Ren'Py Lucky Paradox [v0.9.2f Public] [Stawer]

[Sirxtias]

I've been thinking about adding these tags for Lucky Paradox, like:

Big Ass
Drugs
Exhibitionism
Group sex
Lesbian
Male domination
Masturbation
Milf
Cosplay
Humor
Mature
Stripping
Sex toys
Transformation
Twins

What do you think people?

 

[torresm]

What do you think people?

I think that sounds like a fun party

 

[Cartageno]

I've been thinking about adding these tags for Lucky Paradox, like:
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What do you think people?

I haven't played the latest update and may have forgotten stuff, so this is of the top of my head

Big Ass - always arguable, when does it become "big"? For me it is used too often devaluing it, at the same time there are many games less deserving

Drugs - yes, obviously correct

Exhibitionism - don't remember any scene

Group sex - yes

Lesbian - hmmm, not really (or did I miss something?)

Male domination - again, people disagree on when the "dom" begins, I mean some cry "femdom" because of cowgirl (as the girl is on top thus dominating). But well, we have femdom for that one Maxy scene, so maledom seems correct

Masturbation - has occured

Milf - yup

Cosplay - yup

Humor - subjective. There is a lot of humor in it, however I don't think it is humorous as such

Mature - don't know about that tag and cannot find it in the official tag list?!

Stripping - wouldn't remember a scene which really fits the tag definition

Sex toys - yes

Transformation - yes

Twins - no (again, unless I forgot something). Maxy and Mary aren't twins as such

 

[battali0n]

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I've been thinking about adding these tags for Lucky Paradox, like:

Big Ass
Drugs
Exhibitionism
Group sex
Lesbian
Male domination
Masturbation
Milf
Cosplay
Humor
Mature
Stripping
Sex toys
Transformation
Twins

What do you think people?

That's a pretty good joke on your part. Any of us who have played this game know that you are trolling us. Maybe go try that with a less vanilla game..

 

[Stawer]

I think some new tags are needed, as since this thread was made until now a ton of content has come out xD

 

[Sirxtias]

That's a pretty good joke on your part. Any of us who have played this game know that you are trolling us. Maybe go try that with a less vanilla game..

Not at all...

I haven't played the latest update and may have forgotten stuff, so this is of the top of my head

Big Ass - always arguable, when does it become "big"? For me it is used too often devaluing it, at the same time there are many games less deserving

Drugs - yes, obviously correct

Exhibitionism - don't remember any scene

Group sex - yes

Lesbian - hmmm, not really (or did I miss something?)

Male domination - again, people disagree on when the "dom" begins, I mean some cry "femdom" because of cowgirl (as the girl is on top thus dominating). But well, we have femdom for that one Maxy scene, so maledom seems correct

Masturbation - has occured

Milf - yup

Cosplay - yup

Humor - subjective. There is a lot of humor in it, however I don't think it is humorous as such

Mature - don't know about that tag and cannot find it in the official tag list?!

Stripping - wouldn't remember a scene which really fits the tag definition

Sex toys - yes

Transformation - yes

Twins - no (again, unless I forgot something). Maxy and Mary aren't twins as such

I'd say big ass cause of charlotte.

In 0.8.5 Maxy kinda make a scene related to Exhibitionism at the Yorokobi without going into much further

About the lesbian tag, Maxy and Charlotte had a lesbian moment but it's if you choose wise

Male dom, because Lucky in scenes like the shower with Layla or scenes with Mary, he's kinda dominant

Even when it's not about Humor there are lot of game that have the tag and they had like 1 joke, and LP has a lot of jokes

Stripping... I was thinking about this since a lot of girls strip but idk I need a second opinion too

Twins... probably in this one you're right, since Mary and Maxy are kinda twins but not exactly... if you wanna see it like that but idk they came from the same mother, look pretty alike

 

[battali0n]

I think some new tags are needed, as since this thread was made until now a ton of content has come out xD

That being the case I will answer the sirxtias post:
Big Ass- doesn't matter
Drugs - no
Exhibitionism - no
Group sex -hell no
Lesbian- hell no
Male domination -OK
Masturbation - doesn't matter
Milf - doesn't matter
Cosplay - OK
Humor - OK
Mature - doesn't matter
Stripping - OK
Sex toys - hell no
Transformation -hell no
Twins - yes

 

[praqueperguntas]

omg really? this feels like a punch in the gut D:

The feedback I have constantly received within the community channels (Discord/Reddit/Itch), say exactly the opposite, even for the remaster of the game it was necessary to redo the whole translation from scratch.

So we are always improving the translation, but sometimes some characters speak weird even in Spanish (Even Maxy sometimes invents words that don't exist hahaha, same with Celestine, or Layla or Liz...)

We have even received a lot of help from native English speakers to polish the texts as much as possible, so idk what to say D:

That was not my intention at all, like I said your work is so good that it's one of the only VNs I still bother reading; most I just skip to the good parts because it's just the same old same old. It's either a bunch of teenage existential nonsense with nearly no sex, or a shitton of substandard porn with no story, whereas Lucky Paradox actually has a pretty good balance of good events and reasonable, "not ridiculous" sex scenes.

And yeah, with some of the expressions from characters like Celestine and some of Layla's speech, I've noticed that a lot of the expressions are made up so it doesn't bother me at all. But there are some of the most recent events where, while it's not nearly as many mistakes as you'll see in some other foreign speaker games, it's a lot more than you see in the earlier events. In particular, the events involving Liz seem to have an extraordinary amount of incorrect pronouns, which is very jarring since when you're using words like "he" and "she", making a mistake on that can force the reader to have to go through a line of dialogue 2-3 extra times to make sense of it.

But again, I don't mean to be discouraging in any way, quite the contrary: I'll say it as many times as I have to, your work is several cuts above pretty much all the other VNs on this site, with very very few exceptions. If I bring this up, it's because I really think it's so good that it merits the highest scrutiny with the writing. There's many other games (I won't name names to not be mean) where the writers clearly aren't even trying, and for those I don't even bother posting here no matter how much I think the game is good. But for yours, I noticed a very clear decline in the very very recent events, and you're clearly trying to make a game actually worth playing, so I felt it worth my time to mention. It might just be that those still need to get some TLC and I'm catching the "early mistakes", but I found it to be such an odd change from almost native-speaker level early events that I felt it should be brought up.

Edit: For reference, I am going through the Sasha/Primrose events right now where you find out Anton is dead through the green butterfly and there are almost no grammar errors at all. If not for the language selection when you open the game, based on just these events, I would not be able to tell that it wasn't written by a native speaker. That's sort of what I'm using as my point of comparison.

 

[Cartageno]

Not at all...




I'd say big ass cause of charlotte.

In 0.8.5 Maxy kinda make a scene related to Exhibitionism at the Yorokobi without going into much further

About the lesbian tag, Maxy and Charlotte had a lesbian moment but it's if you choose wise

Male dom, because Lucky in scenes like the shower with Layla or scenes with Mary, he's kinda dominant

Even when it's not about Humor there are lot of game that have the tag and they had like 1 joke, and LP has a lot of jokes

Stripping... I was thinking about this since a lot of girls strip but idk I need a second opinion too

Twins... probably in this one you're right, since Mary and Maxy are kinda twins... if you wanna see it like that but idk they came from the same mother, look pretty alike

Stripping, by the page description, is more than just "getting nekkid", otherwise every sex would include stripping. But yeah, maybe.

"If you choose wise" - doesn't matter, if it indeed is in the game, the tag is justified.

That being the case I will answer the sirxtias post:
Drugs - no
Group sex -hell no
Transformation -hell no

Drugs: the tea in the spa should count

Group sex: any time more than two people are getting it on. E. g. drunk at the beach with the pumpkins

Transformation: mostly it is male turning female when the tag comes, agreed, so people may be misled, but breast enlargement/reduction counts

 

[Sirxtias]

Stripping, by the page description, is more than just "getting nekkid", otherwise every sex would include stripping. But yeah, maybe.

"If you choose wise" - doesn't matter, if it indeed is in the game, the tag is justified.



Drugs: the tea in the spa should count

Group sex: any time more than two people are getting it on. E. g. drunk at the beach with the pumpkins

Transformation: mostly it is male turning female when the tag comes, agreed, so people may be misled, but breast enlargement/reduction counts

Yeah I see your points then stripping and Twins would be out but mostly everything else should be added

 

[Sirxtias]

That was not my intention at all, like I said your work is so good that it's one of the only VNs I still bother reading; most I just skip to the good parts because it's just the same old same old. It's either a bunch of teenage existential nonsense with nearly no sex, or a shitton of substandard porn with no story, whereas Lucky Paradox actually has a pretty good balance of good events and reasonable, "not ridiculous" sex scenes.

And yeah, with some of the expressions from characters like Celestine and some of Layla's speech, I've noticed that a lot of the expressions are made up so it doesn't bother me at all. But there are some of the most recent events where, while it's not nearly as many mistakes as you'll see in some other foreign speaker games, it's a lot more than you see in the earlier events. In particular, the events involving Liz seem to have an extraordinary amount of incorrect pronouns, which is very jarring since when you're using words like "he" and "she", making a mistake on that can force the reader to have to go through a line of dialogue 2-3 extra times to make sense of it.

But again, I don't mean to be discouraging in any way, quite the contrary: I'll say it as many times as I have to, your work is several cuts above pretty much all the other VNs on this site, with very very few exceptions. If I bring this up, it's because I really think it's so good that it merits the highest scrutiny with the writing. There's many other games (I won't name names to not be mean) where the writers clearly aren't even trying, and for those I don't even bother posting here no matter how much I think the game is good. But for yours, I noticed a very clear decline in the very very recent events, and you're clearly trying to make a game actually worth playing, so I felt it worth my time to mention. It might just be that those still need to get some TLC and I'm catching the "early mistakes", but I found it to be such an odd change from almost native-speaker level early events that I felt it should be brought up.

Edit: For reference, I am going through the Sasha/Primrose events right now where you find out Anton is dead through the green butterfly and there are almost no grammar errors at all. If not for the language selection when you open the game, based on just these events, I would not be able to tell that it wasn't written by a native speaker. That's sort of what I'm using as my point of comparison.

Look, if you want, you can send me all the typos you've found so far I'll check them all, better if you send it to me by discord

 

[Sony676]

does someone have a current save? I still cannot load my latest saves. Guess my last save was not from the version before but from the one before THAT. xD Don't know the number tbh...

 

[battali0n]

If I had seen some of the tags you are intending to add before I tried this game then I would never have played this game because of how many different ways they could be interpreted. I'd only play with the tags I answered as "hell no" if they were listed as (optional). I hope this doesn't mean you intend to make changes to the game as i love your work.

 

[Stawer]

does someone have a current save? I still cannot load my latest saves. Guess my last save was not from the version before but from the one before THAT. xD Don't know the number tbh...

There is a save on the patreon page:

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[Cartageno]

Yeah I see your points then stripping would be out but mostly everything else should be added

You still haven't convinced me about the twins But in the end you don't need to convince me but F95 staff.

 

[Stawer]

That was not my intention at all, like I said your work is so good that it's one of the only VNs I still bother reading; most I just skip to the good parts because it's just the same old same old. It's either a bunch of teenage existential nonsense with nearly no sex, or a shitton of substandard porn with no story, whereas Lucky Paradox actually has a pretty good balance of good events and reasonable, "not ridiculous" sex scenes.

And yeah, with some of the expressions from characters like Celestine and some of Layla's speech, I've noticed that a lot of the expressions are made up so it doesn't bother me at all. But there are some of the most recent events where, while it's not nearly as many mistakes as you'll see in some other foreign speaker games, it's a lot more than you see in the earlier events. In particular, the events involving Liz seem to have an extraordinary amount of incorrect pronouns, which is very jarring since when you're using words like "he" and "she", making a mistake on that can force the reader to have to go through a line of dialogue 2-3 extra times to make sense of it.

But again, I don't mean to be discouraging in any way, quite the contrary: I'll say it as many times as I have to, your work is several cuts above pretty much all the other VNs on this site, with very very few exceptions. If I bring this up, it's because I really think it's so good that it merits the highest scrutiny with the writing. There's many other games (I won't name names to not be mean) where the writers clearly aren't even trying, and for those I don't even bother posting here no matter how much I think the game is good. But for yours, I noticed a very clear decline in the very very recent events, and you're clearly trying to make a game actually worth playing, so I felt it worth my time to mention. It might just be that those still need to get some TLC and I'm catching the "early mistakes", but I found it to be such an odd change from almost native-speaker level early events that I felt it should be brought up.

Edit: For reference, I am going through the Sasha/Primrose events right now where you find out Anton is dead through the green butterfly and there are almost no grammar errors at all. If not for the language selection when you open the game, based on just these events, I would not be able to tell that it wasn't written by a native speaker. That's sort of what I'm using as my point of comparison.

Thank u, any constructive criticism always helps, as a dev I want the game to be better and better, and I am concerned that the quality does not diminish, but on the contrary, that it gets better and better

It also happens that the old texts have gone through more revisions and corrections, something that the last texts have not, cause every update is huge and there is always the pressure of time to release new content

 

[Sirxtias]

You still haven't convinced me about the twins But in the end you don't need to convince me but F95 staff.

Yeah probably you're right ahhaha I was in between with that one too

 

[Cartageno]

If I had seen some of the tags you are intending to add before I tried this game then I would never have played this game because of how many different ways they could be interpreted. I'd only play with the tags I answered as "hell no" if they were listed as (optional). I hope this doesn't mean you intend to make changes to the game as i love your work.

That's a common problem. I am not into gay nor rape and will probably more likely skip a game when it includes them, then again I know a game which has these two tags (and interracial, which I am not caring about positively nor negatively) only because of one scene by two minor characters (not including the MC) which is optional in viewing plus most players won't ever even get the option to see it since it requires a chain of decisions where MC doesn't take matters into his own hands when he realizes one of his LIs is terrorized - and I think most players want to execute revenge themselves.

So I see your point and I may have missed quite a few games where the tags weren't "as bad", or conversely loaded up a game which included nice tags but they were so minor in the game that you really had to look for them to notice. A tag rework is in the works (rumor has it) but as of now it is like it is: if there is a scene including a kink, no matter how minor, optional, not MC, the tag should be applied.

Never mind the subjective ones, or the fact that even with the wrong tags a game can be extremely good and you can just overlook them - it's a really rough categorization at the best of times.

 

[EscapeEvade]

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And to make searches better try this:

Go to here -> Preferences under "Search Options" switch to "most recent".

You are a god. I have always wondered why the search results were so terribly sorted but there was no in-search option for changing order.

 

[Stawer]

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