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So yeah, I see what you were going for and appreciate the response. I've pretty much said my piece but I'll just add a couple of things:Now this is feedback I can appreciate and actually do something with:
On one hand, I have to admit that I wasn't planning on adding the sex scene yet, but after amount of patrons voting for the sex scene next, I decided to move it a bit forward as the "stop blueballing" group was getting bigger each update
That being said, Ashley didn't orgasm (did the dialog give you that impression)?
And it was meant to be a bit "akward" as @Lotex said, as they are just experimenting and this was their first time.
To my it's just the first of many more to come and I personally didn't think it would be interesting to make it a overly painfull/bloody experience.
However if it turns out that this is something a lot of people would like to see, I might add it for someone else
About the angle/facial expressions and wanting to see some more of that, I can understand that.
I'll think about adding some more images to the scene!
Thanks for the constructive feedback @Burt Reynolds Mustache & @Lotex
A painful/bloody thing and who wants it will vary from person to person, generally its hot for me to see at least a little indication of the broken hymen or what have you, but I totally get that it is not for everyone.
As for thinking she came, the dialog hinted at that for me, she was very much into it by the end, even screaming out in the finale, which she could have been faking I suppose, I just didn't get that impression.
Now you mentioned it being awkward, as that is what you were going for. I think the only part of the scene where that really came across was in the aftermath, of her running to the bathroom, and the weird silence into laughter. The scene itself, at least as it stands, maybe could use some more fumbling before the main event if that is what you're trying to get across.
And hey, thanks for adding the scene. As one of those who felt like the lead up was getting pretty ridiculous with those two it is good that we can move on to other stuff.