E-Dog

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I like Bob. There should be a happy end for him and Linda. Although he cockblocked MC several times, he seems like a good human being. He does not deserve a gold digging wife that doesn't really love him.
I dont consider it cockblocking when its his own wife. And he didnt cockblock. He woke up from sleeping in his own bed! :cool::cool:
 
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Ennoch

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He woke up from sleeping in his own bed! :cool::cool:
Annoying habit, downright unacceptable! I mean how dare he?? He should have been more considerate! His wife was about to have fun with his son after all. He messed up proper family bonding moment. Very rude, Bob, very rude! Thats why i sold your secrets to the twins!
 

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Annoying habit, downright unacceptable! I mean how dare he?? He should have been considerate! His wife was about to have fun with his son after all. He messed up proper family bonding moment. Very rude, Bob, very rude! Thats why i sold your secrets to the twins!
I just got off of work. Thanks for making me laugh my ass off just now! Nice to have a good note after working 10hrs.

Also, i could picture Archers mother yelling this instead of the ants routine!
 

TheDevian

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I just got off of work. Thanks for making me laugh my ass off just now! Nice to have a good note sfter working 10hrs
Wow, rough day Dude!
Thats why i sold your secrets to the twins!
Would like to have a way to report them to Dad or something. Maybe that could unlock some scenes with them after they have been caught. :evilsmile:
 

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Would like to have a way to report them to Dad or something. Maybe that could unlock some scenes with them after they have been caught. :evilsmile:
Hmmmm.....maybe a team effort against them? We could get the twins in that secret room behind bookcase. We could even get it on film and blackmail the twins for all that money.
 
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Hmmmm.....maybe a team effort against them? We could get the twins in that secret room behind bookcase. We could even get it on film and blackmail the twins for all that money.
Exactly one of the things I was thinking. XD Warped minds think alike!
Hell, that could lead to them double teaming Mom too at some point, she might like that, we get to fuck her and make her happy, while he gets a hand job, or maybe a BJ if he is a good boy... XD
 
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I'm a writer working for ICSTOR. He hired me about a year and a half ago. I've worked on three or four other adult games as well as their writer, prior to being employed by ICSTOR.

Before that I ran erotic choose your own adventure stories on /b/ back in 2012, and currently write erotic fiction on Anonkun. I've been writing erotica for about 6 years now.
no wonder. I have to say, after giving this game a try, the writing, besides small grammar errors, is pretty decent and not over the top silly so to speak for an erotica game.

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for questions to ask chars, i don't know what qualifies or if its already covered or not

Bob - If he is aware of his Secretary attempting to get insider info (after MC finds out about it)? Does he approve of Sara's grounding? How did he and Linda/MC's Mom meet?
Linda - What was she like when younger? Ask her about the book he found/fantasies/etc. Ask Linda later if she might be too harsh on Sara's groundings (can he help get her grades up)? Is she cool with MC taking pics/vids on his phone, ahem, during their 'encounters' ;)?
 
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Also, just some comments on the game overall.

I just recently discovered this game after Dreams of Desire so I am bit late and trying it at maybe the right time if a new update is close. I have to say it's actually pretty decent over all for being WIP, the story setup itself and writing definitely sets it apart. But what seemed really impressive compared with a lot of other renpy games of this type is the inclusion of animation which sets it even further apart (more unique in that way?). The positioning in some of the scenes looked realistic enough too, not overly awkward or "let's show this, I saw it in a porno once". The 3d models used for all the chars are also pretty refreshing, not extreme over the top designs and they actually look semi-related (linda and caroline for example).

that last event though with Linda/Mom char made me lol more than anything for being a huge blue balling scene. Some of the previous comments were requesting anal with Linda, but man that original scene needs a resolution to that interruption for teasing Linda wanting the D real bad without protection "screw the condoms!" *oh hey Bob's/Dad person is back!* - and cue me laughing, sucks for the MC! (pretty much a tease for, whooops we got carried away oh well, i.e. internal shot/cream pie - if this becomes a scene it would nice if it were a choice if MC doesn't want to).

will be interesting to see future updates, would definitely consider donating if development continues
 
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I just recently discovered this game after Dreams of Desire so I am bit late
So just recently. Hmm hmm, have to evaluate whether this shall be deemed as heresy or not.

Welcome aboard regardless. Yes, a new update is inbound soonish. Relatively speaking. And it will be about Linda so picking her to form an opinion through her is fitting :)
will be interesting to see future updates, would definitely consider donating if development continues
It does.
 
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Question for Linda, if there is still room for more, presumably from MC to Mom:

MC: do big boobs run in the family?
Mom: Excuse me?
MC: I've noticed that you, Caroline and Aunt all have curvy bodies but Sara ...

I may be way off but Sara, while she is my favourite character, is quite distinct from the rest of the family, hair colour, skin tone and body shape are different, she's got freckles where no one else has (aftermarket) freckles, i understand this is for variety and because she is younger than the rest of the women in the family but i can't help wondering if Linda hasn't strayed a little before. I suppose Linda could get out of the question easily by saying she's not done growing yet but it seems interesting to me the disparity between her and the rest.

PS i know Linda has a few freckles on her nose but not even close to Sara in terms of volume.
 
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