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I like Bob. There should be a happy end for him and Linda. Although he cockblocked MC several times, he seems like a good human being. He does not deserve a gold digging wife that doesn't really love him.
I like your suggestion, it's an excellent idea.I've got a suggestion - next time, change your flow a bit.
Instead of getting all the renders as one big dump, have him give you them in batches. Then you can overlap some writing and rendering, and not have a big balloon after all the renders are done.
I assume he's got an outline for the story in the version being worked on. You could take this and expand on it, and get some work done before the renders come in, to optimize production even more.
That's one thing I wanted to do different this game. There's a tendency to make the father figures unnecessary/obstacles. Without erotic content for Bob it left me with the conundrum - how do I make players like this character?I like Bob. There should be a happy end for him and Linda. Although he cockblocked MC several times, he seems like a good human being. He does not deserve a gold digging wife that doesn't really love him.
We don't know the backstory of the two, Linda doesn't seem to be a gold digger at all. She just sexually frustrated and probably the love is gone. And honestly? I just don't care about the realistic approach and outcome of this family. Just wanna have lewds with mom dangit!He does not deserve a gold digging wife that doesn't really love him.
For Bob: Did you approve of Caroline opening up her own shop?While I'm working away here I might as well ask everyone - are there any questions you would like to ask Bob or Linda in game?
Anything about their backgrounds, their relationships to other characters etc?
If you let me know over the next few hours I can add them in as questions to these characters for you
AddedFor Bob: Did you approve of Caroline opening up her own shop?
so you are a writer from icstor's team or what ? who the hell are you ?Added
4 scenes left to write. Estimated completion of the writing part is about 70%-75%.
I'm a writer working for ICSTOR. He hired me about a year and a half ago. I've worked on three or four other adult games as well as their writer, prior to being employed by ICSTOR.so you are a writer from icstor's team or what ? who the hell are you ?
MC's maternal grandparents may have many husbands, or husbands outside the MC .... But actually I expect what I think is just fantasy, myth. Hope Linda is a faithful wife until she is attracted to MC.Someone wants to have a talk with you!
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It shows... when they dont fuck with your writing like last timeI'm a writer working for ICSTOR. He hired me about a year and a half ago. I've worked on three or four other adult games as well as their writer, prior to being employed by ICSTOR.
Before that I ran erotic choose your own adventure stories on /b/ back in 2012, and currently write erotic fiction on Anonkun. I've been writing erotica for about 6 years now.
Thanks, I appreciate it. It turned out to just be a technical error when they were doing the copy/pasting into the program. We shouldn't have this problem happen again going forward.It shows... when they dont fuck with your writing like last time
You are doing a good job of writing a story so simple yet managing to not make it boring.
...and you are still here chatting and we will never get Linda update at this rate :'( You said you go back writing it!:confounded:Thanks, I appreciate it.
And you distracted him again now :RarePepe:...and you are still here chatting and we will never get Linda update at this rate :'( You said you go back writing it!:confounded:
Just in case you aren't aware, some among us may not be as emotionally stable as others :relievedface:
I dont consider it cockblocking when its his own wife. And he didnt cockblock. He woke up from sleeping in his own bed!I like Bob. There should be a happy end for him and Linda. Although he cockblocked MC several times, he seems like a good human being. He does not deserve a gold digging wife that doesn't really love him.
Hopefully, MC will be the first to enjoy her anal. :FuckYea::FuckYea::FuckYea:Could you ask her what her favorite position is and if she did anal before and likes it ?