VN Ren'Py Abandoned Lust of Pain [v0.3] [Vilkas Creative]

[Hercule_Poirot]

Did the MC suddenly become genderfluid in the middle of the overview?

Assuming that the overview refers to a male MC, this part is wrong:
"Our character who lost her mother to cancer at a young age"


Instead of using the word her, you probably meant to say his.

 

[Alicja Erberg]

I even wanted to support it, but a dead mother means that there will be no incest, in which case I'll withdraw.

Supposedly there's an incest patch that makes it that it was a stepmother who died due to cancer and the dad returns with his son to his former wife (and his son biological mother)

 

[Alicja Erberg]

Another game in which you have choices, but the sexual content is not optional. I honestly don't understand, what is the point of asking the player whether he wants to be flirty or not if sexual content follows regardless of what you choose?

That's professional game making at its finest

 

[Tuperr0]

Niceeee

 

[incest lover m/s]

Supposedly there's an incest patch that makes it that it was a stepmother who died due to cancer and the dad returns with his son to his former wife (and his son biological mother)

in this case i take back what i said

 

[Allan Wolf]

Supposedly there's an incest patch that makes it that it was a stepmother who died due to cancer and the dad returns with his son to his former wife (and his son biological mother)

where is this patch located?

 

[DeUglyOne]

Developer Notes:


Professional scriptwriter, fix the many shortcomings we see in adult games, work hard to give you a perfect gaming experience.


So the writing is just awful. Horrible translation and needs a proofreader badly. Can barely understand what is even going on, it is that bad. You'd think with a professional everything, this wouldn't be an issue.

And the whole, "fix many shortcomings we see in adult games"? Well the bad translation is one of those they didn't fix. And the no choice on sexual situations is something they didn't bother to fix. You're forced to have sex with random girl from work without any choice. And the game just jumps around so much, like talking to your step-mom one minute, and then bam you're at a club on a date with said co-worker (when there was no talk of even going on a date in the first place).

That is just some of the shortcomings we see in adult games, and you did all of them. Not fix them.

Overall, this just wasn't good. It needs a lot of work. With all that praise of calling themselves a professional team, they really dropped the ball on this one. Should probably make sure you can actually deliver a top game first, before praising yourself as professionals (in my opinion). So yeah, not for me, but best of luck with this. Thanks any ways.

Reminds me of one of the games that was posted a few months(?) back: Dev Notes went on and on about them being a professional play testing group, yet the game wouldn't even start. After a quick fix was issued, it still crashed about every 3-5 screens. Not only did they fail to play test their own game before release, they couldn't be bothered to play test after fixing just a single bug.
Their Dev Notes were scrubbed shortly thereafter. IIRC, the game was scrubbed, too.

Definitely need to add a "professional" proof reader to their team and get their script writer to use an English spellchecker.

Just reading the overview and Dev Notes prevented me from even looking at screenshots, let alone bother to download it.
Using incorrect pronouns, incorrect grammar, misspellings and incorrect words just doesn't look "professional".

 

[Nerra]

Based on the name of the game, you'd think that there should be BDSM content.

 

[Vilkas Creative]

Based on the name of the game, you'd think that there should be BDSM content.

yes there is

 

[doku99]

Reminds me of one of the games that was posted a few months(?) back: Dev Notes went on and on about them being a professional play testing group, yet the game wouldn't even start. After a quick fix was issued, it still crashed about every 3-5 screens. Not only did they fail to play test their own game before release, they couldn't be bothered to play test after fixing just a single bug.
Their Dev Notes were scrubbed shortly thereafter. IIRC, the game was scrubbed, too.

Definitely need to add a "professional" proof reader to their team and get their script writer to use an English spellchecker.

Just reading the overview and Dev Notes prevented me from even looking at screenshots, let alone bother to download it.
Using incorrect pronouns, incorrect grammar, misspellings and incorrect words just doesn't look "professional".

Anyone can add "professional" and any other word to their own project doesn't mean anything at all

 

[Abc2326]

Any titfucks/paizuri in this, then I'm in.

 

[bruce555]

Vilkas Creative ,
Future tags?

 

[Nerra]

yes there is

Shouldn't it have the BDSM tag then?

 

[Before I Forget]

The MC told Thea she was hot and she told him to go to his room lol

 

[Vualen]

Nice, but to intrigue players there should be at least one normal animated sex scene at the beginning...

 

[Wicked Garden]

Looks great visually but the story was really hard to follow at times. I'll check back if or once it's corrected, best of luck.

 

[bcool]

Funny that Patreon prohibits incest but promote tobacco (they keep smoking in this game).
I wish it was the opposite
Are Paypal and Visa going to pressure about it too ?

 

[Wicked Garden]

Funny that Patreon prohibits incest but promote tobacco (they keep smoking in this game).
I wish it was the opposite
Are Paypal and Visa going to pressure about it too ?

That character was hot too but the smoking, not so much.

 

[Akainu456]

Please don't add NTR

 

[Alicja Erberg]

where is this patch located?

It was a joke. That patch idea would be stupid even for the porn games standard but hey perhaps someone along the road would make it anyway