Dimitri57 Last one, finished the update (some paths were left unexplored)
Juanita: I would say you are just making fun of an old woman
accept(except) for one thing.
Rachael: They aren't use
(d) to people telling them anything.
(Going alone) Your thoughts: The Minions are coming from across town
(to) cause problems. The biker dude in the VIP was trying to get Nikki to go
to(is the second "to" needed?) work for him in his club.
(Going with Jessy) MC:Yes I do. Is this
(the) right address?
Stan: ... As I said, I don't trust anyone there
accept(except) Chloe and Rachel.
MC: Would it be out of line if I asked you
(a) couple of questions?
Stan: It's evident you haven't forgot
(ten) your training.
Stan: *Sigh* Della use
(d) to, but that was a long time ago...
Jessy: Oh, like
a an older daughter?
MC:
I do(Do I) want to be
to responsible to protect the FOX in the middle of a gang war?
MC: I'm thirsty. Do you want to go with me to the Fox? I told
the Chloe...
MC: Don't ever doubt that. We
know (have?) too much dirt on each other...
Rachael: ... We can hang out if you want to before I have
(to) go to work.
Jessy: Well let's get
nekkid(naked) and get on the bed.
MC: ...
Bye (By) the way, you're about to drip on the floor.
Jessy: Give me a kiss so I can
to sleep.