It seems that you are content with 200$ patreon money, is this a hobby for you? I would reconsider everything after seeing this huge interest towards the only woman who isn't a love interest or just abandon the project. Not worth it for 200$. I welcome your enthusiasm but it doesn't make much sense for me as a business graduate.
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It's a hobby/passion project first. I've wanted to write stories since I was a teenager when I first started reading manga and comics. Visual novels are a great medium for storytelling so I decided to go with it but I was wary enough to know that if I made a non-avn, no one would click on it let alone read it.
With the allure of sex, at least the people looking for plot driven avns would go through it.
As for patreon, I'm grateful for all the donations as it helps fund with purchasing assets and will help in upgrading my system for better quality down the road but it's not my priority. If I was really after subscriptions you'd see a completely different and even degenerate game with predatory transactions/reward tiers.
My first priority is improving overall quality. It's the main reason I invite criticism because it genuinely helps with providing clarity. A lot of people didn't like Savannah's character at first and I couldn't pinpoint why exactly but when I saw the positive reception for Eliza, it helped me realise the changes that needed to be made and which direction to go for future of the project.
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Yeah, I'm likely to continue following the game either way because there are a lot of other things I really like about the VN, but I'm not into cheating/characters who cheat, and I generally do several playthroughs of a VN each focusing on a different LI, so random hookups end up feeling out of place.
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I see your point but mc isn't in a formal relationship yet. He's just doing his thing for now until the player gets to make those choices. But if you're referring to cheating from Eliza's perspective then I can understand.
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For whatever it's worth, I liked Savannah's character more before the changes.
She seemed more... mature? Adult? I'm not sure how to put it. It's like she had her own life and just happened to bump into the main character and spend the night with him on a whim. She didn't realize that he was virgin before they had sex, and she was reasonably kind (although brutally honest) about his debut performance. It fit really well with the scene where the MC thought he might be falling for her, and his older friends were telling him to slow down a bit. Same goes for her second scene where you visit her at work.
But the new scenes don't work as well because they had some more meaningful conversations about their parents and such. Plus, she now sleeps in the bed with him instead of her telling him not to get greedy and he has to take his friends bed. The new version of Savannah no longer stands out as being all that different from the other college girls. She's lost a lot of her edge and just seems to be more of a generic love interest that you would find in any game here.
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Thanks for making a story that makes sense. I wouldn't have believe this MC fucking is own mother which look like a normal mom tbh.
Btw I'm glad I wasn't alone loving Eliza.
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mom not being a li is fucking criminal.
holy hell is like my boi dont want people supporting the game
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So was the mom wearing transparent sleepwear a one time thing? I don't mind the no lewd stuff with the son but if that kind of stuff continues I'm happy.
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Wasn't a one-time thing although I admit that I overdid the transparency with the nightgown.
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It's gonna take a while. I've been away for 3 weeks now but I'm getting back home on Saturday.
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This would just make me want the mom more LoL I have an attraction to LI in these VNs that have average or even subpar looks or age but give them mommy hips and a nice rack and its hopefully preggo time. I hope the other family girls are fair game, Michelle has a quiet sexy look and Mikaela is nice.
Love the game the story is good, I like the MC and the models of the girls in the game are very beautiful and believeable. The story with Eliza is very plausible and was fun to live. Sad there wont be an incest path with mom, that transparent dress had me hoping until I came here to the forum but thats OK. Cant wait to see how the game develops and how you grow as a developer! Will be subbing in the very near future.
Edit: Forgot about Annabelle, shes perfect. I do hope we have the chance to get many LIs pregnant, even if the timeframe of the game is such that you dont see physical changes, even knowing or having the "reveal" scene would be great. In fact ill just go Sub right now to help haha.
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good storyline , lots of potential for mc's lineage path , i lust for mom too but c’est la vie , it is also nice to see many ebony ladies in the story , so many avns seem to leave them out , just hope that many of them are in the mc's plan for pregnancy to further his lineage route ; lets see .... 3 months in a quarter , 4 weeks in a month , 1 lady for each weak , that makes an even dozen OH YEEEEAAH
She reminds me of a female altmer.
The main character reminds me of Lupin... or someone else. Can't say for sure
the story is alright. I like it. But watching him shave his beard is such horror.