Ren'Py Lovely Academy [v0.1.9] [CastleStudios]

[Cirdon]

I'm not a fan of games that start with a timejump.

Knowing the ending and that ending sucking horribly means I have no interest in playing because it just means I'm moving toward that horrible end.

 

[Rafflemo]

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Is this on the rooftop? Cause I never went there and suddenly this woman Ive never seen treats me like I know her. Kinda funny.

 

[Nimbus Commando]

dont get me wrong, I liked the renders. the dev has put some really hard work in them and it shows. the girls all look unique and I didnt notice strange posing or poke throughs.

but it is too focused on the lesbian tatooed chick ( I forgot her name). and personaly I dont like neither her character nor her attitude/behavior.

she reminds me of a game where the mc's "best friend" got sexual with Mc's mother and the thread devolved into a shitshow with so much hatred towards the "best friend" that the dev changed that scene and thought it was a good idea to make the mother lesbian married to a lesbian. if you remember the game you mayhaps have a good idea how that went down. I dont remember how it fairs today cause that game is on my ignore.
this tatooed chick here is the same deal for me. the same trash as a character. predatory, do as she pleases and hits on everything with a pussy, because....plot and "she will help the mc" bs.
definately not the mc's harem. it may end as his harem but obviously only after the predator has her way with them.

and this is ingrained in the story. it cant be changed. will this game be liked by others? sure, why not. until "lesbian ntr" tag hits the top list which is already happening with at least two characters who are going after nearly every li, because straight women obviously are so easily coersed to undress for that fmc.
hence, I will move on.

anyways. best of health always .

Wow I think I remember that game yeah man it was a dumpster fire.

 

[montysandwich]

where are the painkillers in her room...

 

[stark837]

Dude, make the game you want to make. If you're into a sandbox where the MC is the stunt cock for a bunch of lesbians, then make that game. Not everybody wants a cookie cutter game where the MC meets girls one at a time, says a nice thing and they instantly devote themselves to him and his magic penis.

That being said, the story is all over the place and there's a game breaking bug where julia's alcohol has to be at least 8 or you get stuck in an infinite loop. And the guy taking a subway to the store to get wine when dinner is already on the table is totally batshit.

Also, some of the music is under the sounds audio level.

 

[YogSothoth1982]

The MC is going to corrupt Raven, and Raven being a lesbian woman friend of the MC can help him with his influence to get some action with some women and even threesomes

After reading this comment the only thing that is clear to me is that I want Raven far away from the MC and the LIs.

 

[Harem4life]

After reading this comment the only thing that is clear to me is that I want Raven far away from the MC and the LIs.

Where is truck kun when we need it

 

[westback83]

Deleted this game stuck in Julias appartment thx anyway

 

[Chris2041]

I have read all your comments and I will try to modify the game by deleting the lesbian content, although this was always optional,

You dont have to delete them make it more easaly avoidable and cut down the forced ones and tone down raven and the other girls and for the love of god make a more active MC right now Raven is the MC .

 

[Juerhullycin]

You dont have to delete them make it more easaly avoidable and cut down the forced ones and tone down raven and the other girls and for the love of god make a more active MC right now Raven is the MC .

yep like that dude said no need to delete the stuff you made but with the time passed since the first release you can easily restructure the beginning to make the game more harem. You can reuse those scenes further into the game once the mc has given his okay for hankypaky between Lis. And while your at it i wouldnt say no to a VN mode

 

[Chris2041]

I honestly have no idea how you will accomplish that without a major rewrite. I mean, the lebian chick has already too much content interacting with the other lis. hse hit on them, fingered them, made them undress infront of her etc etc.

I would honestly suggest you scrap the MMc completely, make him a statue or something, holding his marble dick ( which he has been doing so far either way while the lesb, fucks everything with a pussy*, make the inhinged lesbian the FMC and run a full on lesbian game. you already have the renders and the dialogues. you will require far les work to change the mc of the game than remove/alter the lesbian and the bisexual/teaser jokes.

*yeah we got it. she fucks everything to soften them up for the mc



I am honestly curious now, so I will keep this in my watch list. hopefully this will not turn the way sim69 did

Yeah it would be more easy if dev scrap the male MC and make a FMC harem type of game he is gonna had to remake the game from the beginning if he want to make a game whitout lesbian.

 

[cattts]

game is broken at Julia apartment. tried downloading twice.

 

[rvlfycpydgdcttfren]

game is broken at Julia apartment. tried downloading twice.

it worked fine for me, you dont manually go there fyi, you automatically go there as you progress

 

[AlexCastle]

where are the painkillers in her room...

In the bathroom in the mother's room, hidden under the mirror

 

[Joratox]

I have read all your comments and I will try to modify the game by deleting the lesbian content, although this was always optional,

Make the game you want to make, dev. Ignore the lesbian police and the people that go on and on about the things they dislike (these are the karens and snowflakes of f95forums and they plague every thread).

As long as you make a proper story, the game can be played and understood properly, all will be fine in the end. There are plenty of games where people come and yell about situations/characters they don't like. Take the (arguably) most famous and successful game around here, Badik...there are plenty of people that go REEEeee, maya and josy forced lesbian couple..or REEeeee late introduced childhood friend is a retarded smurf, etc. Guess what ? Nobody cares. As long as the story and content make sense, all is ok.

Make sure you focus on some of the glaring bugs or issues the game has. Like the people getting stuck in Julia's apartment because they didn't manage to do the required number of drinks. Or the getting stuck in a loop in the first evening after school, where you can try to get to Julia's apartment, but there is no one there and you can't turn back.

Another constructive criticism...if you are adamant on making this kind of sandbox (i personally dislike it, but hey, nothing is for everyone), make sure you label the places you need to go to, on mouse hover maybe (ex: when u hover the mouse on a door it says whose room it is, etc), like doors, or arrows to different places (atm you have no idea what to do and must try everything, making people do mistakes). Or make a sort of image carousel with fast travel to rooms/apartments/locations.

One more constructive feedback, if you are trying to make a harem game, ease up on choices that give +to a girl and - to another (they can work sometimes, but those choices are mostly for game where you don't have a harem and must choose a LI path or another). It just makes things more confusing for the player and possibly for you in the long run, if those points will matter in some scenes.

Keep up the good work and GL with your game.

 

[Bigdick606]

Is this on the rooftop? Cause I never went there and suddenly this woman Ive never seen treats me like I know her. Kinda funny.

that's how it was on the roof at the beginning of the game before leaving for school for the first time

 

[AlexCastle]

Could someone please explain or give details about Julia's loop when they drink? I'm testing the game, and it's letting me continue the story without any issues. Or are you referring to when she stays reading in her room? Thanks

 

[AlexCastle]

maya and josy are not a forced choise. you can dump them both. do you remember why? because people didnt like the "sharing" and borderline ntr aspect of them.

besides those two, you have more than a dozen lis to chose from and guess what, besides josy and maya, lesbian action is choise based and minimal if at all.

not to forget that BADIK is running for years now.

comparing that game to this is idiotic.

why not point him to the dozens of new games which floped because people like you advised devs to "make the game they want to make"

so with all that, your advise is not only bad, but dishonest as well.

either give a proper advise, like the second and third part of your comment or dont give at all.

Bro, the only scene with Raven is her touching some random girl that the MC will never meet while they're showering. I don't know why there was so much fuss about it

 

[Joratox]

Could someone please explain or give details about Julia's loop when they drink? I'm testing the game, and it's letting me continue the story without any issues. Or are you referring to when she stays reading in her room? Thanks

For me I had some issues where Julia drank like 3 or 4 times, I said enough and she went to bed. Then I followed her and when I tried to interact with her, it booted me back to the living room and said something like "you can still talk to Julia". Only after a reload of a save and had her drink like 6 times (i think) I could get on with the scene.

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[Chris2041]

Bro, the only scene with Raven is her touching some random girl that the MC will never meet while they're showering. I don't know why there was so much fuss about it

what about the scene whit mom posing for her in her underwear while mc peeks on them hiding for me that scene it was a bigger insult to the player and MC than she fucking a ramdom in a harem game and also how many times Mc gets beaten and that female domination scene whit the teacher and the scene whit the redhead girl in the shower whit the black hair girl that she was the character i was liking the most T_T