VN Ren'Py Abandoned Long Lost Daughter [Ch 1-8 fix] [Tawny Fairquim Frolics]

[TundraLupus]

Finished this update, so a couple of thoughts so far.

First, the game is still pretty fun, and I appreciate the Mc voicing that the supernatural is real in this world and that he knew of it for some time, a very good update so far.

Second, language-wise the game is better, less formal, but still, way too formal, the girls don't talk like 18 years old, and it feels kind of weird, it is far better than at launch, and I can see that you are improving in every way as the VN progresses.

Third, I do appreciate how forthcoming you are with what each decision will do, it might be because the VN will be short, but it feels like things are moving very fast with being able to permanently close two relationship routes this early, and how forthcoming they are with certain information.

That is it so far, again, very good update and game in general.

edit: Changed the begging because I was at the last scene and didn't realize it.

 

[nevermoreXX]

"you and your wife started smoking crack" ? what the actual fuck?

 

[DA22]

These are all F95 Zone approved file hosting sites. I've never heard any complaints about malware, so I think all the links are safe. To be absolutely sure, use the MEGA link. That's my link of choice when I'm downloading a game and I've never had any issues with it.

Thanks for the game. Concerning downloads sites, besides Mega for me Nopy, workupload and a newer one Pixeldrain give good consistent downloads even with very big files, no download managers or other weird extra downloads included and good speed, though some people do have problems with Nopy.

 

[PsybehrWolf]

I am SOOOOO looking forward to playing this....once I have food in me....This was one of the first things I did this morning after waking up since you mentioned it coming out today! Now it is downloaded! Shower, food, and game time, has to be in that order! I do love the Poly-Harem, as to me, that makes the most sense, but then again, I am pan and poly-minded, so that probably goes without saying... Also, looking forward to a Futa option! You just keep on adding more wonderful toppings to this dish, and I just keep on coming back for more..."Can I have another serving Sir?!"

 

[BiggestOfBois]

Anyone planning to make an andriod port good sirs?

 

[asher01]

Anyone planning to make an andriod port good sirs?

At the moment there won't be and for the reason for that is that the developer doesn't know how to do it so we will have to wait until someone with expertise to do it

 

[Deleted member 1322027]

ahhh thats where i put you

 

[Macgamer]

Wow just gotta say great work on the story so far. Rally like the game as it is and can't wait to further the story. Looking forward to seeing a lot of pregnant ladies lol. Not sure what the Futa will add to the game but im glad it will be avoidable. Keep up the great work im very interested where this will go as it has all the kinks I like. Great Job Again.

 

[longjohngold]

So I knew going into this I'm not into the engine, but I saw some comments/reviews by people who felt similarly but thought the game was good enough that it didn't matter, so I figured I'd try it ... I only mention this just because maybe my views are clouded by the fact that I couldn't find any of the characters in the game attractive, sometimes found them odd looking (partially due to the makeup I think), and sometimes creepy - their weird smiles making me think of some kind of raving psychopath (and I mean in general, not just the actually nuts sister).

As for the content I'm not really sure how I felt.
I didn't disagree with any of the philosophy or meta/physical stuff, but not sure if a medium like this is one that I'm receptive to reading through text of that nature, and probably would prefer a Sam Harris podcast or something for that. I did appreciate that there seems to be options to cut down those or some of the backstory bits, but as I wanted to experience it all I don't know how much that changes stuff.
I found the tone throughout unenjoyable though. It seems to want to really go through some mental gymnastics to justify the incest and whatnot making it so veeery clear how it's not at all abusive, and even game-ends you if you want to look at someone in a little bikini ... and it just feels thoroughly out of place, especially in a game that's set in school, features real young looking characters and even lets you assign their age, and there's only one reason things like that would be included.
What I did find interesting was the almost kinda stiens gate kinda deal with the timelines and somehow creating a daughter/sister and things... but even that I found occurred far to casually.

Oh one minor qualm - while it was generally good at the naming thing (showing you who you were naming), for the pastor at the beginning I had to skip for several minutes to see her so I could then restart with a name I felt fit her... then it turns out later on it doesn't matter as you start calling her by her first name that you didn't choose.

 

[IAmTheMinotaur]

I haven't played the game just yet, though I plan to. My question is will the pregnancy be tied only to the endings or certain plot points? Or is/will there be a pregnancy mechanic that allows you to freely impregnate the female characters at will and as many times as you like?

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

Finished this update, so a couple of thoughts so far.

First, the game is still pretty fun, and I appreciate the Mc voicing that the supernatural is real in this world and that he knew of it for some time, a very good update so far.

Second, language-wise the game is better, less formal, but still, way too formal, the girls don't talk like 18 years old, and it feels kind of weird, it is far better than at launch, and I can see that you are improving in every way as the VN progresses.

Third, I do appreciate how forthcoming you are with what each decision will do, it might be because the VN will be short, but it feels like things are moving very fast with being able to permanently close two relationship routes this early, and how forthcoming they are with certain information.

That is it so far, again, very good update and game in general.

edit: Changed the begging because I was at the last scene and didn't realize it.

I have to write what I know and the women in my own particular family are all forces of nature while the men are all pretty laid back the way I am. The 18-year-old girls in my family were all exceptionally intelligent and sophisticated so I don't know how to write them any differently. If I tried to dumb them down for this VN I don't think it would turn out very well.

This is an incest focused VN and as a fan of that genre I often get impatient with games that focus on other characters outside of the family when I'm mostly interested in the incestuous relationships. So I thought it was a good idea to have the players be able to choose that early.

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

So I knew going into this I'm not into the engine, but I saw some comments/reviews by people who felt similarly but thought the game was good enough that it didn't matter, so I figured I'd try it ... I only mention this just because maybe my views are clouded by the fact that I couldn't find any of the characters in the game attractive, sometimes found them odd looking (partially due to the makeup I think), and sometimes creepy - their weird smiles making me think of some kind of raving psychopath (and I mean in general, not just the actually nuts sister).

As for the content I'm not really sure how I felt.
I didn't disagree with any of the philosophy or meta/physical stuff, but not sure if a medium like this is one that I'm receptive to reading through text of that nature, and probably would prefer a Sam Harris podcast or something for that. I did appreciate that there seems to be options to cut down those or some of the backstory bits, but as I wanted to experience it all I don't know how much that changes stuff.
I found the tone throughout unenjoyable though. It seems to want to really go through some mental gymnastics to justify the incest and whatnot making it so veeery clear how it's not at all abusive, and even game-ends you if you want to look at someone in a little bikini ... and it just feels thoroughly out of place, especially in a game that's set in school, features real young looking characters and even lets you assign their age, and there's only one reason things like that would be included.
What I did find interesting was the almost kinda stiens gate kinda deal with the timelines and somehow creating a daughter/sister and things... but even that I found occurred far to casually.

Oh one minor qualm - while it was generally good at the naming thing (showing you who you were naming), for the pastor at the beginning I had to skip for several minutes to see her so I could then restart with a name I felt fit her... then it turns out later on it doesn't matter as you start calling her by her first name that you didn't choose.

Including the metaphysical stuff does make this a niche game, but that's only appropriate since I'm a niche person.

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This VN is an exploration of incest from two standpoints:

First, what would it be like to be in a poly-amorous family where everyone was on board?

Second will be the more traditional approach in these games where the characters are initially horrified at the thought of incest and will later re-examine their beliefs as they cope with the desires they find themselves feeling (Peach and Matilda).

What makes incest interesting to some of us is the forbidden nature of it. But this attitude is entirely subjective. It just feels wrong to most people, including myself. If a brother and sister fall romantically in love with each other, does it really hurt anyone if they get married? Only if they have children? It's a fascinating subject.

Again I remind everyone that this VN takes place in the Sinfest cartoon strip universe. This is not a realistic portrayal of our so-called reality by any means. The inhabitants of this universe are used to seeing some really weird shit.

The pastor is not a main character. I gave the player the option to name her at the beginning since she is mentioned early on, but I think you're right that this was a mistake on my part.

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

Very impressed with the game. I like the fact that it is willing to deal with interesting ideas and philosophies, and also that the player has so much control over the path. The only thing that I find mildly off-putting is the fact that it is too easy to go along thinking we are in a reality very similar to our own, and then something happens that goes right out the window and you realise you are not in Kansas any more. (And I'm not just talking sex/relationships... This is a porn game after all.) Also, I'm quite sad that it looks like Komiko (sp?) won't be a character, since I found that relationship quite endearing. Oh, and maybe a way to access an info page to explain things that suddenly change. I picked up on the Peach situation, but I could imagine not everyone would, and I wouldn't mind the option to double check what I thought was true. Tho, all in all, it's great!

Here's my shout out on this thread to Stranger87 for giving me the idea of providing much-needed closure for the character of Kumiko. While I do have a plan for this game, I am open to being influenced on way it plays out.

 

[TundraLupus]

I can see

I have to write what I know and the women in my own particular family are all forces of nature while the men are all pretty laid back the way I am. The 18-year-old girls in my family were all exceptionally intelligent and sophisticated so I don't know how to write them any differently. If I tried to dumb them down for this VN I don't think it would turn out very well.

This is an incest focused VN and as a fan of that genre I often get impatient with games that focus on other characters outside of the family when I'm mostly interested in the incestuous relationships. So I thought it was a good idea to have the players be able to choose that early.

I can understand that, and maybe i didn't express my thoughts correctally, english is not my first or second language and only recently i started to use it to comunicate with other people, I'm having to format my computer but once that is done i'll re-download the game and play through it again and try to either explain myself better, or just admit thata i didn't read thing correctally. (Sorry for any misspellings i'm typing this on a mobile)

Edit: So I re-played the latest update, and well, my problem was more of some word's usage like "male", instead of "guy", or "man", I would have the same problem with "female" instead of "girl" or "woman", as it feels too clinical, but that is probably just me.

 

[Vrijgeest]

The artwork is terrible. This is 2020 and we dont have to suffer this crap.

 

[bigguy_foryou]

This is an incest focused VN and as a fan of that genre I often get impatient with games that focus on other characters outside of the family when I'm mostly interested in the incestuous relationships. So I thought it was a good idea to have the players be able to choose that early.

I like what I'm reading. Yeah, I totally download games with only a handful of characters and the incest tag just so I can spend hours of my time not indulging that tag.

 

[hngg]

Long Lost Daughter [Ch. 1-3] [Tawny Fairquim Frolics]
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[teddidiah]

Everytime I see this pop up in the updates feed I think outloud golly, I'm glad someone had the heart and soul to take their Uncanny Blowup Sex Doll fetish to the next level.

god speed, you

 

[thanks for the demos]

The character of Fuchsia captured my heart when she met the nebbish bookworm Criminy and fell in love with his innate goodness and encyclopedic knowledge. Though they are an item and often are seen doing the snuggle bunny thing, it is widely believed that they've never had sex. The conceit of including her in Long Lost Daughter is that the MC will plant the seed of this romance into the young devil girl's mind.

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That was adorable. If LLD is halve as cute (and has a healthy dose of lewdness on top) I'm totally in.

Since you read/have read Sinfest: Any chance there's a part 2 to The romantic saga of Fuchsia? Was their arc ever finished? That whole "the comic turned into a joyless vehicle for propaganda" debate in the comment section made me reluctant to check out the webcomic itself, but if there's more distilled Fuchsia / Crim cuteness I'd totally read that.

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

That was adorable. If LLD is halve as cute (and has a healthy dose of lewdness on top) I'm totally in.

Also, since you read/have read Sinfest: Any chance there's a part 2 to The Saga of Fuchsia? Was their arc ever finished? That whole "the comic turned into a joyless vehicle for propaganda" debate made me reluctant to check the webcomic itself, but if there's more distilled Fuchsia / Crim fluffiness I'd totally read that.

I don't know if I got the cuteness angle down pat but I sure gotcha covered for lewdness.

The Criminy and Fuchsia romance pretty much went out the window when the propaganda started back around 2011. Ishida did come up with a character named Tange who I liked and is featured in LLD. He paired her with Lil' Evil who got bomfed or something (I forget) and lost his memory. Now she's like a big sister to the newly reformed and angelic "Lily":



Recently after years of absence Criminy made a surprise appearance trying to bail out Fuchsia's failing portrait business in a continuation of a story line I featured earlier in this thread: