- Nov 13, 2022
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honestly i thought Alex was a girl when i first saw him, then they were calling him a guy and i was in shock..though he was one of those trannie things..but then he wants to get some pussy so i guess he is just designed to look like a fembot.
Really hope Savannah an Lilith become love interests too those two are my favourites.
- Jun 1, 2022
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It was hard choice but ended up voting for April and Piper I had April for sure on lockdown but for the second choice it was between Piper and Mikaela but picked Piper in the end because we don't often see dark skin girls plus I like her, I also wanted to vote for very different girls for more variety
- Jan 7, 2021
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For me its Eliza and April.
Still waiting for Eliza to make an appearance the game once again and progress on the motel scene....
- Jul 25, 2017
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same Eliza and April I liked their content the most
- Jul 25, 2017
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both were really good this update not gonna lie but I think I like April's slightly more
- Nov 13, 2022
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No, you like femboys, don't use the protagonist as an excuse.
- Jan 5, 2020
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- Jul 25, 2017
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Probably going to be awhile since the MC moved back home for 2 months. My theory right now is we will have a choice at some point of staying home and working for our father or not. I suspect there might be 2 sets of main girls depending on the choice we take and the university and home town segment of the game is just a introduction to them.
It's not a good theory / gut feeling I admit because of dev time or whatever but I don't see how else we are going to get to spend time with the girls from the other town otherwise. Since there is no reason for them to come to us, or the girls from our home town to come with us when we go back to university. Even time skips I think would feel weird if we are bouncing between both towns alot.
- Apr 9, 2018
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Working on a Mac only version. Should be uploaded by tonight once my internet starts working again.
- Oct 29, 2017
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Why do I get the feeling Torri is gonna pull a Leah at some point, interested or not? Asking for future Therapy Sessions.
- Apr 2, 2020
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PRE-REVIEW (not quite finished CH4 ACTII)
There are a LOT of things I really like about this game:
- the models (in general) are interesting and not the same old faces, expressive too. I think the father and Mikaela are extremely well done (character-wise too, interesting)
- the plot, while nothing too fanciful, works fine and maintains immersion
- the MC (weaknesses and strengths; complex)
- the stats and UI are well designed and easy to use and understand. STR/INT/CHA is a nice combo for players customisation and so far the author(s) is implementing player choices well
- a variety of potential LIs each with a good semblance of unique personality and motivations while avoiding some/a lot of the tropes
I do have a few reservations:
- (minor) I would have made the MC financially independant, like a grandparent providing an education fund for the MC [ok mo whatabout the sister?] that bypasses his father's control. It would make much more sense imho, and seriously the part-time IT job is unneccessary again in my eyes
- (minor) the mother looks younger than the 24 year old nurse
- (major) MC's relationship with his mother, his father and the whole 2 month thing. Sorry but that's not working for me. The story behind MC leaving home needs more tension and drama. Give the MC a reason(s) to not have spoken to a single family member. Make the mum either weak and utterly dominated by the father and siding against her son, or have father basically throw out MC, generate that hate, but have MC secretly in contact with mother and sister. But as it is THIS IS THE WEAKEST LINK. The MC has undergone a dramatic life change (the positive crux of the story) but decides to go and spend 2 months with a family he hasn't spoken to in 2 years? UGH?! Completely breaks immersion and it doesn't make any sense. Here's a solution, rewrite and have one of the immediate family members (mom, dad, sis) in hospital or dead or missing; personally I'd make it either the mom or the sis as that would create far more tension, everyone hates the dad already (good job btw). But not 2 months and not because of a single text message. Fix this and your work will be remembered... and don't take them presents.
Another suggestion. I don't like the mother and sister's characters. I think the mother needs some tweaks but needs more depth (like something annoying about her) and the sister is basically dull as dishwater (yaaaawn!). Make the mum bitchy and resentful to her daughter (a younger her)? Make the sis a nerd/intelligent/rebel (smarter-than-mom route) or dumb as a box of rocks/daddy's girl/nasty (mom jealous of relationship); the father-daughter relationship could be an interesting development. I'll provide an example... you made Charlie's aunt more believable and 3D than both the mom and the sis, and she has a cameo performance. Why? Cause and effects. Attention to detail. Uniqueness. Charlie's aunt has all of these BECAUSE the auther created her so. A small role but a well thought-out role. They could do so much better with the mom/sis.
Good luck.
EDIT: the "bad" sister could be a cheerleader and historically antagonised MC bc they were over-weight. Make the sis self-centred, stupid and selfish. Give her life!
There are a LOT of things I really like about this game:
- the models (in general) are interesting and not the same old faces, expressive too. I think the father and Mikaela are extremely well done (character-wise too, interesting)
- the plot, while nothing too fanciful, works fine and maintains immersion
- the MC (weaknesses and strengths; complex)
- the stats and UI are well designed and easy to use and understand. STR/INT/CHA is a nice combo for players customisation and so far the author(s) is implementing player choices well
- a variety of potential LIs each with a good semblance of unique personality and motivations while avoiding some/a lot of the tropes
I do have a few reservations:
- (minor) I would have made the MC financially independant, like a grandparent providing an education fund for the MC [ok mo whatabout the sister?] that bypasses his father's control. It would make much more sense imho, and seriously the part-time IT job is unneccessary again in my eyes
- (minor) the mother looks younger than the 24 year old nurse
- (major) MC's relationship with his mother, his father and the whole 2 month thing. Sorry but that's not working for me. The story behind MC leaving home needs more tension and drama. Give the MC a reason(s) to not have spoken to a single family member. Make the mum either weak and utterly dominated by the father and siding against her son, or have father basically throw out MC, generate that hate, but have MC secretly in contact with mother and sister. But as it is THIS IS THE WEAKEST LINK. The MC has undergone a dramatic life change (the positive crux of the story) but decides to go and spend 2 months with a family he hasn't spoken to in 2 years? UGH?! Completely breaks immersion and it doesn't make any sense. Here's a solution, rewrite and have one of the immediate family members (mom, dad, sis) in hospital or dead or missing; personally I'd make it either the mom or the sis as that would create far more tension, everyone hates the dad already (good job btw). But not 2 months and not because of a single text message. Fix this and your work will be remembered... and don't take them presents.
Another suggestion. I don't like the mother and sister's characters. I think the mother needs some tweaks but needs more depth (like something annoying about her) and the sister is basically dull as dishwater (yaaaawn!). Make the mum bitchy and resentful to her daughter (a younger her)? Make the sis a nerd/intelligent/rebel (smarter-than-mom route) or dumb as a box of rocks/daddy's girl/nasty (mom jealous of relationship); the father-daughter relationship could be an interesting development. I'll provide an example... you made Charlie's aunt more believable and 3D than both the mom and the sis, and she has a cameo performance. Why? Cause and effects. Attention to detail. Uniqueness. Charlie's aunt has all of these BECAUSE the auther created her so. A small role but a well thought-out role. They could do so much better with the mom/sis.
Good luck.
EDIT: the "bad" sister could be a cheerleader and historically antagonised MC bc they were over-weight. Make the sis self-centred, stupid and selfish. Give her life!
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