Guys I fucking love when you reach the very first badend and think this is all content. I don't actually believe that you are so much retarded, that you don't even dare to try another choice in the dialog. Troll harder!
Hi Slonique, well instead of having a proper game over screen you're basically putting a
ingame said:
This is all for now. More content is coming soon
which technically speaking is just misleading.
you have a lot of loose ends there and everything is ending the same way. So who's trolling here ?
Everyone knows exactly which choise to take the first 4 times, and then comes "Watch her picking it up" and everyones subconscious is just yelling, go for it!. So there pops up the sentence, it was it. Thx for playing. Nowhere to go, just turn the game off.
Maybe you should have thought of that, u have to get into the minds of your players. Some choises are just Bad, why not point that out making a final Game Over screen. Whats the point in continue playing if you just go to sleep? I don't know how you wanna continue that, maybe I'm wrong but that should be an actual game over, but other dead ends could definitely continue leading to different paths, so why not put something like "Hey Player, this is all for now. Not the best choices though but at least you got yourself some cake"
In the last years gaming changed, games became more competitive Human vs. Human (see Esports) but in actual gameplay all games got easier. Sort of, with exceptions. But basically you really need to take your players a little bit more "by the Hand"
I'm sorry to say that but u are not a good game designer, your renders are awesome and pretty to look at. Maybe you should rather start looking for a cooperation with a proper game developer and just deliver the pictures, make positioning according to the story and script. etc.
Abyss was pretty but the game bored me out, and this one feels just incomplete, not story or content wise it's a Demo, but it's not even that so.. i don't know.. just hard to describe it ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Anyway I wish you good luck in everythin you're trying.