- Jul 20, 2021
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Well something seemed off with the writing with this release. Most of the MC's interaction (intimacy) with his regular girls seemed to be PG rated, or limited to picking from a multi choice scene, down to a single event that ends with no or limited intimacy (interrupted blue-ball special release). Even the four founders scene event seemed off, when MC is forced to pick one single girl from four, and then again just a single choice to suddenly end quickly, leaving the others to just watch it all happen.
Also, I noticed some grammar mistakes and a different writing style with this release, that wasn't present in earlier versions. So was there a new writer added? Anyways I found this final release kind of boring, from the past versions. (Limited and almost no sex scenes with MC's girls, which he's already been intimate with them earlier on in this story.) This release seemed like it was the end of the story, and not the end of the chapter.
Also, I noticed some grammar mistakes and a different writing style with this release, that wasn't present in earlier versions. So was there a new writer added? Anyways I found this final release kind of boring, from the past versions. (Limited and almost no sex scenes with MC's girls, which he's already been intimate with them earlier on in this story.) This release seemed like it was the end of the story, and not the end of the chapter.