thanos255
I used to like your game but honestly, whatever story you are pushing for had changed the orignal premise.
As of the current state of the game, Imma not so sure what kind of romance we are looking at with Lucy. You have also started to change previous dialogs to fit your current story but on the other hand, you have devalued what was interesting about some of the characters in the first place, especially Zoe.
Zoe's inner monologues had always been she has interest in MC. You took that away after 3 episodes and not only ended the potential romance there, you immediately decided to "cover up" by throwing in a sex scene with Dan. And after meeting Dan, Lucy has a dream of a double penetration by Dan and MC as well and really... some romance that is...
Lastly and ironically, Dan is the only person who seemed to understand/believe what MC is pointing out when he shares his suspicions on Pascal.
The below is your overview...
I am not able to find the humor or romance... but am looking at the drama of lucy and the richness of Dan cucking MC physically (with Zoe), mentally (with Lucy) and spiritually (as he is your only bro who sees what you see about the evils of Pascal)...
Damn its sad... Dan sounds more like the real MC...