Legendary101

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Another thing I find very off about the whole scene now upon reflection .... they just discussed rape about a traumatic event for her and literally in the same scene he is now encouraging her to be his wingman and testing how jealous she is and hook him up with women etc I mean wtf. He went from full on enraged to wanting to help her and punish the rapist to now asking her to hook him up and discussing their next target to bang. Wouldn't you think his first thought would be not using her for women and making ass jokes to going out and dealing with this guy. Or maybe just having one normal scene where he comforts her and the scene ends or something.

Sorry dude, nothing about the whole scripting of that scene and set up in that scenario is written with tact.
 

Look-see

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Rape is not tolerated even if she is 5000 years old. So yeah if patreon get notice of this they will probably censor him until he changes it.
nah i wasnt arguing about rape being tolerated. i meant that if she stated exactly what age she was instead of something vague like "just started coming into my sexuality" soooo like 14? then he'd have a clear reason to remove the scene. but since no number is mentioned dev can feign ignorance and say it wasn't that far back. although didnt she just turn 18? either way its a risk for dev.
 

MuffinManWantsPregnancy

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Another thing I find very off about the whole scene now upon reflection .... they just discussed rape about a traumatic event for her and literally in the same scene he is now encouraging her to be his wingman and testing how jealous she is and hook him up with women etc I mean wtf. He went from full on enraged to wanting to help her and punish the rapist to now asking her to hook him up and discussing their next target to bang. Wouldn't you think his first thought would be not using her for women and making ass jokes to going out and dealing with this guy. Or maybe just having one normal scene where he comforts her and the scene ends or something.

Sorry dude, nothing about the whole scripting of that scene and set up in that scenario is written with tact.
Thank god I am not the only one that thought this as well lol. Thought it was so bizarre how it just abruptly ends, and then going back to perving on the rape victim. It's a porn game, so I get it, but some sort of transition woulda been nice I guess.
 

Look-see

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Thank god I am not the only one that thought this as well lol. Thought it was so bizarre how it just abruptly ends, and then going back to perving on the rape victim. It's a porn game, so I get it, but some sort of transition woulda been nice I guess.
so after finishing the story. i thought the same damn thing.

MC: *hears rape victims story* (doesnt want to use her. desires revenge)
Jessy: i'll get you layed
MC: Well alright then im in!:cool:
 

MuffinManWantsPregnancy

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so after finishing the story. i thought the same damn thing.

MC: *hears rape victims story* (doesnt want to use her. desires revenge)
Jessy: i'll get you layed
MC: Well alright then im in!:cool:
I'd at least go and beat JDs ass. If she's in the mood afterward, well then... :unsure:
 

macinblack

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Game was pretty solid until I hit the unavoidable rape scene, without getting on a high horse, for me rape isn't something I enjoy in my games, more so when it just comes without any forewarning and even more so where it doesn't seem to have any lasting impact and was kinda glossed over to get back to sexy times. Normally all of that'd be the end of me playing this game, but dev is new and some growing pains are to be expected.

One, the fact that a fix was made so quickly to skip past it and two that dev was receptive to people's concern shows me he (?) is acting in good faith. So I'll be giving it another go next update and fwiw given the way it was handled after the fact indicates to me that I don't think I'll be having this issue should another rape scene come up in the future.

Keep up the good work.
 

Dimitri57

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so going by your comments may i assume we may expect ntr and more rape scenes? (im not saying that rape scene is ntr, i mean in the future)
Id like to know beforehand because im not a fan of either rape or ntr so having that clear out will be nice.
As for what you say that people try to change games, they may have a good reason sometimes....i had seem too many games with ntr and non ntr mixed that ends up being shit for both sides and they never ends well, so even if is going to be ntr avoidable i will like to know since yes, it may be a hard pass to me.
I value my time and when i support someone (my money) as i do think other people will agree with this.
In any case i liked the game and seems good so far, that much i can say... as for your not so good comment about the site being full of mindless vanilla harem.... i dont even know what games you play but there is a lot of good harem games and i will never call it something so offensive as mindless , one of them being "No more secrets" by royalcandy. ;)
Your assumptions are not correct. I don't play or care for NTR games myself. Not judging anyone who does, it's just not my thing. I agree with you about the games that try to play both sides of that fence. It ends up pissing everyone off. I'm not a rapist nor do I fantasize about being one. I felt like the scene was needed to understand Jessie's back story. I've already uploaded a script fix that will allow people to skip those scenes. My bad, I should have thought of giving people that option to begin with.

I am open to suggestions and constructive criticism. As a newbie dev, there is a learning curve to this. I value my time too, and I'm not going to re-write the story to suit anyone but myself. If people feel so strongly that need to change someone else's story arc, Daz3d and Ren'Py are free to download. They can give it try and tell the story they want to tell the way they want to tell it.

I've played or currently playing almost every Harem game that is on the site. My comments are not overly harsh. I didn't call anyone out nor would I. I've found out since starting my own game that it isn't as easy as most assume it is. Kudos from me to all the devs that spend countless hours of their time making their games.

You're right, there are some really good ones that I like and support. But be honest, many don't have any depth to them. That's fine, and I still play them too. Sometimes you don't want to have to think and just have a quick fap... ;)

I do appreciate your feedback.

Everyone stay safe out there
 

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I am open to suggestions and constructive criticism. As a newbie dev, there is a learning curve to this. I value my time too, and I'm not going to re-write the story to suit anyone but myself. If people feel so strongly that need to change someone else's story arc, Daz3d and Ren'Py are free to download. They can give it try and tell the story they want to tell the way they want to tell it.
is not about changing the story, i think you are missing the point, whenever i see a game as i said with ntr in a harem game.... it gives me the creeps and not only because ntr and non ntr will never be able to work together in the same game/story but because not even 1 dev has ever succeed to make them, either side get less content, either side give the vibes of ntr or the ntr side is not well written etc
thats why so many people become vocal about it, is not about changing the game, is saying something that is proven reality nowadays.
I've played or currently playing almost every Harem game that is on the site. My comments are not overly harsh. I didn't call anyone out nor would I. I've found out since starting my own game that it isn't as easy as most assume it is. Kudos from me to all the devs that spend countless hours of their time making their games.

You're right, there are some really good ones that I like and support. But be honest, many don't have any depth to them. That's fine, and I still play them too. Sometimes you don't want to have to think and just have a quick fap... ;)
your comment about all vanilla harem mindless did seems like you was either pointing towards making that type of content (rape,ntr) and kind of offensive towards other devs like some of the ones that i support, like Royalcandy for example and i fucking love that game and story.
I still think there is a few pretty good harem games there with story and they are not some mindless vanilla harem games... ;)
In any case thanks for being clear about the content you will make, hope you understand more what i did mean by that reply to your other post.
And same to you too.... Stay safe & best of luck with the game onwards.
 
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Ceesko

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I hope you do not change your style or presentation just because some people are whining dev. You said it yourself from the beginning, that this game is going to ruffle some feathers and will not be a "clean nice " game like the vast majority of games on this site. You said yourself that this game about is not politically correct.
 
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Just two episodes and it's already walking towards Victory. What a wonderful writing well matched by beautiful renders. And ofcourse, Glad this Tracy looks and feels as great as the other one.
 

Spawn420

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is someone proof reading this?
or is it automatic translation? I've noticed some minor error like using "a" instead of "the" or adding an "is" in places that don't need it.
you can get the gist of things from context so its not a big deal..
my own grammar is far from perfect but i'm willing to help correct the things I do manage to spot because I think this game shows great potential :)
 
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