- Aug 7, 2018
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Ok, thoughts now that I've completed the update:
The Caroline scenes are great but IMO the first vaginal sex scene seems a bit rushed. I just don't buy her not bringing condoms and not raising a fuss if the MC blows in her. Especially after her dialog in previous updates about never having let a guy creampie her before. Also, I really want a normal fully nude missionary scene. Icstor went a little overboard with the doggy. Nice touch with her nude with stockings in her bedroom though. That was nice. Reallly liked her getting horny drunk.
Celia is a BDSM/Femdom wet dream. Love the twist and turns with the final scene of the update, with the MC turning everything back at her. It makes me wonder how things are going to escalate with her in the future. Though kinda wondering how the gartterbelt she has at the end just appears on her though.
As for the neighbors, nice tease but still too early to judge.
Did ICSTOR use a different writer this time? A lot of the dialogue feels off compared to previous updates.
The Caroline scenes are great but IMO the first vaginal sex scene seems a bit rushed. I just don't buy her not bringing condoms and not raising a fuss if the MC blows in her. Especially after her dialog in previous updates about never having let a guy creampie her before. Also, I really want a normal fully nude missionary scene. Icstor went a little overboard with the doggy. Nice touch with her nude with stockings in her bedroom though. That was nice. Reallly liked her getting horny drunk.
Celia is a BDSM/Femdom wet dream. Love the twist and turns with the final scene of the update, with the MC turning everything back at her. It makes me wonder how things are going to escalate with her in the future. Though kinda wondering how the gartterbelt she has at the end just appears on her though.
As for the neighbors, nice tease but still too early to judge.
Did ICSTOR use a different writer this time? A lot of the dialogue feels off compared to previous updates.
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