Im only a few chapters in yet would like to know...is the MC supposed to be a functionally blind, retarded idiot?
Is there going to be some character arc that's going to at least turn him into a human being that will know how to not be a whiney biitch?
Spoilers: OR how to REMEMBER that he is fighting TWO individuals, then ONLY paying attention to one lesser of two threats instead of IMMEDIATELY focusing on the fat dude STILL holding A BAT RIGHT BEHIND HIM...the same one he used on the MCs midsection one second ago??
"Wow, I am knocked out...I wonder how THAT happened?"
"OH that's right, because I am a moron that never pays attention to little details like self-preservation."
Edit: This is a Kinetic Novel, not a Virtual Novel.
Kinetic is streamlined with the illusion of choice, most of those choices are limited dialog additions.
All of that is just fine when reading a good story with cemented direction almost from the very beginning.
A Virtual Novel is a choose-your-own-adventure, where every answer given drives to a variety of inevitable conclusions.
This also gives the VN a great deal of replayability to go down different rabbit holes, find different paths, and conclude with several different endings.