I'm assuming you meant something else; 'expired' doesn't really make sense here (by context).
Maybe 'transpires'? Although you could simply say 'occurs' or 'takes place' instead for simplicity.
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Maybe 'transpires'? Although you could simply say 'occurs' or 'takes place' instead for simplicity.
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Kudos for 'Captain Eye Patch' as well as the police showing up after doing the web search… at Hogwarts. 
There are a few small errors in the English translation, especially in regard to pronouns so you may want to check those again. As has already been mentioned, you missed translating some lines as well as a closing bracket on one of Ver's lines.
Also see about compressing your renders to webp (mozjpeg is a tad smaller, but does loose a bit of detail):
I like the premise of the game. The renders are looking good, the animations are very smooth, and the ladies are lookin' mighty fine. Here's hoping the cop shows up again.
Best of luck and keep it up!
There are a few small errors in the English translation, especially in regard to pronouns so you may want to check those again. As has already been mentioned, you missed translating some lines as well as a closing bracket on one of Ver's lines.
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Best of luck and keep it up!
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English grammer/spelling needs work. I looked in the rpy files to see if I could correct them but they're in Portuguese so I don't know how it gets to English on the screen - the translation is beyond my limited Ren'Py knowledge .
There appear to be some rendering issues with Ver's hair at the end of her "payment" and as she's standing with her mouth full.
Other than that - looks like possibly a fun HP parody. Looking forward to the next installment.
.There appear to be some rendering issues with Ver's hair at the end of her "payment" and as she's standing with her mouth full.
Other than that - looks like possibly a fun HP parody. Looking forward to the next installment.
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Thanks for the help, I will make all the corrections.Kudos for 'Captain Eye Patch' as well as the police showing up after doing the web search… at Hogwarts.
There are a few small errors in the English translation, especially in regard to pronouns so you may want to check those again. As has already been mentioned, you missed translating some lines as well as a closing bracket on one of Ver's lines.
Also see about compressing your renders to webp (mozjpeg is a tad smaller, but does loose a bit of detail):You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
I like the premise of the game. The renders are looking good, the animations are very smooth, and the ladies are lookin' mighty fine. Here's hoping the cop shows up again.You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Best of luck and keep it up!
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The files you're looking for are atEnglish grammer/spelling needs work. I looked in the rpy files to see if I could correct them but they're in Portuguese so I don't know how it gets to English on the screen - the translation is beyond my limited Ren'Py knowledge
There appear to be some rendering issues with Ver's hair at the end of her "payment" and as she's standing with her mouth full.
Other than that - looks like possibly a fun HP parody. Looking forward to the next installment.
tl/English. Have fun!
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hmm the 2 ladies on the screenshot looks very cute whit corruption you can get away whit a harem and perhaps preggo
// Someone is messing up the timeline of this //
Remembering me a web series which is released recently
Remembering me a web series which is released recently
I downloaded the android version from the mediafire lini, the antivirus warned of malware on the game.
You may want to check that, just in case.
You may want to check that, just in case.
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Bro this is a really promising start. I really like the fairy design. I hope the best for your game dude.
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in my defense, I created the game before the series be released haha
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