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as always your work is very sweet but don't rush you we will wait as long as it takes
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We appreciate the very hard work you are doing we don't deserve an amazing job you are doing
- Dec 30, 2020
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Hello people,
I would like to ask your opinion, I felt daring and painted the guild on the outside... but I have always felt that the exterior is not my thing... well, I would like to ask what do you think?
Any suggestion is welcome :3
I would like to ask your opinion, I felt daring and painted the guild on the outside... but I have always felt that the exterior is not my thing... well, I would like to ask what do you think?
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Any suggestion is welcome :3
- Dec 4, 2019
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I love the little detail of seeing through the window to the inside. An excellent little touch that adds more life to the scene, and that sky! Great stuff all around. I guess the only thing that looks strange is the stone going up the side? Looking at the building on the far left it doesn't seem like the buildings in town are made of stone, but a sort of wooden structure with plaster or terracotta walls (idk I'm not a building guy). Maybe make it a different tone than the stones in front of the guild house, something to make it not blend in with them. But ultimately I agree with Raf-Raf, and I know they have good taste since I keep seeing them in the comments of the games I enjoy lol.
- Oct 25, 2017
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Hi. First of all, love the work you're doing here. Can't wait for the day when it's complete to do another full playthrough with new detail.
Second, I am about to embarrass myself by giving my opinion on a field I know nothing about. But I love your work and would like you help you in any way that I can. Here goes my two cents.
I think you could lighten up the gradient of the ground and the building walls a little bit more as it doesn't seem to reflect the brightness of the sky and clouds that you portrayed here. Or maybe the tone down the godrays as it seems to imply really harsh sun.
There, I'll go away now.
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And here I thought kana hair is red
Anyway you're doing great
- Dec 30, 2020
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Actually the light comes from behind the houses, if you look inusuku did it like this by adding shadows to the houses on the wall/ceiling, so having light walls would be a bit contradictory.
The ground if I can make it more clear,
And I really put the rays for mere aesthetics, if you want I can remove them or make them smaller.
I base myself on the official colors given by inusuku for guildmates, I share an example with you.
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Thank you all for your opinions, I will work on improvements .
- Jan 10, 2019
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I like the colour tone, especially the contrast with the bright sky. Now, on the subject of nit-picking: I applaud the house inside but the more I look at it the more it differs in style from the rest. The top right window staying dark doesn't help. I'd personally suggest to keep it "dark", possibly add a hint of subdued reflection of one of the girls instead.
Only three other things: The medicine box is a bit dark coloured, her clothes should be a bit more subdued/light, and I think her hair were a lighter shade of pink. Talking about Yui, of course.
- Dec 30, 2020
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Thank you.
The idea of the reflection is really good but we must bear in mind that this image is used when the girls are outside and when they are not. So when they are not outside it would not make sense that there would be a reflection of someone who is not there.
As for the pictures of the girls, I really have to redo them because, as with the pictures of the bathroom, they are very dark or pale, so the ideal would be to redo them.
My original idea was to redo everything and share all the redone images... but I get the urge to see new images in color and I paint new images hehe.
But hey, I apologize if the work is delayed, but personally I think it will be worth the wait
- Jan 10, 2019
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Didn't think it too much, but that's true. Might be a good idea to put a reflection of Brother then, since he'd be facing the window anyway, that should be easier.
- Feb 16, 2022
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I love it! It captured the feeling of being in a fantasy world. If i have to suggest, i can say you can add more contrast or shadow to some details but other than that it more than passable work
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I could try but I do not promise to achieve something good since the brother can barely see his face, also if you look at the distance from where the brother is standing to the house it is quite a distance.
Sorry if this is not the answer you expected.
Oh sure, I'll try to polish it up a bit more.
- Jan 10, 2019
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Wasn't even wishful thinking, but one amongst many suggestions that was asked (in relation to improving the window, since you pointed out the backdrop remains the same regardless of number of girls, or the inside of the house). So, really up to you to see what would work best in the final product.