- Dec 17, 2017
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Fuck, that makes my eyes bleed.i just followed the wk step by step until the day 40 , i was asked to click at Toggle perspective so i didnt know about that , well its was a lots about the game text i read some and skip some , i was bored at first games looks like detective conan , well after playing i found the game was nice , and i like it . well when u told me If you can't even be bothered to read that, then I honestly don't know if this is the game for you .... well u broke my heart , anyway , all the best for ur game , i am looking for ur next update release !
First, learn to use capital letters. The only capital letters in that vomitous mass are in "Toggle", "If" and ONE "I".
Second, learn to spell. It's "you", not "u". "your", not "ur".
Third, form your thoughts into coherent sentences. Don't make giant sentences with commas separating many clauses. You're not Paul writing to the Ephesians.
Fourth, spaces go AFTER commas, not before them. And they don't go before other punctuation either.