Wolf RPG Completed Living With Sister: Monochrome Fantasy [v2.0.0 + DLC] [Inusuku]

[Daseson]

I love the little detail of seeing through the window to the inside. An excellent little touch that adds more life to the scene, and that sky! Great stuff all around. I guess the only thing that looks strange is the stone going up the side? Looking at the building on the far left it doesn't seem like the buildings in town are made of stone, but a sort of wooden structure with plaster or terracotta walls (idk I'm not a building guy). Maybe make it a different tone than the stones in front of the guild house, something to make it not blend in with them. But ultimately I agree with Raf-Raf, and I know they have good taste since I keep seeing them in the comments of the games I enjoy lol.

Thank you very much ❤

I will try to make the change in the stones of the walls.

 

[Daseson]

Hi. First of all, love the work you're doing here. Can't wait for the day when it's complete to do another full playthrough with new detail.

Second, I am about to embarrass myself by giving my opinion on a field I know nothing about. But I love your work and would like you help you in any way that I can. Here goes my two cents.

I think you could lighten up the gradient of the ground and the building walls a little bit more as it doesn't seem to reflect the brightness of the sky and clouds that you portrayed here. Or maybe the tone down the godrays as it seems to imply really harsh sun.

There, I'll go away now.

Actually the light comes from behind the houses, if you look inusuku did it like this by adding shadows to the houses on the wall/ceiling, so having light walls would be a bit contradictory.

The ground if I can make it more clear,

And I really put the rays for mere aesthetics, if you want I can remove them or make them smaller.

And here I thought kana hair is red
Anyway you're doing great

I base myself on the official colors given by inusuku for guildmates, I share an example with you.

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Thank you all for your opinions, I will work on improvements .

 

[Settum]

Hello people,

I would like to ask your opinion, I felt daring and painted the guild on the outside... but I have always felt that the exterior is not my thing... well, I would like to ask what do you think?

Any suggestion is welcome :3

I like the colour tone, especially the contrast with the bright sky. Now, on the subject of nit-picking: I applaud the house inside but the more I look at it the more it differs in style from the rest. The top right window staying dark doesn't help. I'd personally suggest to keep it "dark", possibly add a hint of subdued reflection of one of the girls instead.

Only three other things: The medicine box is a bit dark coloured, her clothes should be a bit more subdued/light, and I think her hair were a lighter shade of pink. Talking about Yui, of course.

 

[Daseson]

I like the colour tone, especially the contrast with the bright sky. Now, on the subject of nit-picking: I applaud the house inside but the more I look at it the more it differs in style from the rest. The top right window staying dark doesn't help. I'd personally suggest to keep it "dark", possibly add a hint of subdued reflection of one of the girls instead.

Only three other things: The medicine box is a bit dark coloured, her clothes should be a bit more subdued/light, and I think her hair were a lighter shade of pink. Talking about Yui, of course.

Thank you.

The idea of the reflection is really good but we must bear in mind that this image is used when the girls are outside and when they are not. So when they are not outside it would not make sense that there would be a reflection of someone who is not there.

As for the pictures of the girls, I really have to redo them because, as with the pictures of the bathroom, they are very dark or pale, so the ideal would be to redo them.

My original idea was to redo everything and share all the redone images... but I get the urge to see new images in color and I paint new images hehe.


But hey, I apologize if the work is delayed, but personally I think it will be worth the wait

 

[Settum]

The idea of the reflection is really good but we must bear in mind that this image is used when the girls are outside and when they are not. So when they are not outside it would not make sense that there would be a reflection of someone who is not there.

Didn't think it too much, but that's true. Might be a good idea to put a reflection of Brother then, since he'd be facing the window anyway, that should be easier.

 

[Icetea-Lemon18]

Hello people,

I would like to ask your opinion, I felt daring and painted the guild on the outside... but I have always felt that the exterior is not my thing... well, I would like to ask what do you think?

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Any suggestion is welcome :3

I love it! It captured the feeling of being in a fantasy world. If i have to suggest, i can say you can add more contrast or shadow to some details but other than that it more than passable work

 

[Daseson]

Didn't think it too much, but that's true. Might be a good idea to put a reflection of Brother then, since he'd be facing the window anyway, that should be easier.

I could try but I do not promise to achieve something good since the brother can barely see his face, also if you look at the distance from where the brother is standing to the house it is quite a distance.

Sorry if this is not the answer you expected.

I love it! It captured the feeling of being in a fantasy world. If i have to suggest, i can say you can add more contrast or shadow to some details but other than that it more than passable work

Oh sure, I'll try to polish it up a bit more.

 

[Settum]

Sorry if this is not the answer you expected.

Wasn't even wishful thinking, but one amongst many suggestions that was asked (in relation to improving the window, since you pointed out the backdrop remains the same regardless of number of girls, or the inside of the house). So, really up to you to see what would work best in the final product.

 

[Daseson]

Hello,

Unfortunately this week I will not be able to give an update either... but I have made a lot of progress.

I made the changes that you asked me to do to the guild scene and it looks much better... thank you very much.

I also repainted the one in the brothers' house and comparing it with my previous work, in my opinion it was much more beautiful.

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I will try to give a progress or update every week so as not to spam too much about the coloring project.

 

[Raf-Raf]

Hello,

Unfortunately this week I will not be able to give an update either... but I have made a lot of progress.

I made the changes that you asked me to do to the guild scene and it looks much better... thank you very much.

I also repainted the one in the brothers' house and comparing it with my previous work, in my opinion it was much more beautiful.

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I will try to give a progress or update every week so as not to spam too much about the coloring project.

Prolly just me but I kinda prefer the first one.

 

[xanon515x]

Hello,

Unfortunately this week I will not be able to give an update either... but I have made a lot of progress.

I made the changes that you asked me to do to the guild scene and it looks much better... thank you very much.

I also repainted the one in the brothers' house and comparing it with my previous work, in my opinion it was much more beautiful.

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I will try to give a progress or update every week so as not to spam too much about the coloring project.

Nice upgrade! Feels more consistent with the other stuff already painted

 

[Icetea-Lemon18]

Prolly just me but I kinda prefer the first one.

Its just you lol

 

[hurrdurrderpderp]

Hello,

Unfortunately this week I will not be able to give an update either... but I have made a lot of progress.

I made the changes that you asked me to do to the guild scene and it looks much better... thank you very much.

I also repainted the one in the brothers' house and comparing it with my previous work, in my opinion it was much more beautiful.

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I will try to give a progress or update every week so as not to spam too much about the coloring project.

Probably not just me, but first one feels like a good game background and is way more pleasant to look at.

 

[Ranoyos]

Hello,

Unfortunately this week I will not be able to give an update either... but I have made a lot of progress.

I made the changes that you asked me to do to the guild scene and it looks much better... thank you very much.

I also repainted the one in the brothers' house and comparing it with my previous work, in my opinion it was much more beautiful.

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I will try to give a progress or update every week so as not to spam too much about the coloring project.

Personally, I'm in the camp of liking the second image better. Not sure if it's because i prefer the darker color on the wall on the right (i prefer the grey vs the yellow), and that the reduced sunglare is more pleasant on the eyes, but they both have their charms. Excellent work on the colouring, as always.

 

[YuKandayo32]

Hello,

Unfortunately this week I will not be able to give an update either... but I have made a lot of progress.

I made the changes that you asked me to do to the guild scene and it looks much better... thank you very much.

I also repainted the one in the brothers' house and comparing it with my previous work, in my opinion it was much more beautiful.

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I will try to give a progress or update every week so as not to spam too much about the coloring project.

here's what I think, both of the pictures are good and I especially like the subtle blow of dusts from the first picture. however, I got to go with the second picture because it plays with contrast alot more than the first one (grey wall against the grass field, the green forest against the grey mountain etc). I also like how much the color pops compared to the first one. unfortunately, you might want to play around with the dark green abit more since it almost close to looking like a swamp instead of a nice and vast green plain, could be just me tho.

keep it up!

 

[Daseson]

Thank you all so much for your comments...

I really bring bad news, according to the progress reports of inusuku in addition to adding new content, it is also improving the existing CGs in the game,

An example.

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I'm really considering leaving the color mod on pause until the dlc comes out, since it would really be a double effort to color the images right now and then inusuku retouch them and have to color them again

And even more the CG of the exteriors that are the ones that consume more time when painting.

I'm glad that inusuku gives more love to the game but unfortunately that makes the color mod require double effort or it can't progress

 

[Shadesishere]

Thank you all so much for your comments...

I really bring bad news, according to the progress reports of inusuku in addition to adding new content, it is also improving the existing CGs in the game,

An example.

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I'm really considering leaving the color mod on pause until the dlc comes out, since it would really be a double effort to color the images right now and then inusuku retouch them and have to color them again

And even more the CG of the exteriors that are the ones that consume more time when painting.

I'm glad that inusuku gives more love to the game but unfortunately that makes the color mod require double effort or it can't progress

this is kinda why I'm in limbo with the translation, as I just don't know what changes Inusuku may make, so my current notes and translation may have to be completely re-written if things are too different.

 

[torresm]

Thank you all so much for your comments...

I really bring bad news, according to the progress reports of inusuku in addition to adding new content, it is also improving the existing CGs in the game,

An example.

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I'm really considering leaving the color mod on pause until the dlc comes out, since it would really be a double effort to color the images right now and then inusuku retouch them and have to color them again

And even more the CG of the exteriors that are the ones that consume more time when painting.

I'm glad that inusuku gives more love to the game but unfortunately that makes the color mod require double effort or it can't progress

Hmm, I didn't know Inusuku would be retouching the old GCs as well... In this case, it's totally fair to hold off until the DLC comes out. I just hope it won't be too long, since now we have both the translation and the color mod waiting on it. lol

 

[gaiar31]

Yes waiting for DLC coming .and retouch color one time.

 

[zRoxas]

How do you get to be sterilie? Wish there was an option for birth control and not morning after spam