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It shows... when they dont fuck with your writing like last time
You are doing a good job of writing a story so simple yet managing to not make it boring.
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You are doing a good job of writing a story so simple yet managing to not make it boring.
Thanks, I appreciate it. It turned out to just be a technical error when they were doing the copy/pasting into the program. We shouldn't have this problem happen again going forward.It shows... when they dont fuck with your writing like last time
You are doing a good job of writing a story so simple yet managing to not make it boring.
Kudos goes to the big man himself though - ICSTOR works his ass off on this!
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...and you are still here chatting and we will never get Linda update at this rate :'( You said you go back writing it!:confounded:
Just in case you aren't aware, some among us may not be as emotionally stable as others :relievedface:
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And you distracted him again now :RarePepe:
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I dont consider it cockblocking when its his own wife. And he didnt cockblock. He woke up from sleeping in his own bed!
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Hopefully, MC will be the first to enjoy her anal. :FuckYea::FuckYea::FuckYea:
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She's taken it up the ass before. A woman that wants to be dominated and violated like she does has taken at least 1 dick up the pooper!
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Annoying habit, downright unacceptable! I mean how dare he?? He should have been more considerate! His wife was about to have fun with his son after all. He messed up proper family bonding moment. Very rude, Bob, very rude! Thats why i sold your secrets to the twins!He woke up from sleeping in his own bed!
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I just got off of work. Thanks for making me laugh my ass off just now! Nice to have a good note after working 10hrs.
Also, i could picture Archers mother yelling this instead of the ants routine!
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hey man iv got no questions,but i want to thank you for being a great writer,all those scripts and are so fuckin good.keep it up man.
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Wow, rough day Dude!
Would like to have a way to report them to Dad or something. Maybe that could unlock some scenes with them after they have been caught. :evilsmile:
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Hmmmm.....maybe a team effort against them? We could get the twins in that secret room behind bookcase. We could even get it on film and blackmail the twins for all that money.
Credit for 95% of those goes to ICSTOR, I only put words to the images and outline that he gives me
Exactly one of the things I was thinking. XD Warped minds think alike!
Hell, that could lead to them double teaming Mom too at some point, she might like that, we get to fuck her and make her happy, while he gets a hand job, or maybe a BJ if he is a good boy... XD
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Could we ask Linda whats her wildest sexual experience? (Leaves plenty of room for creative writing!) :angel:Credit for 95% of those goes to ICSTOR, I only put words to the images and outline that he gives me
no wonder. I have to say, after giving this game a try, the writing, besides small grammar errors, is pretty decent and not over the top silly so to speak for an erotica game.
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for questions to ask chars, i don't know what qualifies or if its already covered or not
Bob - If he is aware of his Secretary attempting to get insider info (after MC finds out about it)? Does he approve of Sara's grounding? How did he and Linda/MC's Mom meet?
Linda - What was she like when younger? Ask her about the book he found/fantasies/etc. Ask Linda later if she might be too harsh on Sara's groundings (can he help get her grades up)? Is she cool with MC taking pics/vids on his phone, ahem, during their 'encounters'
?Also, just some comments on the game overall.
I just recently discovered this game after Dreams of Desire so I am bit late and trying it at maybe the right time if a new update is close. I have to say it's actually pretty decent over all for being WIP, the story setup itself and writing definitely sets it apart. But what seemed really impressive compared with a lot of other renpy games of this type is the inclusion of animation which sets it even further apart (more unique in that way?). The positioning in some of the scenes looked realistic enough too, not overly awkward or "let's show this, I saw it in a porno once". The 3d models used for all the chars are also pretty refreshing, not extreme over the top designs and they actually look semi-related (linda and caroline for example).
that last event though with Linda/Mom char made me lol more than anything for being a huge blue balling scene. Some of the previous comments were requesting anal with Linda, but man that original scene needs a resolution to that interruption for teasing Linda wanting the D real bad without protection "screw the condoms!" *oh hey Bob's/Dad person is back!* - and cue me laughing, sucks for the MC! (pretty much a tease for, whooops we got carried away oh well, i.e. internal shot/cream pie - if this becomes a scene it would nice if it were a choice if MC doesn't want to).
will be interesting to see future updates, would definitely consider donating if development continues
I just recently discovered this game after Dreams of Desire so I am bit late and trying it at maybe the right time if a new update is close. I have to say it's actually pretty decent over all for being WIP, the story setup itself and writing definitely sets it apart. But what seemed really impressive compared with a lot of other renpy games of this type is the inclusion of animation which sets it even further apart (more unique in that way?). The positioning in some of the scenes looked realistic enough too, not overly awkward or "let's show this, I saw it in a porno once". The 3d models used for all the chars are also pretty refreshing, not extreme over the top designs and they actually look semi-related (linda and caroline for example).
that last event though with Linda/Mom char made me lol more than anything for being a huge blue balling scene. Some of the previous comments were requesting anal with Linda, but man that original scene needs a resolution to that interruption for teasing Linda wanting the D real bad without protection "screw the condoms!" *oh hey Bob's/Dad person is back!* - and cue me laughing, sucks for the MC! (pretty much a tease for, whooops we got carried away oh well, i.e. internal shot/cream pie - if this becomes a scene it would nice if it were a choice if MC doesn't want to).
will be interesting to see future updates, would definitely consider donating if development continues
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So just recently. Hmm hmm, have to evaluate whether this shall be deemed as heresy or not.
Welcome aboard regardless. Yes, a new update is inbound soonish. Relatively speaking. And it will be about Linda so picking her to form an opinion through her is fitting
It does.