Alright I finally managed to play for an hour uninterrupted, and I'm on board with it, fully understand and agree with folks holding this in high regard.. As others have observed, the beginning is bewildering but it sets the tone for the content to follow. The very early h-scenes were fairly average, didn't draw me in, but I thought the h-scene dialogue writing, positioning/transitions/speed, duration, and points of view (these stand out in particular, some unusual camera positions/angles are used) all ramped up and improved noticeably, even over the hour I played. Hottest Koikatsu h-scenes I have seen so far, normally prefer HS for more realistically animated models, but this is the kind of content that could start to shift that preference. Well done.
Also seems like a LOT of content for a 0.2 release, and I haven't even completed available content. I think I saw a few pages back that you started development in October; if that's the case, bravo on your pace but beware of burnout.
Things that stood out/might have room for improvement:
One thing that stood out was the absence of MC inner monologue or words said; h-scenes are entirely narrated by the partner as dirty talk. It's pretty hot once you get used to it, but I think you miss out on some immersion and intimacy opportunity.
I also found that (partially as a side effect of not having any MC feedback) I found the orgasms surprised me several times, as they came with little to no warning or heads up; I've found that in both real life sex and in porn, giving a heads up to your partner that you're about to cum is both good etiquette and can be quite sexy/sensual. Compounding the lack of warning in the text, there's no screen flashes/shake.
Odd punctuation abounds, with ~ used all over the place, I'm not really sure what effect the writer was going for there. Parts of it read like a teenaged girl's text messages.
I'm very impressed so far, the pacing and gameplay (zero grind, navigate straight from scene to scene, doesn't take itself too seriously) are reminiscent of Solvalley, which is to this day one of my favorite h-games. Most Koikatsu (sp?) models and games don't do much for me, but this is definitely one of the better ones. Keep up the good work,
Cokane0