I dont know where u got that "cleaned" walkthrough, but thats wrong, there is not an event with Sophie and Veronica as far as i know... i just checked ur file and u need to add an enter to the phrase "Sophia (Ashley’s Friend)", thats the title to a new character, mate, thats why the next phrase is: - The events: First, meaning the first event for Sophie... better "clean" properly next time, my friend...
Why u even bother mate, his attitude was plain wrong from the start of his long rant... perfect example of a dude thinking a "Donor" badge means they own the freaking place... the reason i didnt answered in the first place. Cheers!