VN Ren'Py Completed Main Seduction [v1.0] [Tremmi]

[nasam]

I don't like to be a critique really, but was the English so.. terrible in earlier versions?

Anyone know the answer on the soccer thing?

It was never perfect, but this update is specially bad.

I don't want to be mean with the dev (I know this stuff take a lot of work to be done) but in the last scenes the interactions don't seem like real conversations.

I like your game but now it is harder for me to enjoy it.

I am sure there is people willing to proofread and adjust the text for you.

 

[botc76]

Tremmi, the dev who just can't deal with criticism, veers of on weird tangents in his patreon posts and inserts large segments of wikipedia-based dialogue in his game... all the while conveniently inserting subplot after subplot just so that banging the mom can be postponed further...

It would be funny if it wasn't a bit sad.

Also, damn! Natalie's face in extreme close-up is fugly.

 

[Cape Verde]

... the English language could need some improvement.

There appears to be some universal Internet curse that punishes those attempting to point out grammar mistakes. A curse of irony.

 

[Joshua Tree]

There appears to be some universal Internet curse that punishes those attempting to point out grammar mistakes. A curse of irony.

If it had been just a tiny bit of grammer mistakes, I doubt anyone would cared that much about it. If I try play a game someone have machine translated from like Japanese, Russian or whatever, I don't really care because that is just how it is. But if you target an English speaking audience with your game. I think you as the creator ow it to the audience to give them a good experience to enjoy your game as it should.

 

[ELTACO]

I like this game , some of the writing is downright cheese ball (honestly it seems like most of writers of these games all went to the same workshop especially when it comes to all these damn indecisive MC's who talk themselves constantly), but the girls are sexy , though it is a damn shame the sex scenes aren't animated. Decent game to waste some time with overall , no real grind it seems (thankfully), definitely worth a play thru/run thru

ps had 3 crashes/exception errors on day 4 , hit ignore all 3 times games seems to be working for now.

***Update , played till v11 then said fuck it, writing went downhill (boring ass filler story with intermittent testing , [seriously who plays a porn game for fucking memory games] , another one for the recycle bin***

 

[Nerttu]

I like this game , some of the writing is downright cheese ball (honestly it seems like most of writers of these games all went to the same workshop especially when it comes to all these damn indecisive MC's who talk themselves constantly), but the girls are sexy , though it is a damn shame the sex scenes aren't animated. Decent game to waste some time with overall , no real grind it seems (thankfully), definitely worth a play thru/run thru

ps had 3 crashes/exception errors on day 4 , hit ignore all 3 times games seems to be working for now.

Mom sitting on the bed and MC is going to wisit the massaque ???? If so, I had the same (clean start and latest update).

 

[HeavyEavy]

Just ignore this topic. As always only f95 feedback is critical.

Wow... I barely have words. An overwhelming number of posts on this VN have been good(ignoring the normal I'm stuck, I crashed type of posts). It just happens that this release is absolutely HORRID. There is no way that this was written by the same person that wrote the previous chapters. None of it was well thought out, the conversations don't flow like they used to, not to mention that the translation works just plain sucks. I even tore into the source files and suprise suprise, the coding style is completely different as well. So much so that anyone could see the change in style.

from this style:
menu:
"Push them together":
$ svod8 += 1

hide 8m17
show 8m19
#$ effect()

"You push her tits together, then spread them."


to this style:
menu:
"Thanks": # "Спасибо":
a "Thanks for the possibility to take a breath, my mistress." # "Спасибо за возможность отдохнуть, госпожа."
z "Don't be a clown." # "Но-но мне тут, не паясничай."
$ ZM += 1


There is no way someone would change that much.... Just say'n

 

[tanabato]

Cassey age?

 

[HeavyEavy]

Cassey age?

15

 

[bosp]

Just ignore this topic. As always only f95 feedback is critical. Funny that every critic download and play from chapter to chapter. Good for tremmiGames that there are people who interested in developing of stable projects. Bad for f95 - from one chapter to another my interest of sharing with you MS is lower and lower. You are not grateful audience But anyway thanks for those who play my game with pleasure

You probably realized by now that this is a FORUM where people discuss games.
Not every game deserves to even get posted here but people still do it.
If your game is actually posted then you have to get accustomed to different opinions of the people on this forum.
If your game has potential people will post mostly positive comments if your game sucks ass you will get all kind of comments.
That's what this forum is about. Learn to deal with it in a good manner or leave for good and forget about this forum. If you just want grateful audience and cannot stand any criticism without feeling offended then this forum is definitely not for you.

FYI, I think your game is getting worse with every new update and I gave up on it and stopped playing a few months ago.
That's my opinion - you can agree or disagree with it but I still have the right to post it.
Expressing my opinion here is not bad for f95 - its actually what f95 is all about.

 

[alf677]

Thanks for the Game

 

[Rintal]

When the sister came to the MC shelter, they talked, and then she bent over the wall and just left. I answered all her questions correctly. So what do I need to do to stop her?

 

[Deleted member 609064]

What is the answer to the soccer team question?

@Tremmi PM me if you want some assistance improving the text.

 

[Rintal]

What is the answer to the soccer team question?

@Tremmi PM me if you want some assistance improving the text.

Spain

 

[Jackbite]

Walking on Eggshells Is what this Game is all about! You think you doing Ok? Then Boom .... Game over, What did i do wrong? Then you think Who cares? the story has no cognitive reasoning, & ffs the Menu is some sort of Hyroglifics, The one thing i did enjoy was Deleting this Shambolic excuse of a game, 2/10 & that's been Generous.

 

[zeros11]

walkthrough of new update??

 

[locomotor79]

changelog for new version plz and dont use the patreon post link becausse someppl ccanot see that
just copyand paste the text plz

 

[trumpthatbitch]

Just ignore this topic. As always only f95 feedback is critical. Funny that every critic download and play from chapter to chapter. Good for tremmiGames that there are people who interested in developing of stable projects. Bad for f95 - from one chapter to another my interest of sharing with you MS is lower and lower. You are not grateful audience But anyway thanks for those who play my game with pleasure

Actually no there plenty of highly rated games on this site yours isn't because it's trash. Your update was unintelligible gibberish.

The worst part is you expect the player to actually read the gibberish and present them with questions afterwards.

 

[Trasher2018]

This is really messed up. The expressions and poses are wired some times and there are some strange lighting (bright spotlight) scenes.

The worst is that the story doesn't work properly. There must be problems with the logic in the game. And ofter scenes swap without a reason (i.e. "X sits on bed and talks, then in the next scene X stands an talks and then the game tells you that X sits down on the bed - and we get the sitting scene again).

Just now I were with the aunt and the game say I have to talk with here about the masseuse and then i have to leave ...

Compare to many other games this just feels rough and clumsy. Maybe some of the problems are bc of the bad englisch - might be one reason. I still had some fun with the game, but there is more potential in it with more polishing and rework of the continuity.

 

[Deleted member 609064]

Cassie age?