VN Ren'Py Lineage or Legacy [Ch.4 Act II] [Biting The Bullet]

[Vasy]

You'll still have the option of cutting her off in the future. Just want to make the motel fling canon to add another layer to the plot for ease of convenience.

Yeah, I'm likely to continue following the game either way because there are a lot of other things I really like about the VN, but I'm not into cheating/characters who cheat, and I generally do several playthroughs of a VN each focusing on a different LI, so random hookups end up feeling out of place.

 

[BitingTheBullet]

Yeah, I'm likely to continue following the game either way because there are a lot of other things I really like about the VN, but I'm not into cheating/characters who cheat, and I generally do several playthroughs of a VN each focusing on a different LI, so random hookups end up feeling out of place.

I see your point but mc isn't in a formal relationship yet. He's just doing his thing for now until the player gets to make those choices. But if you're referring to cheating from Eliza's perspective then I can understand.

 

[Alfred the Fallen]

My first priority is improving overall quality. It's the main reason I invite criticism because it genuinely helps with providing clarity. A lot of people didn't like Savannah's character at first and I couldn't pinpoint why exactly but when I saw the positive reception for Eliza, it helped me realise the changes that needed to be made and which direction to go for future of the project.

For whatever it's worth, I liked Savannah's character more before the changes.

She seemed more... mature? Adult? I'm not sure how to put it. It's like she had her own life and just happened to bump into the main character and spend the night with him on a whim. She didn't realize that he was virgin before they had sex, and she was reasonably kind (although brutally honest) about his debut performance. It fit really well with the scene where the MC thought he might be falling for her, and his older friends were telling him to slow down a bit. Same goes for her second scene where you visit her at work.

But the new scenes don't work as well because they had some more meaningful conversations about their parents and such. Plus, she now sleeps in the bed with him instead of her telling him not to get greedy and he has to take his friends bed. The new version of Savannah no longer stands out as being all that different from the other college girls. She's lost a lot of her edge and just seems to be more of a generic love interest that you would find in any game here.

 

[Mareeeeta]

Mini announcement about Mother:

To all the people who want lewd scenes with the mother, it's not happening. I understand if you're upset over my decision but please understand that it wasn't some half-hearted decision.

It's not something I have any intentions to cover and I'm really against doing it in the extra section too just because of other candidates.

A possible solution:
If you want to make your own mini parody/short story featuring the mother and mc and you know your way around Daz Studio, then you have my blessing. I've attached duf files to the thread so just download them and the assets associated with it.
Over time I'll keep updating it if it needs to be.

If you don't know how to use Daz3D, then you can just contact some of the guys on this website and ask them to do you a favor or something.

Have fun!

Thanks for making a story that makes sense. I wouldn't have believe this MC fucking is own mother which look like a normal mom tbh.

Btw I'm glad I wasn't alone loving Eliza.

 

[depeche mode]

can someone confirm if the dev is going to pull a nyx and give mom a fucking love interest

 

[Ray_D]

can someone confirm if the dev is going to pull a nyx and give mom a fucking love interest

no, he's not going to do it. He already said it.

 

[depeche mode]

mom not being a li is fucking criminal.

Likely: Costanza, Fiona, Kaylee, Torrie and Sylvia

50-50: Savannah, Lilith, Annabelle, Eliza, June

Unlikely: Mikaela, Ae-cha, Joanna, Linda, Alejandra, Zoella

Things might change around so take it all with a grain of salt.

holy hell is like my boi dont want people supporting the game

 

[OhGodNotAgain]

I wonder if Michelle was the mom people would act different?

 

[Rivin]

Mini announcement about Mother:

To all the people who want lewd scenes with the mother, it's not happening. I understand if you're upset over my decision but please understand that it wasn't some half-hearted decision.

It's not something I have any intentions to cover and I'm really against doing it in the extra section too just because of other candidates.

A possible solution:
If you want to make your own mini parody/short story featuring the mother and mc and you know your way around Daz Studio, then you have my blessing. I've attached duf files to the thread so just download them and the assets associated with it.
Over time I'll keep updating it if it needs to be.

If you don't know how to use Daz3D, then you can just contact some of the guys on this website and ask them to do you a favor or something.

Have fun!

So was the mom wearing transparent sleepwear a one time thing? I don't mind the no lewd stuff with the son but if that kind of stuff continues I'm happy.

 

[BitingTheBullet]

So was the mom wearing transparent sleepwear a one time thing? I don't mind the no lewd stuff with the son but if that kind of stuff continues I'm happy.

Wasn't a one-time thing although I admit that I overdid the transparency with the nightgown.

 

[Aiden619]

BitingTheBullet so what is the progress when will the next part be released???

 

[BitingTheBullet]

BitingTheBullet so what is the progress when will the next part be released???

It's gonna take a while. I've been away for 3 weeks now but I'm getting back home on Saturday.

 

[Ass Fan]

It's gonna take a while. I've been away for 3 weeks now but I'm getting back home on Saturday.

I hope everything goes well until then.

 

[Catblaster69]

The best looking woman BY FAR in the game isn't a love interest. I mean, you could make a much older and uglier mother and that would suit your game more. Don't blueball your potential patrons. Not a good business model for sure.

This would just make me want the mom more LoL I have an attraction to LI in these VNs that have average or even subpar looks or age but give them mommy hips and a nice rack and its hopefully preggo time. I hope the other family girls are fair game, Michelle has a quiet sexy look and Mikaela is nice.

Love the game the story is good, I like the MC and the models of the girls in the game are very beautiful and believeable. The story with Eliza is very plausible and was fun to live. Sad there wont be an incest path with mom, that transparent dress had me hoping until I came here to the forum but thats OK. Cant wait to see how the game develops and how you grow as a developer! Will be subbing in the very near future.

Edit: Forgot about Annabelle, shes perfect. I do hope we have the chance to get many LIs pregnant, even if the timeframe of the game is such that you dont see physical changes, even knowing or having the "reveal" scene would be great. In fact ill just go Sub right now to help haha.

 

[BitingTheBullet]

This would just make me want the mom more LoL I have an attraction to LI in these VNs that have average or even subpar looks or age but give them mommy hips and a nice rack and its hopefully preggo time.

Love the game the story is good, I like the MC and the models of the girls in the game are very beautiful and believeable. Sad there wont be an incest path with mom, that transparent dress had me hoping until I came here to the forum but thats OK. Cant wait to see how the game develops and how you grow as a developer! Will be subbing in the very near future.

Thank you for the kind words.

 

[xmajicx]

This would just make me want the mom more LoL I have an attraction to LI in these VNs that have average or even subpar looks or age but give them mommy hips and a nice rack and its hopefully preggo time. I hope the other family girls are fair game, Michelle has a quiet sexy look and Mikaela is nice.

Love the game the story is good, I like the MC and the models of the girls in the game are very beautiful and believeable. The story with Eliza is very plausible and was fun to live. Sad there wont be an incest path with mom, that transparent dress had me hoping until I came here to the forum but thats OK. Cant wait to see how the game develops and how you grow as a developer! Will be subbing in the very near future.

Edit: Forgot about Annabelle, shes perfect. I do hope we have the chance to get many LIs pregnant, even if the timeframe of the game is such that you dont see physical changes, even knowing or having the "reveal" scene would be great. In fact ill just go Sub right now to help haha.

good storyline , lots of potential for mc's lineage path , i lust for mom too but c’est la vie , it is also nice to see many ebony ladies in the story , so many avns seem to leave them out , just hope that many of them are in the mc's plan for pregnancy to further his lineage route ; lets see .... 3 months in a quarter , 4 weeks in a month , 1 lady for each weak , that makes an even dozen OH YEEEEAAH

 

[wapoww]

She reminds me of a female altmer.

The main character reminds me of Lupin... or someone else. Can't say for sure

the story is alright. I like it. But watching him shave his beard is such horror.

 

[OptimusCrime]

I live in agony knowing the mom isn't a love interest, but I can respect the dev sticking to his guns on the story he wants to tell, but i just have to ask one thing...

DID YOU HAVETO MAKE HER SUCH A SMOKE SHOW!? she mogs everyone else... anyways....

I'm on the Torrie train. She's adorable and love her style.

 

[BitingTheBullet]

I live in agony knowing the mom isn't a love interest, but I can respect the dev sticking to his guns on the story he wants to tell, but i just have to ask one thing...

DID YOU HAVETO MAKE HER SUCH A SMOKE SHOW!? she mogs everyone else... anyways....

I'm on the Torrie train. She's adorable and love her style.

Truth be told, I'm actually really surprised a lot of people like her design. I designed her completely based on personal taste and was expecting most to just gloss over her so you can imagine my surprise when I come to find out people wanted her more than anyone else.
Anyways, thanks for playing and a happy new year.

 

[OptimusCrime]

Truth be told, I'm actually really surprised a lot of people like her design. I designed her completely based on personal taste and was expecting most to just gloss over her so you can imagine my surprise when I come to find out people wanted her more than anyone else.
Anyways, thanks for playing and a happy new year.

Well, you've got excellent damn taste is why everyone's diggin her. I got to ask if you're going to have this game up on steam as well so I can grab it there?

And happy New Years to you man. Cheers.