So, it looks like I was able to resolve the issues with the Android version. Until the end of the week, I will spend some time trying to catch other typos in addition to those that the players have already reported.
If any of you find another typo, you can let me know.
Since I'm not a native English speaker, it's clear to me that some phrases probably sound very awkward.
If any of you finds any phrase in my VN that doesn't make sense in English in that context and hurts the eyes of native English speakers, you can also let me know and I'll try to fix it.
About some other comments and questions.
I'm liking the game so far, although, in my opinion, it could do without the Mc's inner dialog because we can go completely against what the mc is thinking, so it becomes kinda redundant, and this might be just me but the pauses in the middle of the conversation where there is no dialog just an image of the character is kind of breaks me from the game, also, the third person shots, I find them unnecessary.
Now for the good things, it seems that the dev is not a native English speaker, and not being one either I understand how hard it is, so it is actually amazing how well it is done, I also like the renders a lot, and how the characters work, the supernatural is also interesting to me, I don't like feeling defenseless since my first instinct in most situations is fighting instead of fleeing or freezing, but I understand that it is a Horror game so you need to take that route.
Overall it is a good game in my opinion and worth the try, and I can't wait to see where it goes, I do hope we can have either a poly or open relationship though, but that is more of my preference.
A certain amount of internal dialogue is my style and in many cases gives additional information, for example, about the history of the characters. I understand that not everyone likes it.
When I started creating my VN, I was considering whether to use a third-person shots in some situations.
In the end, I decided yes, but I'm trying not to use them too much. Some situations in visual novels, such as hugging, usually look strange to me from a first-person perspective.
But I understand that third-person shots can somehow ruin empathy for a role for some players.
About relationships with Jane and Dana:
Jane: you will be able to maintain a friendship with benefits, or work to turn it into a romantic relationship or give away funny business with Jane
Dana: only a romantic relationship will be possible, and it requires not trying to have a romantic relationship with Jane or a friendship with benefits with Jane. The events of the first chapter have some influence, but do not prevent a romantic relationship with Dana.
So there will be no real harem path for the next few updates.
However, there are points of "Corruption" and many other factors for Dana. Corruption does not mean turning Dana into a total slut but it means that under certain circumstances, she will be open to a non-monogamous relationship involving MC, Jane and Danu in the late stages of my VN.
Those paths are not totally separated. It will mean different events, some short, some long, but then there will always be a common storyline before further branching, except for the final part of the game, which will lead to different endings.
And now my comment on one funny review:
Vechernyaya" said:
I appraeciate how the girls have a "girl next door" look instead of the usual heavily make-up big breasted dolls.
The horror part don't work at all, there is no tension.
The character are joking or speaking of sex or romance all the time. It's justified by saying that it's to forget about the situation but it's no convincing and the situation doesn't appears believable.
When the ghost/demon appears, the character are in despair, but nothing has ever happened, not in the past, not to their drunk friend (the perfect horror victim) and not when we see it, it just appear and disappear and over years, it didn't act hostile once.
The redhead girl is despictable : a crazy, violent, trigger-happy bitch that solve everything with violence.
The author seems to be into gun porn, he criticize "dumb triggered feminists" but all the characters are dumb NRA fanboys. This sound like alt-right shit.
This VN is way too american (in a bad way) for me.
I don't care if the author is not american, i'm speaking of the setting.
Although there are some horror elements, it is not my intention to create a truly horror visual novel. I think most people can recognize that there is a certain level of exaggeration. The supernatural entity that Vechernyaya mentions will play an important role in the story of the following chapters. And maybe some of you have noticed that it wasn't totally harmless in the second chapter either. Not every villain has to pose a direct physical threat.
About those "NRA"and "alt-right" things: MC and Jane were not very enthusiastic about firearms, and Dana also (sometimes) recognizes that they are not a universal solution for all situations. Looks like two or three of the jokes in my VN hurt someone's progressive feelings.
But I will not avoid such jokes in the next chapters just because people like Vechernyaya don't like them.
I don't think there are so many such jokes/commentsto be disturbing for most players.