Hercule_Poirot
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- Aug 22, 2016
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Did the MC suddenly become genderfluid in the middle of the overview?
Assuming that the overview refers to a male MC, this part is wrong:
"Our character who lost her mother to cancer at a young age"
Instead of using the word her, you probably meant to say his.
Assuming that the overview refers to a male MC, this part is wrong:
"Our character who lost her mother to cancer at a young age"
Instead of using the word her, you probably meant to say his.