do anything because we are unconditionally loved without any kind of effort, contribution on our part), but here (probably because we are looking at it both as a player and mc from the side) it was really well done - it was fun and entertaining so congrats are in order.

As we were extremely quickly shown the existence of the fangirl theme and the information (rumor) that she is after the breakup, I can see a lot of potential for an interesting transformation of this character into a "bad ass girl with a broken heart" who gets tough to prevent the world from hurting her again.

Saw that she was placed in the "Unlikely" category - a pity, nevertheless I am interested in how her story will turn out.

I'm very unlikely to move Alejandra's story further than the bios entry and any background storytelling. She might have a one-off scene with MC in the far future but very hard to say with certainty for now.