I will change to what you said though, It does fit better. I'll go with." There's no way that loser can beat me!"
Cause that removes the honorific aswell. Does that work for you?
Honestly i would probably change the word entirely as the meaning is lost and can be seen more seriously than it really is. Changing loser to something more cutesy like dummy would fit better as it wouldnt sound as serious. This is something that real translators have to finagle around with sometimes with translations thanks to the honourfic system. Perfect accuracy is not always the best.
OK I changed Chapter 3 and 4's names in recollection room to be "Magical Girl Luna's Alliance." and Chapter 4 to match the English title I currently went with. I no longer remember why I titled chapter 3 as 'dream' but it probably wasn't a good decision to begin with.
I also fixed couple more typos and when Japanese images will get edited by the others in here I will take them and release a new patch that fixes these inconsistencies.
And calling me a translator is being a little generous. At most I'm a machine output wrangler.
I mean you still have to make decisions and figure out what makes the most sense and all that, which is pretty hard to do with just the machine wrangling P: A lot of thought and care has to go into some of this -nods sagely-
However, 123asdasdasd34 mentioned to be about a meme that he's seen before
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And how it seems to be made after that. And under his suggestion I plan to change it to
God damn that brings back memories X'D
I think the changes are good stuff. Not sure which is best tho.
Maybe something like this could work too
"Eeeeeh? You lost to
us?!Only losers lose to level 1 fairies!!"
Also. Im on Mea right now. Her Gimmick is all about dreams and the supernatural, and she's the youngest villian you fight who's actually a human, She's still a kid. Due to this, I tried to make her "Handwriting" so to speak more childish and faded to represent her dreamy nature, Do you guys think it looks okay, or should I change it back to brick text?
I think this is neat.
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Though you m ight look at word placements. When i first looked at it, i read it in lines, not columns.
Like... alongside the reworked fights he is releasing these past couple months? Jesus... kinda puts other devs work in perspective when this dude is just releasing a literal mountain of content after, what, less than 3 years of development?
This guy kind of reminds me of me whenever i work on projects. I put my all into it until im satisfied that its complete.
Wouldnt be surprised if he was no lifeing it with back to back 16 hour work days, similar to me xD "Itll be fine, itll only take a couple days."