ShepardRahl
Hey, thanks for taking the time to review the game, just thought I'd make a few comments.
I know a few people on the spectrum and they couldn't care less about sex, even after they've experienced it. So if Mark is supposed to be on the spectrum I'm not sure how realistic it would be for him to turn into a slut for his sister after they start fucking.
So, ASD(Autism Spectrum Disorder) is a spectrum, one person with ASD might differ wildly from another depending on where they land. They might share traits or personalities, but it's by no means a narrow field.
That said, many with autism don't like physical contact, so in that sense it doesn't fit the story very well, but it's fiction after all.
It's a shame that as the story progresses they devolve into single minded sex fiends for each other. They even fuck while they work out in the gym.
I'd like to write more about them, but they're pretty content with their current place in the game and so am I. They're supporting characters while Mark and Sarah are the main interest of the story.
I've thought about maybe making a prequel type thing about J&J's past, but we'll see... maybe one day.
The reason the game seems more sex focused right now is because it kind of is, but I don't have much left before I can move on from repeatable scenes and start writing the last parts of the story line.
The Grind - While this isn't the worst grind I've seen in a game like this, some of the goal thresholds could stand to be lowered. For example; Instead of having to work at your thesis 10 times it should be more like 5 or 6. The grind needs to feel as if it were a natural progression instead of a chore.
So I've adjusted some of these, not sure if they're in the current version of the game, things sort of bleed together after a while. Still, the thesis is difficult to change due to how the code looks, so I'd have to take it apart and then redo the code to change it. Perhaps I'll just change it to 5 points per turn instead of 1.
The character models - While the character models are fine for the most part, they all have the exact same comically large tits. It feels like it's the same character model for all of them just with each having different hair.
So, I get this all the time, people hate the tits, I get it...
Now, they look like this because that's what I like, that they look similar is because they're all made by me, not because they're the same character. I like a certain style and to pin this as a negative is kind of a bummer to me.
Also the simplification that they'd all be the same character is kind of a slap in the face to me personally, considering how much time I spend on character creation.
I make stuff I like, I don't really want to sit and make stuff I don't want to look at/play.
Thank you for your time and thanks for playing.
