Deleted member 207916

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Sylvia is a LI but Abel and her aren't twins. The twins are Linda and Daniella.
Oh, my bad. I did figure out earlier either there is a mistake in info about characters or since Abel is 21 and Sylvie is 19 and if I followed story correctly those two are blood related so I thought "twins" tag is for them. I think for this game there needs to be "incest" tag, at least in this forum.

Otherwise the story, MC development and other character models are great.

Also do you have plans to release this game on Steam? From there I can support you since I don't use Patreon or SS.
 

BitingTheBullet

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Oh, my bad. I did figure out earlier either there is a mistake in info about characters or since Abel is 21 and Sylvie is 19 and if I followed story correctly those two are blood related so I thought "twins" tag is for them. I think for this game there needs to be "incest" tag, at least in this forum.

Otherwise the story, MC development and other character models are great.

Also do you have plans to release this game on Steam? From there I can support you since I don't use Patreon or SS.
I don't wanna put the incest tag yet simply because there isn't any. Same applies to other prospective tags.
As for Steam. I'm on and off about when exactly I'll be adding it there but I'm aiming for somewhere around Q4 of this year.
 

Peri3481

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BitingTheBullet I like this but the 'family' element feels a bit stilted. Lauren calls Sylvia 'the girl' in conversation with Michelle, and Walter appears as 'Father' rather than Dad or anything more normal. Yet if there's a page early on where the player determines relationships and familiar names (Mom, Dad etc) then I missed it. It's as though the game was made for a particular platform and then not fully patched. But there's no patch, so...
 

BitingTheBullet

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BitingTheBullet I like this but the 'family' element feels a bit stilted. Lauren calls Sylvia 'the girl' in conversation with Michelle, and Walter appears as 'Father' rather than Dad or anything more normal. Yet if there's a page early on where the player determines relationships and familiar names (Mom, Dad etc) then I missed it. It's as though the game was made for a particular platform and then not fully patched. But there's no patch, so...
They're intentional. There's no naming page or anything.
 

Porthas

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BitingTheBullet Played through twice. I really like this AVN. Going to leave some more detailed feedback in a bit.

Quick thing for you to consider. May want to add the "Buy Me A Coffee" pay route for income. I like to drop cash for devs like you who are making a quality game, but I don't want to get tied to yet another subscription to keep track of, I don't want to give money to Patreon because they censor stuff too much, and I'm also not interested in all that extra stuff on like Subscribestar or Patreon like the screenshots, polls, etc.

Just a polite suggestion. Good job, it's a good start, interesting characters and story I want to see where it goes.

I think my biggest complaint so far is the two year "getting in shape" period where he seems to not keep in contact with - not only his family - but also with the girls/people he's with at the school. It... kinda hits a bit hard.

Anyway, have a nice day, cheers!

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wapoww

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BitingTheBullet Played through twice. I really like this AVN. Going to leave some more detailed feedback in a bit.

Quick thing for you to consider. May want to add the "Buy Me A Coffee" pay route for income. I like to drop cash for devs like you who are making a quality game, but I don't want to get tied to yet another subscription to keep track of, I don't want to give money to Patreon because they censor stuff too much, and I'm also not interested in all that extra stuff on like Subscribestar or Patreon like the screenshots, polls, etc.

Just a polite suggestion. Good job, it's a good start, interesting characters and story I want to see where it goes.

I think my biggest complaint so far is the two year "getting in shape" period where he seems to not keep in contact with - not only his family - but also with the girls/people he's with at the school. It... kinda hits a bit hard.

Anyway, have a nice day, cheers!

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BitingTheBullet

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Thank you for playing, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I don't have any intentions to set up accounts for other donation services but if you want, you can donate on itch or if you're interested, you can spread the game around to others.

Best way I can explain the two years is a mix of mc's introverted nature being even more heightened after the attack, slowly growing distant to the family overtime mainly because of the father and a somewhat extreme example of tunnel visioning with a new purpose.
 
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