RPGM Abandoned Lolita Gone Wild [CG159b] [pepette]

[pepette]

You're right. I think the mistake comes from the fact that in French it's the same word for "winning" and "earning" so we'll tend to use the most common word because it has the same meaning.

You're right, the fault is indeed due to my magnificent EngRish... Sorry

*I have one very small thing: Can you change >Lolita won xxx€< to >Lolita made xxx€<?
Lolita worked hard for her money. ^^

well won would imply gambling make on other hand is not false but the better term would be to earn
lolita earned xxx€ for every work when she's paid by her boss
or is paid xxx€ for selling something directly (like at a flea market) or selling herself (like stripteas or prostitution) when a specific customer gives the money to her directly

As to the unique wording that can be found in various places in the game, I feel they should remain as written. In fact, let me quote myself from post # 501:

I raised this a while back and one of the replies was
It still bugs me that it's wrong, but I am starting to enjoy the idea of the winning it, especially after she runs around flashing everyone in the cafe' the nun included. I really don't mind it as part of the charm.

There is another line said by one of the patrons at the cafe too that does not have grammatically perfect english that I like as well, because it's real, or at least how I've heard non-english speaking people phrase stuff, so it adds to the character. I think it's more big deal when words are spelt incorrectly or just plain wrong.

Technically I think "earned" would be the most accurate word, rather than "made". As in I earned $45 today, though made does work.

It's really funny to have so many different opinions on this issue...
So, is it fair if I propose the following correction:
- "earn" for a "regular" job (like waitress or maid)
- "make" for sex jobs (glory and brothel).
As this term comes up very often in the game, I may forget some of them and "won" may still appear sometimes.

If something is too much to implement in the main body of the work, it could be explored in an isolated environment: dream sequences are a natural means of alternative storytelling.

I'm not sure I'm exploiting the dream for motherhood. It's a little too real to be dreamlike.
In the end, treating the pregnancy in isolation part from the rest of the game is pretty much the same as a good/bad ending, except that it wouldn't be a game over.
It's an idea that needs to be explored.
I'll take some more time to think about this...

 

[Naxos]

You're right, the fault is indeed due to my magnificent EngRish... Sorry

It's really funny to have so many different opinions on this issue...
So, is it fair if I propose the following correction:
- "earn" for a "regular" job (like waitress or maid)
- "make" for sex jobs (glory and brothel).
As this term comes up very often in the game, I may forget some of them and "won" may still appear sometimes.

You could use "earn" for all jobs including brothel. Personally I'd use "make" or "won" for gambling. "I went to the casino and made $100 on black jack" / "I went to the casino and won $100 on black jack"

But any of them will work, don't over think it.

 

[MagicDisco User]

How big is the team that made this game ?

 

[MagicDisco User]

Why so many redheads ? Why don't just make an erotic game about Wendy's ?

 

[pepette]

How big is the team that made this game ?

I work alone to make the game.
My best friend tests it before I release an update.
So it's a team of "One and a half" girls.

Otherwise a lot of players help me:
Many report bugs to me
Some try to correct my EngRish
Others offer me scenarios or ideas
Still others find (or create) subroutines for RPGmaker to help me
One even create a software

Why so many redheads ? Why don't just make an erotic game about Wendy's ?

Wendy's doesn't exist in France, I didn't know this mascot before I first posted the game on F95zone.
Maybe, as I'm a redhead myself, I create more spontaneously redheaded characters.
But in the game, there are also brunettes, chestnuts, blondes, white hair and even blue hair...

 

[Naxos]

I work alone to make the game.
My best friend tests it before I release an update.
So it's a team of "One and a half" girls.

Oh, you're a girl?

I didn't see that coming and it doesn't change a thing, just surprised.

Edit, actually I lie, it changes everything. Can't call you he or him anymore, welp that's everything.

 

[pepette]

Oh, you're a girl?

I didn't see that coming and it doesn't change a thing, just surprised.

There are a lot of female players and also several female developers on F95zone.
I try my best to make the game appeal to boys as well.

 

[Forca]

Among the screenshots there is one called "10 шантаж". Blowjob in the men's room. Couldn't get it in the game. Can someone tell me how to do this?

 

[pepette]

Among the screenshots there is one called "10 шантаж". Blowjob in the men's room. Couldn't get it in the game. Can someone tell me how to do this?

Lolita must have 20 corruption point to work at the gloryhole.
Then, go to the sex shop, there's an arrow on the upper wall. Lolita found a hidden button. Push it...

The CGs of the gloryhole are unlocked step to step.
There are 5 customers (only one the first day + 1 each time you work)
The 5th one ask for a deepthroat. You need to try 10time before you can do it (there are also the showers in the pool where you can train)
Once you manage to do the deepthroat, Lolita will be able to access to the outside entrance of the glory...

 

[Forca]

Sorry, English is not my first language. I must have described the problem inaccurately. Events in gloryhole have been completed in full. In the screenshot that I have in mind, it is marked as "10 шантаж", Lolita makes a Blowjob in the background of the urinal. I assume this is the men's room at school. We also failed to get an event where Lolita shows her Breasts to a drug dealer. But in General, I liked the game very much. I wish you success and look forward to continuing.

 

[SpeedySF]

Sorry, English is not my first language. I must have described the problem inaccurately. Events in gloryhole have been completed in full. In the screenshot that I have in mind, it is marked as "10 шантаж", Lolita makes a Blowjob in the background of the urinal. I assume this is the men's room at school. We also failed to get an event where Lolita shows her Breasts to a drug dealer. But in General, I liked the game very much. I wish you success and look forward to continuing.

This is a part of the blackmailing from Paul
This event start (someone correct me if i'm wrong) the first time you change in men's lockeroom at the swimming pool

 

[pepette]

Sorry, English is not my first language. I must have described the problem inaccurately. Events in gloryhole have been completed in full. In the screenshot that I have in mind, it is marked as "10 шантаж", Lolita makes a Blowjob in the background of the urinal. I assume this is the men's room at school. We also failed to get an event where Lolita shows her Breasts to a drug dealer. But in General, I liked the game very much. I wish you success and look forward to continuing.

Oh ! Sorry, I had forgotten that this image was there...
It's a mistake on my part, this image is not yet in the game...
It will be part of the blackmail.
Basically it was the CG following the ones currently in the game, but I rewrote the sequence and this blowjob will finally come later in the story. So I removed it from the current game.

I haven't decided the exact content of the next update yet. So I can't say yet if it will be in it, or if it will take a little longer for Paul to get his blowjob.

Don't apologize for your English, I'm the one who didn't check the picture you were talking about.

For the dealer, just return to see him when you're addict without money (the thief can help you to loose your €) and choose the CG you want to see

 

[pepette]

This is a part of the blackmailing from Paul
This event start (someone correct me if i'm wrong) the first time you change in men's lockeroom at the swimming pool

In fact, the real beginning of the blackmail story is the discussion near the fountain with paul.
You have the option not to activate blackmail at that time (so you won't have access to the CGs).
It says "future release" if you refuse the blackmail because I plan to put another story with Paul instead. But as this one is not written yet, it's not going to be in the game anytime soon.
Don't worry, I plan to keep this story going.

 

[rafkin]

Enjoying the game but it feels like I've played a number of hours and can still barely do anything lewd.

I did notice that doing my homework was lowering my corruption a lot, should you just not do homework?

And I spend all week working just to get the $150 rent money. Does "paying in kind" only start if I don't have enough to pay or some other trigger?

 

[pepette]

Enjoying the game but it feels like I've played a number of hours and can still barely do anything lewd.

I did notice that doing my homework was lowering my corruption a lot, should you just not do homework?

And I spend all week working just to get the $150 rent money. Does "paying in kind" only start if I don't have enough to pay or some other trigger?

Doing your homework or going to confession reduces corruption.
It is therefore wise to avoid doing it, at least at the beginning of the game (as a bonus you will unlock CGs at school in a few days).

For the rent.
Lolita's stats are also playing.
If she has the money to pay, she will need to have 20 in corruption to be able to pay it in kind. If she doesn't have money, it will be enough for her to have 10 points.

 

[Armelle69]

Doing your homework or going to confession reduces corruption.
It is therefore wise to avoid doing it, at least at the beginning of the game (as a bonus you will unlock CGs at school in a few days).

I discovered it
The problem is not that doiing homework decrese corruption, it's tha it makes the corruption litteraly collapse !
1 homework destroys the huge efforts of 2 days of hottness.
-1, why not (even that, i'm not sure)
-10, no please...
As if the only erotic girls were necessarily the worst student ever...

 

[pepette]

I discovered it
The problem is not that doiing homework decrese corruption, it's tha it makes the corruption litteraly collapse !
1 homework destroys the huge efforts of 2 days of hottness.
-1, why not (even that, i'm not sure)
-10, no please...
As if the only erotic girls were necessarily the worst student ever...

Every time Loli does her homework, it removes 5 points of corruption.
So, yes, if she does the homework for both classes, she loses 10 points.

The game does not pretend to reflect reality. It's just a game.
It seems normal to me that if Lolita does her homework, "the wise girl" drops her "rebellious" side.
I don't know if it's too much... maybe...

I try to balance the difficulty of the game as much as possible.
When I lower the difficulty, some people complain that the game is too easy.
When I increase the difficulty, others complain too.
This makes it very difficult for me to know who to listen to.
I start a new game when I test before each release (and so does my tester) to check the balance.
I don't pretend it's perfect : I touch it up regularly.

 

[Frurose]

Something I was thinking about during my last play through: During the first bathroom event of the blackmail route my character refused to lift her top because of not having 15 corruption. A few days later she gives him a hand job because she says she has no choice in the matter. He did nothing to change her mind during those three days. Maybe the 15 corruption requirement should be lifted, or another scene be added between?

It is a minor thing that doesn't need changed, but I thought I would mention it.

 

[pepette]

Something I was thinking about during my last play through: During the first bathroom event of the blackmail route my character refused to lift her top because of not having 15 corruption. A few days later she gives him a hand job because she says she has no choice in the matter. He did nothing to change her mind during those three days. Maybe the 15 corruption requirement should be lifted, or another scene be added between?

It is a minor thing that doesn't need changed, but I thought I would mention it.

You didn't really do anything.
Already Lolita necessarily showed her breasts at Paul's apartment so that you are unblocked the next CG.
And above all, the story has evolved: Lolita saw the photos at Paul's, the danger is much more real than the first time.

As I said in my previous message, I don't pretend that the balance is perfect (and I'll continue to listen to you, and touch it up with each update)

 

[Frurose]

Lolita saw the photos at Paul's, the danger is much more real than the first time.

I forgot all about that!