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Not really i believe it's the game story plot but the dev is pretty good at answering questions so i'm sure he will clarify this
I removed the MMF dream before production because some people were very shocked to see it when they deciphered the game. A woman should have control over her dreams and not dream of having sex with another man.
An image was easy to remove. Long live censorship.
But you are right, I have to remove the MMF tag
For Cecilia, expression regular here : Fr and english :
if re.findall(r'fellation|suce|léch|pipe', pce, re.I) or re.findall(r'blow|suck|lick|fellation', pce, re.I): # fellation, suce, lécher, pipe
if re.findall(r'masturb|branl|doigt', pce, re.I) or re.findall(r'mastur|jerk|finger|hand', pce, re.I): # masturber, branler, doigter
if re.findall(r'sodom|encul|anal| cul', pce, re.I) or re.findall(r'anal|ass', pce, re.I): # sodomie, enculer, anal, dans le cul
if re.findall(r'exhibi|publi|humil', pce, re.I): # exhibition, public, publique, humilier
if re.findall(r'frapp|cogn|tapp|coup|giffl', pce, re.I) or re.findall(r'hit|bang|tap|slap', pce, re.I): # frapper, cogner, tapper, coup, giffler
if re.findall(r'nue|poil|habil|strip', pce, re.I) or re.findall(r'nude|naked|undress|tits', pce, re.I): # nue, a poil, Déshabiller, striptease
if re.findall(r'esclave|chienne', pce, re.I) or re.findall(r'slave', pce, re.I): # esclave, chienne
if re.findall(r'bdsm|bondage|ligot|attach|soumettre', pce, re.I) or re.findall(r'tie', pce, re.I): # bdsm bondage attacher ligoter
if re.findall(r'bais|amour|prendre|viol|penetr|niquer', pce, re.I) or re.findall(r'fuck|fist|cum|cream|double', pce, re.I): # baiser amour violer pénétrer violer, pénétrer
if re.findall(r'gang|partouze|orgy', pce, re.I): # gangbang partouze orgy
if re.findall(r'sextoy|god|jouet', pce, re.I) or re.findall(r'toy|dildo', pce, re.I): # sextoy god jouet
if re.findall(r'tuer|etrangl|assas', pce, re.I) or re.findall(r'kill|strangle|murder', pce, re.I): # tuer etrangler assassiner
if re.findall(r'nique|insult|salope|grosse|conn|pute', pce, re.I) or re.findall(r'insult|fat|bitch', pce, re.I): # nique ta mere, insulter, salope, conne, grosse, connasse
Merci, so just for one image that was a dream?!
I'm sorry I'm not versed in coding, those are the options we have with her during the game (I don't remember anymore)?
Just look this part for each line : r'blow|suck|lick|fellation' I try all part of word.
I Just wanted to say thanks for putting in the effort to help the developer out with the proof reading. It’s a difficult enough task as it is to translate a story and not lose the subtle characteristics and subtleties that keep it grounded to the origin. I can only Imagine how difficult it would be to feel like you’re also expected to know all the various nuances &/or phrases that are more commonplace and that would feel like the natural choice in a language that isn’t your primary language, even more so when there are many phrases and sayings that are more predominant within that second language depending on what region the reader is from. It’s very refreshing to see what appears to be a genuine positive response to this constructive criticism and an open mind to learning a new perspective, as well as for the original comment that wasn’t just degrading the writing for its perceived error or miss communication. I hope you and others that help with translations will keep up the good work, it would be our loss to miss out on so many different games and stories just because we don’t speak the authors language natively.
Thank you for the time you’ve spent on creating this game. Not everything in this is my cup of tea but I’m not the one creating it. Personally, I find it interesting when a game doesn’t go exactly the way I would expect it to go. And usually, it’s a small team at best that work on this kind of game/VN’s, so I tend to overlook some of the uncharacteristic or unrealistic responses that happen. This might be a stretch but when I’m trying to send someone a text or message from my phone, I don’t write it out in long form as if I was speaking verbally, mainly due to me wanting to get my reply out quick enough that I’m not playing catch up on whatever the next messages they send because it took too long to fully flesh out my response. So, correct me if I’m wrong but I’d Imagine that the amount of work that goes into writing and developing the game in a short enough time to give us all updated content some corners end up getting cut or overlooked. Considering this is your first game I’m really enjoying it for what it is and the effort that has been put into it.Your answer is very complet and polite. Thanks for this. I think I can apply some advice on it.
I clearly underestimated the people who play the faithful way.
I recognize that.
At first, I didn't even think I could "skip" the sex phases with all the characters.
To me, you play a video game to do things you don't do in real life.
But now I understand that the reward of being faithful also appeals.
=> I'm going to work on that.
I must be able to do both by modifying and strengthening the romance phase.
I also went over some confusing sentences for Zoe.
I'll get to that
Thanks for your advice.
My game is under construction, all is possible, it's my first game.
I created website before ^^.
I don’t know if I’m alone in this but the games that I love all have the ability to pull me into their world. The characters live by the individual rules and characteristics that were established earlier on as you are finding out more about the Mc and Li(s). Things such as are their actual consequences or is it a game where you can sleep with everything you cross paths with and the LI will still only have eyes for you? If there are consequences, then at different points the game will show that your actions are having a noticeable advert reaction from the Li. I had a huge disconnect when the Li has these Bipolar mood shifts and suddenly after all this Time you’ve been bonding and creating the relationship scenario the MC’s Opinion is automatically worthless and despite him helping her break down her walls and accept physical contact she suddenly treats you like you are just an outlet for her lust and despite all your caring and considerate treatment to her now when you voice your Concerns she sees it as just black/white situation and your opinion is wrong and offensive to her, all good will and trust that had been established is instantly reduced to having no value. So now we as players are just in a free for all because some responses that would appear like they wouldn’t have any major impact other than potentially creating the beginning of a rift in their relationship because of differing opinions now give us the reaction like we just kicked a Baby in front of her. It just makes it hard to determine what actions to take because the cause and affect don’t have any established guideline or scale, they follow.
Ranting aside I am really enjoying the game and I think you have done a great job with what you have created thus far. I have no doubt that if you keep it up and create more games in the future that they will only get better. Nobody’s first project ever turns out flawless there is always room for improvement, and we learn that as we go. Thanks again for all your effort and hard work you have put into this and for putting it out there for us to experience.
Adding a Gallery with a scene replay section would be great! the bonus pictues is cool but having the scene replay added in there would be amazing as well.
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Lucie is without a doubt one shit excuse for a LI and a next level idiot well they all are idiots and the MC has fuck all of a back bone. lol
Thank you for this long answer.
This is indeed my first game and I am alone since the beginning.
I made some mistakes, I admit it, but it would be too much work to create other routes or redo a certain game.
I had established the story long before, and I wanted to stick to it.
Normally I put a lot of effort into making Lucie less 180°. But apparently not enough for some people.
I understand that you would have liked your choices to be more important, but even with "4 hours of work by day" since 3 years, I can't do "more". (arround 4000 hours of work)
I will do it differently for the next game thanks to your feedback.
I would also try not to be alone.
Managing the story, the characters, the renders, the dialogues, the sound design, the renpy, it's really a lot.
And when I get criticisms without argumentation, I find them so hard.
The game is free, nobody is mandatory to play it and I wanted to offer something different (1 MC with 10 women for him). Too different maybe.
I'm going to finish the game.
Your choices during the game will be important at that point.
There will be 3 really different routes to take to finish the game.
Eric.
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Merci pour cette longue réponse.
C'est en effet mon premier jeu et je suis seul depuis le début.
J'ai fait quelques erreurs, je le reconnais, mais ça serait trop de travail pour créer d'autres routes ou refaire une certaine partie.
J'avais établi l'histoire bien avant, et je voulais m'y tenir. Normalement j'ai fait beaucoup d'effort pour rendre Lucie moins 180°. Je comprends que vous aurez aimé que vos choix aient plus d'importance, mais même avec 4 heures de travail par jour sur le jeu depuis 3 ans, je ne peux faire "plus".
Je m'y prendrais autrement pour le prochain jeu grâce à vos remontées. J'essayerais aussi de ne pas être seul. Gérer l'histoire, les personnages, les rendus, les dialogues, le sound design, le renpy, c'est vraiment beaucoup.
Et quand je reçois des critiques sans argumentation, je les trouve tellement durs. Le jeu est gratuit, personne n'est obligé d'y jouer et je voulais proposer quelque chose de différent.
Je vais finir le jeu, pour pouvoir passer à autre chose. Vos choix durant le jeu auront une importance à ce moment-là. 3 routes vraiment différentes seront à proposer pour finir en beauté le jeu.
Eric.
Bravo et félicitation. Très bon graphisme et superbe histoire. Continue comme ça. Vivement la suite et fin.
Et aussi beaucoup d’autres jeux VN en FRANCAIS
Bravo and congratulations. Very good graphic design and superb story. Continues like that. Strongly the rest and end.
And also many other games VN in French.
Et aussi beaucoup d’autres jeux VN en FRANCAIS
Bravo and congratulations. Very good graphic design and superb story. Continues like that. Strongly the rest and end.
And also many other games VN in French.
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Merci beaucoup pour le retour ! c'est important pour moi. N'hésitez pas à faire une review sur F95 du jeu lucie
C'est beaucoup de travail, mais c'est un plaisir de vous le partager. De partager quelque chose de différent.
Thank you very much for the feedback! It's important for me. Don't hesitate to do a review on F95 of the game lucie
It's a lot of work, but it's a pleasure to share it with you. To share something different.
Eric.
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Ahhh...French... The marvelous french "porno-soft" movies of the nineties... L'Amant... La salope... Histoire d'O... What class.Merci beaucoup pour le retour ! c'est important pour moi. N'hésitez pas à faire une review sur F95 du jeu lucie
C'est beaucoup de travail, mais c'est un plaisir de vous le partager. De partager quelque chose de différent.
Thank you very much for the feedback! It's important for me. Don't hesitate to do a review on F95 of the game lucie
It's a lot of work, but it's a pleasure to share it with you. To share something different.
Eric.
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Yheaa tell me about it... and the badly translated american movies, me and my brother stumbeld upon one on tv late at night and when a character threw an other in the pool when there was no splash we burst out laughfing.
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You might want to change that to "native English-speaker", unless you meant that the translator was sitting in his teepee smoking the peace pipe while he worked on the game.
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